Rebirth**********

The writing is good, the content is close to reality, not inconsistent or artificial, and the character creation is also good.

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It's good, but maybe I didn't understand the whole story after reading it, or maybe I am the eldest brother in our family. The male protagonist's sister makes me feel particularly uncomfortable. I am your sister and I am your master. I have always ignored my brother when he does naughty things. But once he damages property, it is not because of carelessness, then he must be beaten, and he must know that this kind of thing is precious and cannot be destroyed just because you want to. But the male protagonist's sister gave me a kind of S feeling, she seemed to like to torture people. Maybe it's because of my experience. Anyway, we don't have anything like this in our family. It makes me feel like a lunatic. It's awesome that we can reconcile with this kind of relationship the next day. Moreover, the money was earned by the male protagonist's 3,000 yuan. The male protagonist took out too much, so he should keep it to a situation of no more and no less. He can do whatever he wants and leave himself a start-up capital of 5 million. To put it bluntly, he will be in a state of half-death when doing anything. Maybe I'm being selfish? Anyway, leaving 10 million to your family is enough for the time being. Why not use the remaining amount as start-up capital? They have made more money. If they wait until they are adults and reveal it, what can they say? Could it be that my sister could still hit him with a broom? I can't stand it anymore. As an adult, I have shown my ability, but the result is the same as when I was a child. I just flipped the table and paid a fixed amount every month. I will not accompany you anymore.

I'm actually the first commenter

Will things get better starting from the second year of high school? Junior high school is too young and progress is too slow. Unless you accelerated your progress in high school I know that by changing the perspective, first becomes third. When are you going to fill that hole and save the second female lead (photo) I care about this very much @ borrow the world's two liang ink dye flowers fall

The progress is too slow, I hope to write a thousand chapters. The author's writing is good and it's easy to read.

It's okay for the male protagonist to take care of the female protagonist as a father at the beginning and not react. Why should a chapter with Lily tendencies be included in the middle?

The writing is very good, but there are some language errors in some places, maybe because the author changed the first place to the third place.

It's pretty good, very sweet, very everyday.

After reading for a while, I wonder if junior high school is too young, or at least high school. I hope the author can speed up the pace in the middle and high school stages.

It's quite beautiful. The author's writing is really good. It really has the power to touch people's hearts. Especially the plot about the old policeman really touched me. Come on, I believe this book will be popular [laughing][laughing][laughing]

What I see is that the single female protagonist Xiao Tian is currently very suitable. The heroine becomes more and more like a yandere as she goes on. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's a very good book. Maybe because it's the first book, the writing style is relatively immature, the description is weak, and some punctuation marks are wrong, but overall it's good. At least I think the creativity is very good.

Very good, very beautiful

Looks good, come on!

Five stars, this is a good book. The female protagonist was so dazzling before her rebirth, but the male protagonist was very ordinary, causing him to have low self-esteem. After rebirth, the male protagonist meets the female protagonist early, and because of campus bullying, the male protagonist sympathizes with the female protagonist. (The male protagonist suffered from mental problems due to his childhood experiences, and split himself into three subjects: "a small self, a real self, and an old self.") The heroine is brought into the childhood of the hero, so that he can be kind to the heroine and make up for the love he lacked when he was a child in Luo Jianjia. Because of this, I began to fear and avoid the heroine's love.

It is recommended to add a title of redemption

So pretty, so sweet and spicy

It can't be an autobiography, right [crying]

Settings are OK

Let's update another chapter, everyone in the comment area can do anything😭😭😭

It's nice, but why is the book gone?

It looks good, but the cover is not very attractive and cannot attract readers. The title feels good, but it is too simple and clear.

I like it😍, it's a pretty daily routine, but there are too few chapters, so you can save it for reading.

It's a very good book. I haven't read this kind of daily love story in a long time. In many places, some words were mentioned that did not appear before. I thought I had missed it, and I didn't see them mentioned before.

Well written, it purifies the soul.

Not bad, not bad. I'm curious about Xing Fuyan's previous life. I quite like her personally. I hope it will have a good ending.

Very well written and detailed

It feels very real and well written!

Don't say much, just keep chasing.