Joined the Company, After Dating My Senior Sister

The plot is too blunt. It's like cutting fine steel into pieces and speaking it with characters. The plot concept itself is still passable. And this is a novel, an online novel. Don't commit the youth disease. The writing style has become a bit more like a text love game. This won't work. There are also too many personal thoughts incorporated into the article. Read the book yourself first, learn it and then write it in sentences that can be understood by others. The final evaluation is that the story itself is good, study it carefully first, and then write it well.

Sometimes my mind can't turn around

Very pretty.

How shameless! Extremely proud!

I don't know why, I just couldn't read it. The reason may be that it's a bit boring, but if you think about it, it's still well written. Maybe this book is not suitable for me.