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In my personal opinion, this book has a serious and rigorous style, which is very readable and immersive. The character creation is just right, the description of the environment and other content is very full and the words are excellent, and the passages about the upper class's struggle for power and the lives of ordinary people are also very vividly depicted. At the same time, as a star fanfic, the star elements in this book are pure enough and presented very naturally. If I were to choose one part of the book that I still have doubts about, I don't really understand the purpose of including the console. However, if the author has arrangements for this or is concerned about it, just ignore this paragraph. (This problem may also be caused by me reading a little too quickly and overlooking the plot) But in short, the writing is very good, the plot is very good, and the fandom is very good. I give it five stars.

There are so many foreshadowings that it's a bit unsettling, but it's mainly Gray Wind that attracts me, and I'm looking forward to the future plots.

Come on, the interesting subject matter, concept, and emotional line give me a little bit of a feeling of God coming... I look forward to more eye-catching designs and ingenious ideas that resonate with readers' emotions.

The words are natural and not as stiff as some works. The multi-dimensional expansion of the group portrait is also very interesting, just like watching a TV series. The only drawback is that it's too short and not enough to look at. Big cheers for the author! ! ! Tell me what I think: The author's writing style is restrained, the article is of high quality, and the more you read it, the more interesting it becomes. When describing characters' emotions, straightforward words such as "sadness, longing, sadness" are rarely used. Instead, actions, details, and silence are used to describe the emotions, hiding the emotions in the blank space and leaving it to the readers to empathize. To be honest, this way of writing is a bit "foul", and the stamina is so great that people can't get out of it for a long time. Let's wait for you to explore the specific examples (no spoilers [crying]) The novel combines grand narrative and individual narrative very well. There are many works written in this way on the market, but there are really not many that can harmoniously integrate the two and read without a sense of separation. (I must admit that this article does have some jumps, but the picture is also very strong, isn't it?) So the author really doesn't need to belittle himself, keep up the good work! The novel has the same name as the game, and is also based on the game body and DLC. However, the author has added a lot of his own adaptations and innovations. The overall logic is self-consistent, and some details do not need to be taken too seriously. But what I want to complain about is: Dilian's luck is indeed a bit unlucky. There are Curators + Pioneers at the beginning, as well as the L Star Gate that is ready to use right out of the box. This newbie is a little envious, super envious. That's it for writing this, bye~

Give me five stars, come on, the author.

Overall, it's good. The character's characteristics are described clearly and three-dimensionally. Some unnecessary descriptions can be reduced appropriately. But if you want to write dozens or millions of words, you basically don't need to touch them. These descriptions can also give the audience a buffer period and are more atmospheric. Metaphors and science fiction terms can be appropriately added with awa.

It's finally time for the author to finish the college entrance examination! Waiting for the party's big victory (bushi). Update soon [please update], the donkeys of the production team have gained weight after resting like this [laughing evilly]

Come on, I'll be waiting for you in one year There are still a few months left, I wish you success

The writing is excellent, the emotions of the characters are well portrayed, the determination to explore the starry sky, the various scenes of the market in the cradle of the homeland, and the descriptions of the many contradictions are very delicate👍

After reading the first few chapters, I feel they are well written. Let's see what happens next.

The author's additions and polishes to the text are great, and he likes to describe the plot of Xiao Hui (as expected, Qunxing can do it well with his hard work)

Woohoo, the author is too short, when will the update be released, meow Xiaohuijiang [crying]

I really like the little gray part🥰It's ok [sending my heart][I also strongly recommend][please update] Forgot to mention, other places are also available, I finally found something good [I almost cried], recommended

It's very delicate, but a little uncomfortable. I remember seeing it a long time ago, and I don't know where the old version went.

How long until Xiao Hui appears [what]