HP: Destined Death, Boy

It's great to watch. I would like to give you some advice. Voldemort shouldn't be too powerful. It's best to be slightly weaker than Dumbledore before the decisive battle with the protagonist. Don't be too strong in the final battle. It should be at a level that can be easily defeated by the protagonist. By the way, as for the villain, it's enough to only strengthen Voldemort. You can write some original villains, but not too much. Too many original characters will make it uncomfortable to read. Although fan fiction needs some innovation, the most important thing is the original content. When writing, be careful not to deviate from the theme.

Rating so low? It shouldn't be [what] It's a very interesting parent-generation perspective, with a little bit of old headband settings added. Although I don't know the details, it doesn't have much impact. The most interesting thing is that the author's cold humor from time to time is really funny. It's really funny to watch it come to you at once.

I really like the author's sense of humor. Some of the jokes and the heroine's character in the article really feel like they break Sif's inherent pathos and directly create new flesh and blood for him. I love it so much. It can be said to be my favorite book of all time. Although I don't understand another world view at all, it is really smooth to read. Compared with other empty parent-generation plots, the plot of this book is so full that it makes people cry.

It's obvious that the author is getting better and better as he writes, so keep up the good work.

It's beautiful. I really like the heroine's character.

There is a problem with the Ring of Magic. The DLC trailer clearly states that Marika is not a native of the Junction. The Queen of Night Eyes cannot be sure that she is a sister. Marika already had an heir before coming to the Junction. Mersemer is an example. Marika is a rare person. The introduction of the rare person is that she comes from outside the Junction. She was already a queen before coming. The giant is a native of the Junction and has the Storm King lineage. Just look at the lifespan of the people in the Junction. Pure immortal species.

I can only say that it is very interesting. In fact, I don't know about junctions and destined deaths. I have never been exposed to this content. I don't even know whether it is a movie or a novel. Generally, I just pass the excessive derivative content that I don't understand. For this reason, I have deleted many books. I don't understand the world of the heroine in this one, but I don't know why I can continue to read it. Maybe the author writes well, or this book is destined for me. I don't know how to say it. Because really, I have deleted many similar books, whether they are HP or other themes, whether they are high scores or low scores, because there are too many other world lines mixed in, and then I don't understand it, I am confused, and I don't have the patience to read it. But I don't understand this one either, and it takes up a lot of plot in the text, but I can still read it, and I am looking forward to the next content. It's strange. And I don't like the content of "Junction" anymore. When I saw the author's update here, I didn't plan to make up for it. I'm still confused about the heroine's world line, but I don't intend to get in touch with the heroine's world. I'm really not interested, but I'm not disgusted with the content written by the author. It's really strange.

It's not OOC at all. The connection between the magic ring and HP is very good. Although as a Lupine fan, I feel a little sad to see the heroine's attitude towards Lupine, but I can't stand it. The cookies with Severus are really delicious, and the love line is not impatient, not impatient, and smooth. This is very good.

The writing is pretty good, but is the timeline wrong? I remember that Voldemort had not yet been "disfigured" at this time, and McGonagall should still be just a student, and Dumbledore should be a teacher rather than the principal.

The writing is quite good, the original plot is quite interesting, not OOC, but is HP's overall strength too high? I think a Godskin Apostle can kill all the Death Eaters...

Come on come on! ! ! The author's writing is humorous and witty, and his writing style is very suitable for Harry Potter fans! I wonder if the heroine can use the colorful magic and prayers in the magic circle in the later stage! There are also all kinds of war ashes, I'm really looking forward to it! Will always support!

The author writes better and better

It's very beautiful, but it's discontinued, which is so sad. It's really, really beautiful. The different systems are integrated very well, and the plot and emotional development are very smooth. When will the teacher come back and update? [Crying][crying][crying]

The literature taught by Young Si teaches is not about salvation but companionship. It is not so natural and superior, but the family love that gradually deepens in daily life.

Why do you have to stop here for a week, you bastard!

Do you know how attractive your book is to a person who plays Huo Yi and Fahuan at the same time? Please write quickly, please [crying]

Halfway through this novel, I couldn't help but read the explanation of the Ring of Law, and now I really, really want to play with the Old Touhou Ring and Huo Yi [crying], but my device can't carry it, sooooooooooooo [crying]

It's nice to watch, and it suits my taste from beginning to end. The plot, character relationships and interactions are very interesting, and the characters' personalities are well developed. I like the heroine very much. The integration of the old headband and HP is super awesome (after reading a few chapters, I was attracted by the setting of the old headband, and even went to complete the plot myself). This is my favorite HP fanfic that I have seen so far. It makes me watch it without being cliché.

The writing is exquisite, the plot is reasonable, the imagination is imaginative, and it is full of old men's rings and other various jokes. Why is the rating so low? It shouldn't be. So I'm here to give you a high score. I suspect that the author has written too little. You should turn into a pallu and click on all the manual work, and then go to the computer and blast hundreds of thousands more to feed the readers (viciously) Love comes from Hufflepuff in the kitchen [love] [love] [love] [love]

The writing style is very delicate, just like free verse. You will find that sometimes the language has to be described very gently, like a first-class love affair. If you have played or understood Elden's Circle, you will understand.

The relationship between the three of them is so well written.

I like it so much—— What is this? Marcia and Sri Lanka! Cute, take a bite. What's this? La Guima! Cute, take a bite. What's this? Lily! Cute, take a bite. So cute, eat them all! When will Madam update? The thought of tying the knot with just a few more chapters makes my heart beat like a knife: (

I have never played Ring of Magic, but the author's description is particularly fascinating. While reading the book, I got to know the world view of Elden's Ring of Magic. The cp with Snape is also different from the fanfics I have read in the past. In the past, I couldn't stand the kind of cp with Snape, because it was either too outrageous or the heartthrob treated Snape like a dog. However, the story development and emotional development of this book are very delicate. I love to read it and the author is also very interesting. I like it very much. By the way, there is no setting like the White Devil or Bad Lily, which is satisfying.

I think this book is super well written. First of all, I have never liked the fusion of multiple novels with different systems. First, the reading threshold becomes higher. If you don't know one of the systems, you may not be able to understand it. However, this novel avoids this problem very well. Even if you don't know Elden's Circle, you can understand it. The second world view will be very complicated and feels very strange. When different energy systems are put together, you can't avoid comparing which system is stronger. For example, Western magic and Eastern immortality are incompatible with each other and appear nondescript. However, the author has made a good arrangement to integrate the Elden magic ring and the HP wizard system. It does not appear obtrusive, but makes the system more complete and full. Even two points in the novel. Secondly, the author's writing style is very good and makes people immersed in it. Don't you think this is some elementary school student's writing style? , Is like the one written by Xiaobai, a classmate who likes to read novels in middle school. It has more texture and is a mature and complete novel. The first chapter can attract readers. Some paragraphs are well written, unlike some authors who use a bunch of specious and gorgeous rhetoric to turn into meaningless and arty garbage. At the same time, the little humor that appears can make people laugh without feeling that the novel's writing style is playful and glib.

Full marks. This may have taken care of the fact that the setting of the hp reader ring is a bit slow. The restoration of the history of the border area is really the same as just playing the ring to explore the plot. I look forward to seeing the reminiscences of Ajie and Meimei in the future.

It's very interesting. The protagonist is very clear, and it doesn't feel like a running story. I really like this book. I tied it in one night. My wife is so good at writing, and I feel that the world view is well integrated. I'm just a little curious as to why the heroine doesn't kill Tom directly (it should be possible) [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

Even if you haven't played Ring of Magic, you can still enjoy watching it. It's a very good and new plot.

The description of some details is very warm and I like it very much. I even learned about Elden's Ring specifically for this purpose. I thought Marcia would be a character in the game, but I couldn't find any relevant information. It seems to be original. I am looking forward to the follow-up.

It looks great, good luck to the author!

I love this setting so much. It is a perfect fusion of my favorite novels and top-1 games! I look forward to more works from my wife!