Traveling Through Time to Cultivate Immortality: Starting from Becoming a Top-Level Furnace

The traditional rhythm of passing the mystery at the beginning, the more you watch in the later stage, the more exciting you will be [hold] (PS: You need to use your brain to watch, suitable for saving Ichimoku) The system and protagonist settings are very novel [salute] Various counter-routines are also emerging one after another [blowing kiss] The only flaw is that the CP progress is too slow [angry] [angry] [angry] Even the author himself is anxious to death! I like that I can give Yuguan a perfect ending later [almost crying]

Good looking. Yuguan is so cute and stupid. I only wanted to play 1v1, but these three people are so cute together. It's so funny to be jealous. You three, just have a good time.

Specifically, the writing feels like a step-by-step process, but I don't really understand the part where Concubine Hua reveals herself. It may be too excessive and not very natural, which makes me a little bit weird when watching it. I don't know how to put it. And other parts are okay so far. Then I don't know how to put it in terms of the system. I may not be very good at writing this emotion. After all, I am a novice. In addition, the relationship is mainly emotional drama, and the emotional drama is a large part of it. This emotional drama gives me a feeling of love at first sight. In fact, most of the two male protagonists I have read in this kind of novel are love at first sight, maybe because it is really difficult to write, and then they are omitted. Then the force value setting always gives me a very strange feeling. Putting aside these, in fact, this article is well written. It is more suitable for those who are tired of reading other novels recently and want to find something new. I feel like I'm getting more and more bored as I watch the later part. I don't know what's going on. I feel very powerless when I watch the later part. It's a bit like a routine. I just do something inexplicably and then hold a beauty pageant. I really can't understand it.

It's very beautiful, but there are too few. The author will continue to work hard and encourage [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

It looks good [love] [love] [love]. I hope Yuguan Xiuwei will be repaired soon and become more powerful. The author will update more and more. I like it very much [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

Very good, the content of this book is fascinating, keep it up

Nice! The setting is novel, I haven't had this bright feeling for a long time

Not bad, thank you to the author! ! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Dear author, your writing is very good, but can you write less sub-CPs ((つ≧▽≦)つ

No, no, no one has rated such a powerful book. It's really beautiful.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Beautiful, very beautiful

Very nice, but the author is a bit abstract

So when will the protagonist meet Jin Xiaoxiao and the others [Thinking]

I really like this plot! 🤩🤩🤩

Like (* ⁰̷̴͈꒨⁰̷̴͈)=͟͟͞͞➳❤Watching 1V2 for the first time (ˊ˘ˋ*)♡

The author writes well.

I can't help it. It's so funny. I feel like I'm watching a hundred thousand cold jokes [face covering]

Nice! Just looking at it reminds me of Identity V/I'm a little curious if the author plays Identity V? The fifth personality activates kakaka

The author is great, the book is very beautiful, I look forward to more exciting things, come on!

A great first book to add to your bookshelf! Worth a look!

I've just watched half of it, it's very interesting, but sometimes the internet jokes are a bit stiff, but everything else is fine. I've just watched half of it, and now I support Prince [shy][shy]

It's beautiful, it's beautiful, it's really beautiful. Say the important things three times [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]