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The author writes randomly, has shallow knowledge, doesn't understand anything, and does random things.

Is it just to install 13 Wen, or is it a rocket upgrade? Maoshan on the surface is actually Dragon and Tiger Mountain! !

How can I put it, the male protagonist is a typical Long Aotian, the kind of male protagonist who has spent thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi and has not bullied young people who are poor, so there are often very embarrassing plots, just like a crooked-mouthed Dragon King who pretends to be cool in front of you from time to time. Sometimes I want to sew up the male protagonist's brain to stop him from pretending, and it makes my skin crawl. [Pauses face] I finally got rid of the crooked-mouthed Dragon King, and then another crooked-mouthed Dragon King appeared. I really want to grease the male lead.

Excessive grooming!

Eat well

Super handsome

Why only 50 chapters?

Extremely verbose [pinch one's lips]

56 Pieces of advice to persuade me to quit

Too "beautiful", "not at all" Holy Mother

Putting all the plot together in such a hasty manner, there is no buffer zone. The sense of substitution is not strong and he is always out of place. The plot still has many flaws and is incoherent! Come on, support!

He was obviously a closed disciple, how could he become a senior brother? What kind of bullshit talismans are there? As long as you have enough mana, hundreds of thousands or millions of talismans can be combined into one talisman. What kind of monsters can't be killed?

There are shortcomings, but try your best