The Sea Queen's Script in a Shonen Manga

The teacher's writing is very good and delicate, and the heroine is also well portrayed. I am looking forward to the scene of my brother's resurrection and hope it won't be unfinished. I must work hard, it's best to update it. I'm also looking forward to seeing Taoyuan baby lose his vest. I can't imagine what it will be like [shy][shy]

I've been watching it for so long that I can't remember if there are any degrading or dirty words about women. There shouldn't be. The protagonist's character is complete, the story line is complete, the plot logic is online, the writing is also good, and the Dazai and Chuuya lines are very delicious! It would be nice if there were more daily CP extras. One star is deducted for ① It's too abusive to the protagonist. The abuse in this article is all about the protagonist. Although it helps to shape the character, the abuse is sad [I almost cried] ② The main reason is that the Tuosi line is not easy to eat. Wakaya and Dazai are evenly matched, taking turns to have the upper hand. He is basically not aggrieved, and the emotional abuse comes and goes. But Tuosi felt that he didn't love her, or in other words, there was love but not enough. Compared with the love of the other two, it seemed even shallower. I also find it incredible that Tuosi was chosen as the protagonist. I feel that although she cares about liking her, she is not that into it yet. I think this line is more reasonable. (Not like Gogori (Hey. Thinking back on why I wanted to give 3.5 Stars at the time ③ The character of the protagonist is too centered around purgatory. I know it is a setting, but she lacks independence throughout the whole story. If purgatory is removed, her personality and life will be incomplete. I think this is not very sound, and the author did not give her the possibility to make up for the incompleteness until the end. So although Dazai Chuuya's two lines are delicious, I have doubts about whether they can bring new possibilities to the protagonist. It's a fly in the ointment.

Who knows? The plot of this book gives me the feeling that the author has grown up (purely a compliment). The lines of the three strategy characters are all well written and have a strong sense of pull. It is not a brainless strategy text, and there is nothing OOC about it. Moreover, it can be seen from the details that the author has read formula books. Five stars! I've read it three times, with three male protagonists acting out three different personalities in three different routes (facing Dazai, the female protagonist, is the closest to reality). I feel like I read three books at once, hahahaha, our born S lady Momozono Kouka

In a word, absolutely! The heroine is super good, and the original characters are not OOC either. The setting is also very novel. The only bad thing is that the author likes the text so much that it is really uncomfortable. The number of words is only changed a little every day, and the donkeys in the production team will not rest like you.

I'm really looking forward to the male protagonist's reaction when he learns Yachika's identity later. If the teacher is free, can you write a movie about Yachika's life in Demon Slayer? The teacher wrote very well

Chuuya is such a good baby... He's so good, so good. Mom touches (touches) him. According to the plot, he might be the first one to be captured, and also the first one to choose to forgive after knowing the girl's true purpose? (*´ｽ) This method of healing is the best for girls after experiencing the death of the most important person😔But maybe after the relationship is confirmed, purgatory will be resurrected, and the real brother is here! Boy! If you want to be with your sister, you have to go through this hurdlejpg Fei Jia is really not a good person! (No derogatory meaning) How about the early success of the strategy to make the girl fly away (? It seems good to see his ideals failed and shattered) (Hey) According to this man's character, I feel that he will only be full of affection when the plan fails or is about to be implemented. I guess he is the last one among the three male protagonists to full affection. Dazai is a pure coward, even the girl on his side is a boy (boy) looking forward to him being stunned when he learns his true identity hahh It's a bit different from the text x At first, I thought she was a heroine who pursues strength and ability to uphold justice. I didn't expect that she was a girl who wanted to resurrect an important person so she didn't have a high sense of morality and was about to become the queen of the sea😽 But it's also very delicious, Yamiami

It is a good article that can definitely be rated as 9 points. The heroine is a little bitter with Feijia, but she is also very happy with Chuuya and Dazai. Especially Chuuya is so sweet. The heroine is particularly distressing. The author has done a good job of integrating Taisho and Fumino!

Cool! It's so cool! I have always found it a difficult IP to write about. There are so many characters with so many different schemings. This book written by the teacher is simply amazing. The plot is very good, and the connection between the relationship and stance is very appropriate. It is very enjoyable from the beginning to the end. Xiaoba's portrayal is amazing and his state is very vivid. I really shed tears when reading some chapters later. He also has good control over the three parties of the target. Each one has its own unique points of enjoyment, and "Too Many Foods" can really be called the best, and the description of the heart is also very good. Teacher, I will support you forever! ! ! ❤️

Looks good! How can Yaqianhua be so cute! ? No ooc! Between these two script teams, there is also a McDonald's-like Gogol. Little Chuya will not be without a wife, right~~[I understand]

I wasn't really prepared to watch it. But after reading the reviews of this book, I clicked in. I have a deep prejudice against this kind of "Queen of the Sea and King of the Sea" books. [Cover face] But once I clicked in, it was actually fine. , I read a dozen chapters at the beginning and skipped a dozen chapters, and the following chapters became more and more interesting. It's not the kind of strategy I had in mind for 10 people. Only in the finale can the person you want to be resurrected be resurrected. [Facepalm] There are three people to conquer, and two of them have already reached the target, and one is still missing. Looking forward to looking forward to it. [Sending Hearts] Looking forward to resurrecting my brother.