Youth Love Stories Have Nothing to Do with Beautiful Girls

Maybe it's my personal problem. I feel that the emotions and plot are developing too fast. Please slow down and fill in some writing and plot to expand. The subject matter is very attractive, but it is written too fast. For example, Lan Yi's father only roughly described a prototype and then disappeared. From Lan Yi's narration alone, I did not realize the scum of my father. It was only when he left her and his partner and ran away that I felt that this was really not a thing. When Lan Yi said that his father was more like the feeling of accepting and abandoning her, this paragraph can be focused on describing, writing more before and after, or laying out two foreshadowings in the front. The male protagonist can also rely on more side descriptions to highlight him. More situational plots are better. The male protagonist's confession is always a bit empty, and I can't empathize very well (scratching my head, anyway, please come on, author＾▽＾

It's full of realistic feelings, but there's really no way to refuse the current fantasy of three beautiful girls falling from the sky. [Admiration] I personally think it's very beautiful. The protagonist is very distinctive, and I saw a reflection of myself in him. I hope the author will work hard! [Sending Hearts]

It is profound but not profound. Each character has his or her own personal story. Some of the truths learned during the growth of youth are revealed through the story to be both wrong and right. It really resonates with an introverted character like me.

It's very good, but it's a light novel and story type, so it's not just for nothing, it's getting sweeter and sweeter.

Not bad, a light novel about Harmono taste Although many of the protagonist's choices are unsatisfactory, this is also the flavor of youth. However, due to the subject matter, campus Japanese youth can basically only have party fights and cannot have multiple female protagonists. It's a pity [angry] otherwise there is a high probability that you will suddenly find out that your sister is not your biological child, ushering in a delicious second wave of family love/couple love conflicts

The writing skills of new writers have indeed improved visibly, and the stories are not bad, although I don't have such youth [face covering]

Yes, I have a lot of life insights.

I really enjoyed watching it, but it's a pity that it's over. I wish I had come earlier.

My favorite book is [Learned]