Pirate: Nani! Did You Kidnap Ace?

What a great guy [covers face], he said it awkwardly and sweetly, progress is also very fast, he is really a favorite of the group, haha, come on, I hope the next writing will be smoother

It's really super good-looking. Don't miss it, One Piece fans. It's a very novel yet reasonable setting. The personalities of the three ASL brothers are really well shaped. I feel like everyone (referring to all the characters in One Piece) It's not OOC at all. It's like I got a glimpse of the beautiful and pure world of pirates like Motoko. The heroine's personality is super nice and warm. I really love it. There's also a natural emotional line. Zundu is very easy to read and the transition is very natural. The writing is super good and very humorous. It gives me a sense of the beauty of early pirates. I came here from Zoro's article. Because I was anxious to read the article, I didn't comment much. I plan to write all my love for the author in a long review. If I am lucky enough to meet the author in the third dimension. Big, I think I will give you my favorite song "Binx's Wine". Madam, your writing is really great, but don't put too much pressure and burden. Fandom is the bridge between us and love. I hope it can bring you more happiness, and don't care about the bad comments. You have worked very hard and are great. I really like watching your fandom. Walk and stay up late to catch up. Be confident, Baozi, it is really great. Thank you for your words that bring bright sunshine to my life.

The author has a very thoughtful idea and has a certain understanding of One Piece. At least for now, it seems that there is not much damage to the original setting of One Piece, and the writing style is also constantly improving, which is worthy of encouragement! I also hope that the author can continue to update! At least I can keep reading, the logic is on point, and the emotional aspects are also well written. The main reason is that the author listens to his advice and is easy to get along with! So here's the five-star review! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] I hope Ace can really meet An Shiyuan, and he will have no regrets in his life from now on!

The setting is very novel, and the heroine is the favorite of the group, but the plot develops too smoothly, and it feels like cheating. When she first met Ace, the heroine was 20 years old and Ace was 10 years old. The heroine regarded Ace as her future boyfriend. Personally, I felt that this kind of behavior was somewhat unacceptable.

The writing in Da Da is truly astonishing, with flowing clouds and flowing water, wonderful paintings, and wonderful pens that produce flowers. The pen sweeps thousands of troops, the pen brings flowers, and the strokes produce brilliance. It is written in one go, and every word is precious, hearty, vivid, and lifelike. Like life, vivid and lifelike, excellent writing style, quick thinking, erudite, talented, rich in knowledge, concise and concise, well-spoken, outstanding, superb, breathtaking, majestic, and powerful. Swallowing mountains and rivers, overwhelming mountains and seas, turbulent waves, thunderous waves, thrilling, sweeping thousands of armies, shocking the earth, inserting every opportunity, writing fluently, perfect, impeccable, unparalleled, flying dragons and phoenixes, sharp writing, humorous writing style, elegant writing, clear levels, clear concepts, gorgeous joy, wonderful, full of wit, short and concise, profound meaning, simple and unpretentious, smooth writing, and full of characters! ! !

This fanfic about Ace is very well written and very good. It makes up for my regret that Ace should not die in the war at the top. It makes me feel deeply involved. It is a novel that I like very much [almost crying] [almost crying]. Ace is so gentle and careful and deserves all the love. Thank you to the author for being able to satisfy my desire for Ace's growth process when he comes into contact with Luffy. , And An Shiyuan, a heroine full of great love, came to love Ace and save the world. I was depressed for a long time because of Ace's death, and then I came to read the fanfic to fill the vacancy in my heart. I felt very happy. I also really want to see it with my own eyes through the second dimension. Ace also told him personally that he has a lot of love and that his existence is very beautiful. The author made the image in One Piece very similar to the original work. The author must have put in a lot of effort. Thank you for your hard work [Adore][Adore][Adore]

Come on, author, let China's popularity spread throughout the pirate world

The love between the two is really sweet. It's great, but the plot is a bit slow.

It's very interesting. I will keep reading this book. Good luck to the lovely author [please give me more updates]

Read it all in one go! Come on! Nice!

Ace being the Pirate King is a big regret and it's also my regret. I'm really happy to be able to calm down here. [Blows a kiss] Ace, it's great to see you happy! Remember you are never alone, there are many people who love you and support you behind you [Love] I wish you peace and joy for the rest of your life. Love yourself well [Sending Hearts]

So pretty! I like it very much. It has Xiao Motoko's feelings about her family and country, her love affair with Ace, and the family ties of the Whitebeard Pirates. I think they are all very good. There are also highlights of Xiao Yuanzi's shouting during the war and the arrival of the Huaxia Kingdom! ! The author is great! !

Looks good, looks good, likes it

I can only say two words: beautiful

Well, it's just... So beautiful! Read it all in one go. Big update soon

It's quite new for me. It's the first time I read a One Piece fanfic, especially Ace. It seems that no matter how indifferent a person is, he becomes a fool after falling in love [smirk] [snicker] [smirk]. It can be regarded as making up for Motoko's regret. She also worked really hard. You should be happy.

It would be great if the CP is Marco

Not bad, very pretty

Really good looking, recommended

The new book is so beautiful, haha ​​[sending my heart][sending my heart][please update]

CP Ace and many pairs of sub-CPs have been written (not balance literature, the sub-CPs are not particularly detailed) The progress is fast and the pace is not draggy. The writing is very good and commendable. The characters are OOC but they are all humanistic, so it doesn't matter. It's slightly OOC but the tone is well controlled. The character creation is very full and the emotions are very delicate. All in all, it's a book worth reading.

It's really beautiful [adoration] [adoration] Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people… The plot is very novel and unobtrusive. It's perfect for passing the time [laughing]

Nice! Hope it doesn't hurt.

Love it so much. Highly recommend.

Very beautiful, the author is also very active

It's super sweet. The author could also write a text about Marco.

It's pretty good. It's tied in two days.

Very nice, very beautiful [sending heartfelt wishes]

Hey hey hey, nice looking

Anyway, I like it very much