Just Keep Dying, and Then You Will Be Number One in the World.

The writing is very good. First of all, the writing style is right there. It can be said that it is better than most of the fan fiction on Tomato (no downvoting, just simple narration. If any book friends think it is wrong, you can share with me in the comments what you think the writing style is better. I will be grateful). Compared with the usual clichéd and brainless shows on Tomato, this heroine is just an ordinary person. In the two worlds where she started, she was weak and a passer-by. She was killed as soon as she appeared, disgraced, bullied by gangsters, caught, imprisoned, and bullied. When you first learn martial arts, you won't be able to master it immediately, and your brain isn't particularly bright. But she also has tenacity, and you can see that even so, she has our modern thoughts, whether it's her occasional kindness or her disapproval of some behaviors in the martial arts world. However, she seems to be being assimilated, and the author has reflected on this process. I have to wait for the author to update it later, but for now, I give it full marks.

To be honest, the writing is really good, but the writing is so good that it makes the reader feel too depressed. After reading these chapters, I don't know where the heroine's turning point is. She is almost being domesticated and assimilated. I know that ordinary people are like this, but they will come back from the dead. Why not be crazy? Anyway, she will be resurrected. Sure enough Anyone who can be the protagonist is not an ordinary person. I would have killed people like crazy. I can be resurrected and experiment with all the things I have learned. I can experiment with many, many things. The author is fine. You can write whatever you want. I just couldn't sleep while watching it and wanted to complain. I already dozed off [face covering]

I really like this kind of writing that is realistic and has a unique personality charm. It made me cry a lot. Su Su's growth is visible to the naked eye.

It's very interesting and has the flavor of martial arts, not a gag novel disguised as martial arts. I never expected that I would fall in love with Liu Yuhen and hate Dugu Yihe because of this book. I never thought that Dugu had a hand in Liu's death. I originally thought that it was only the push of Ghost Villa. The plot of Su Meng walking into the river holding Liu's ashes is very beautiful, and it is like living towards death. The author created very moving characters, and it was clear that he was telling the story sincerely. The first time Su Meng was frozen, her toes were frozen and she couldn't walk. This was cruel and real. She tried to exchange information for dignity and protection, but she was still killed because of her weakness. Xiao Xuelei disdained her qualifications and only regarded her as a promise that must be fulfilled; Zhuo Dong came to appreciate her, but he did not hesitate to kill her. The younger brother walked with her ignorantly and then separated again. Xie Xiaofeng showed kindness and met her by chance. Liu Yuhen was the first person to give her warmth and peace of mind, and Lu Xiaofeng gave her the warmth and thoughtfulness of a friend. I hope Su Meng can become more and more confident, and watching her grow up will give me the feeling of raising a daughter...

The literary style of this book is more realistic. It is from an ordinary person who comes into contact with martial arts. The facts are very cruel and it is not a refreshing novel. However, the heroine is still very wise and sober.

Very different martial arts The heroines in the first two worlds were quite miserable. The struggle of modern people coming to the ancient world of martial arts is well described. But I feel that the descriptions of stunning beauties are much better. There is no lengthy description, the character becomes clear in just a few sentences. (The next world is looking forward to the peerless twins or the eagle eagles hehe)

I just took another look at it on the serial book list, so I stayed up all night and finished reading it. But I'm not good at summarizing. I want to see the heroine develop herself into a boss step by step. The author's writing style is very good, and every story can affect my emotions. It can be seen that the author has carefully considered the characteristics of the original character, and the writing style is also very martial arts, without magically changing the character. The heroine is like a thread threaded with story beads. She seems useless at first, but as the number of beads increases, her own power gradually becomes apparent. Her arrival also alleviated many regrets, just like fulfilling a dream just to hit HE. Although it can't be perfect... Haha, it can't be done at all. As I said before, I'm not good at summarizing. The heroine is undoubtedly tough at heart. It's a bit cruel, but the human touch is enough. [Angry] Author, just keep sending out knives! Bring it on! Let the blade come harder! ! ! Update soon! ! ! !

The writing is very realistic, unlike those who quickly become time travelers as soon as they enter the martial arts world. Those are not true no matter how well written they are. However, this article clearly describes the three views of the heroine as a time traveler and the world view of the martial arts world. It is very real, as if the heroine has really traveled through time.

I think it's great, the main character has such a miserable start. It's a bit toxic but still watchable. She is sometimes strong and forbearing, and sometimes silly and sweet. Only by tossing herself to the lowest point can she have a chance to have brains. Being young is good, but he ends up sleeping near someone who steals other people's clothes, pants, headgear, and shoes. It's a story about abusing a female protagonist. The first world feels good, but the second one feels why he can live. He is miserable just for the sake of being miserable, feeling sorry for himself. The daily life of a battered heroine with multiple personalities with disabilities. You won't think about philosophy when it's difficult to survive, really. The heroine is supposed to be a person who worked hard to become a movie queen or an actor. It is said that there is some scandal. Does the scandal mean it is true? This is the first time I see this word used to describe people who think the protagonist is okay. What he did had nothing to do with his character and background. Crystal clear stupidity. Taken for granted. Still a nymphomaniac. .

The writing is mature, the writing style is unique, and the narrative is well-organized. The main line is hidden and waiting for people to understand, and the plot is a mixture of sadness and joy. The strong wind adds to the shower, and then the sky becomes bright and clear after the rain. The change of state of mind, the understanding of the world, and the progress in dealing with people and things make people see more possibilities! The fullness of the heroine's character and the growth of the character can be seen with the naked eye. She is loving, righteous, brave, fearful and free. She is not only the most ordinary commoner in the world, but also the most unique, tough, transparent and compassionate god in the world. The characters in the martial arts film are also well grasped. The descriptions are light and the characters are vivid on the page. They are not redundant and allow people who have never seen it to have an overall impression of the unfamiliar characters. Anyway, I can't edit it anymore. If you like watching martial arts and watching melancholy realistic style, are you sure you don't want to click on it and take a look? Well, I fell into a trap anyway [laughing]

I like martial arts with a bit of ancient dragon style, which also means that the heroine is gradually assimilated. At present, it is not a brainless and cool novel, but the heroine is miserable. Fortunately, Su Meng is the heroine, and she has a golden finger that keeps traveling through time and does not reset her martial arts.

Very well written! ! It feels like the old mixed martial arts novels

This book is really a treasure in the female channel. At first, I just read it casually out of boredom. In the first two worlds, I kept complaining about the heroine's design. It is true that the heroine's character at the beginning is really like some stereotypical female channel characters and is full of flaws. But if you survive the first two worlds like the heroine, you will truly see the growth of the heroine. Any of her power strategies are not groundless, and you will have a strong sense of identification with the heroine. As a man, my blood boils with excitement when I see the drama behind it, and how hard it has been for the heroine along the way. I really want to take back all the complaints I made earlier. The heroine is really well-shaped by the author. She is not perfect, but it is the imperfection that makes people feel real. It seems that she is not just a character created by the author, but a real character who has broken away from the set persona and acts with her own consciousness. It is very immersive!

This is really the best martial arts fan novel I have ever read. When Liu Yu hated himself to death, he had an indescribable feeling. I think I will remember this story for a long, long time, so long that just seeing this name reminds me of the two people who used to lean on each other.

This book is really great. Before I read it, I was worried when I read the reviews. I thought the first two worlds were mindless abuse and deliberate abuse of the heroine. But after actually reading it, I realized that the author's writing was well-founded, and he was writing about the bottom of the martial arts world and the journey of a master. Without the first two worlds, no matter how good the heroine is, she will be too light and unreal. The heroine of the first world learned martial arts, which allowed her to see clearly the cruelty of the world. In the second world, she understood what it means to be a chivalrous person. A great chivalrous person serves the country and the people. The second world seemed miserable, but it was not really miserable. She reconciled with the world and became a real hero. After experiencing both worlds, she will never lose her heart. The fights are also beautifully written, no wonder the score is so high. This is a high-quality martial arts fanfic. It is recommended not to skip the first two worlds, they are not that miserable, and think of them as stepping stones for the heroine's growth.

It's very interesting to read, the author's writing is very good, the heroine's character is also very good, and she has truly grown up. But I think the heroine is so miserable, maybe because the novels she time travels through are all Gu Long's novels. If it were Jin Yong, she might be better. I feel that Gu Long's martial arts are quite cruel, but Jin Yong's You Can Always Find a Way to Survive Growth requires a process, and the heroine's current mental understanding matches her growth in strength. Let us see not only the efforts of the heroine, but also the changes in the heroine. If the Golden Finger blooms too big, it would be like putting the heroine as a potted flower in a greenhouse. Without the wind and sun, she will never know how to take root. I hope the author can control the rhythm and not suddenly let the heroine soar, which is harmful to her soul. Secondly, the heroine is now particularly negative, paranoid and world-weary. I thought that Lu Xiaofeng and Hua Manlou, two people full of human brilliance and positive energy, could infect the heroine and make her mentally healthier. I didn't expect that the world would pass by so quickly. I hope the author can write a more exciting story about the heroine's spiritual transformation, and I hope the heroine can understand true heroism - after seeing the truth of life, she still loves life and does not avoid the difficulties and pain in life, but bravely faces and overcomes them.

The writing style is unique and the writing style is unique. The ideas are clear and well-developed, the plot has ups and downs, and the details are sketchy and confusing, making it unexpected and reasonable. At present, several worlds are very Gu Long style. Every little character is three-dimensional and brilliant, and the words are concise and full of life philosophy. This is the wonderful thing about Gu Long's novels. The heroine grows up step by step from an ordinary person, which makes people feel very empathetic. After all, not everyone is the favored one. Shuangwen's character design. But the heroine's tenacity and perseverance are admirable, and she has great personal courage. Reading this book feels like following a woman as she encounters the evils of the martial arts world step by step. She realizes that people can't help themselves in the world of martial arts. I also see the subtle changes in the protagonist's mentality and personality. I hope that the protagonist can maintain his original intention and not lose himself as he grows up.

Super invincible and beautiful [Adoration] [Adoration] From the content point of view, the heroine has very upright views and is not limited to petty love. She is not like other martial arts heroines who wear martial arts skins and go whoring to men. She has traveled through so many worlds and still desires love like an 18-year-old girl [smile] I feel like I can't live without a man. It makes me feel really physically uncomfortable. . The heroine is not invincible (in fact, I feel like I feel a sense of emptiness in my heart after reading too many invincible and cool articles, which is far less good than this). She has a growth flow. In her, we can see the persistence and hard work of ordinary people. The heroine has great truth in her heart and is a true chivalrous person. He always carries a chivalrous spirit with a very big pattern. In the early stage, the heroine was conflicted between being born and joining the world. In the end, she chose not to escape, but actively joined the world, and tried to use her own power to do things that could help others. In this age when you are criticized for being a virgin when you go out to help others, the chivalrous kindness of the heroine is rare, and she has a very charming personality [Adore][Adore][Adore] Also, from the writing point of view, the writing skills are outstanding, and it has the flavor of Gu Long's novels. It is a pleasure to read, and it is definitely the top 1 tomato variety martial arts in my heart!

The writing is very delicate and the story rhythm is very good. However, the protagonist's character in the second world feels a bit split and there is some incompatibility to promote the plot. However, the problem is not big and it is still very well received.

The first chapter attracted me, the writing style is very charming. Some people think that Wenqing is delicate and artificial? No, I don't think the words are too gorgeous. On the contrary, it's neat and smooth, maybe a little old-school (the comment section said it has the temperament of the original). It's good to grasp your own writing style and write a story with content stably and smoothly. Anyway, this is what I enjoyed. The various twists and turns in the first world broke my reading expectations. I read it smoothly in one go. I have never read many of the original works. This comprehensive martial arts book made me want to read the original works. It's hard to agree on the comments section. Everyone's reading preferences and expectations are different. Every book has its own audience. I still hope this book can be finished well. In short, I like this book very much. Please keep updating it. I am very much looking forward to the next story.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a well-written book, but the reviews here are more mean than other books. There are so many people who accuse the heroine of being stupid, my God. The heroine has done the best she can. In my opinion, she is kind and tough, has a clear distinction between grudges and grudges, is hardworking and harmonious. The heroine is so good, so good that even though I know that the person who accuses her is only from God's perspective. And these overly accusatory words are all because of the existential panic caused by seeing it in - making some irrational people have to blame the heroine, because in this way, these people's subconscious selves will not be at a disadvantage when facing the same situation. Even though I knew it, I was still angry. The heroine is really good, and the author writes it even better.

The amazement of this book is accumulated bit by bit, and then there will be a small explosion every two months. Whether it is Su Meng's transformation or the arc of the characters in the book, I became more and more addicted as I read it. In my opinion, the existence of the first two worlds is necessary. An inexperienced newcomer in the 21st century cannot have a personal experience of the concept of chivalry. The excitement when reading a book only exists in his mind. When you really enter that environment, you are the people who are hit by tables when others fight, and the villagers who are chopped down by bandits when they slaughter the village. As the author emphasized in the first two volumes, Su Meng is just an ordinary person. It's you, me and her. Don't overestimate your abilities, and don't underestimate people's determination to live.

The author's writing style is very good, and he has a strong sense of empathy. He feels very sorry for Su Meng. It really feels like a passerby traveling through the rivers and lakes, not cheating all the way, but from the perspective of ordinary people. Liu Yuhen's offline scene made me cry, it was so amazing. Update, update, it's so beautiful. [Love][love][love]

Master, master! A story does not depend on how novel the subject matter is, but on the person who tells the story. There are too few excellent novels like Zongwu nowadays. This book can be regarded as the top part [Send Heart]

It's a very good book. Here you won't see genius upgrades, you won't see You Love Me, I Love Him, He Loves Him to Death. It is a martial arts novel, a martial arts novel for an ordinary person. This ordinary person may not be so ordinary because of the ability to die, but she also She will make mistakes, and she will be confused. Her path is not so clear, her heart is not so firm, she has walked through thorns along the way, and occasionally stopped briefly for roses. She will bleed and shed tears. She is not sure whether her path can go to the end and lead to the light, but she is still moving forward.

Help! The author is really good at writing. The heroine was relatively weak in the early stage. In the first two worlds, the heroine had to endure a lot of hardships to survive in the martial arts world. (Becoming stronger also requires a process.) In the world of the Third Young Master's Sword, it can be regarded as the beginning of the heroine's transformation. She understands that with a sword in her hand, she needs to protect the weak. In the subsequent world of Chu Liuxiang's Legend, Liu Yuhen can be regarded as my little Bai Yueguang. He stayed with the heroine and taught her a lot. The injuries suffered by the heroine in the previous worlds were healed by him, and she began to become like a knight. But I like the plot of Xiao Li Fei Dao and the subsequent world the most. It is really well written [send heart] [send heart]. I have read these two worlds many times. I really like the character of the heroine. The author has created the heroine very well. At the beginning, the author updated it every half month, and I was worried that I would finish this book. We love you, author! ! Tens and thousands of supplements are needed to stop updating! I really like this book! ! !

What a flavorful book! Can't stop at all! ! Model worker, please give me more

This book has the most valuable quality of fan fiction: it has an original flavor. It continues the style of the original work without losing what the author wants to express. Very charming characters, very exciting world. After following it for two years, I will review it again after it is finished, and I will still give it 5 stars. Jianghu is immortal, thank you to the author for letting me have a martial arts dream.

I really like it. The characters' tendencies are well-founded, the entanglement of love, hate and interests, and the psychological portrayal are all very good highlights. The heroine struggles with her fate time and time again, reflecting on herself in pain, especially like emerging from a cocoon and turning into a butterfly. She gradually begins to have her own say in life, and slowly gets better.

To balance the scores, the author has really read Gu Long's book, and the writing is also very Gu Long's flavor. I saw many people criticizing the second book. These people must have never read the original book. I read the original book many years ago, and I just felt that everyone in it was in pain, so after the author let the heroine in, she was full of sympathy for the characters in the original work. Saying that the escort agency is just a deal, the heroine feels ashamed and inexplicable. Well, I really don't know anything about the complexity of people. People are not machines, and feelings are not goods. Even a dog on the roadside will have feelings for him after being around for a few days. The integrity of the old man next to him touches the heroine. Is it so difficult to understand? Although I have read this book for a long time, I still remember the words in the book: Do you want to be a shooting star or a candle? The brilliance of a shooting star cannot be compared to that of a candle, but it is fleeting. The candle is tiny but it burns to the end. Everyone in the original work suffers, and it also depicts the struggle at the lowest level. After being adapted into a TV series, the love and hatred between family and country are directly arranged, and it has nothing to do with the original work. Gu Long mostly describes complex and fickle human nature, which has nothing to do with the national justice. The heroine also struggled and collapsed in the second book, weak and seeking perfection, and then decided to do something for a bowl of porridge. It was so ancient. After reading Chapter 220, I felt that it was no longer interesting and I didn't want to read it. Not very attractive.