One Piece: Nika Must Die Starts with the Double Harvest of Tokushima

It's a sadistic story, and I can't say it's completely mindless. There are some parts that make Luffy disgusted, but thinking about it, it's really not easy to kill in the anime. So I personally think this novel is pretty good in terms of its pacing and plot. It's totally okay to have a fun plot, but some people may not be able to accept the torture of anime protagonists. It's a pity that another one has entered.

As a harem One Piece novel, it's pretty good. The charm of the characters is well preserved, and the protagonist is sometimes very awkward and a bit uncomfortable. It will be more comfortable if you read ten lines at a time

Very nice! But how must Taotu deal with this wretched old man? Doesn't Peach Rabbit look good? When will there be arrangements for some female marines and CPs (Tina, Dasqi Khalifa), and Magi Luo from Windmill Village is also pretty good! Summary: Update soon. I'm so anxious. Looking forward to it!

I personally like this book, but my thoughts after reading it are just for reference. The writing in the early stages of this book was not good, and the characters were OOC. I read it purely as a little Liu Bei, so I couldn't take it to heart. Many of the plots couldn't withstand scrutiny. But from the middle stage, it was obvious that the author began to directly collapse and then reshape the characters, because in order for Wang Lufei to betray his relatives, he had to make everyone's thoughts and behaviors complete. Departing from the original work, it also increased the inner description of the protagonist. It changed from a completely brainless novel to trying to make the characters more fleshed out and become characters in the book rather than a parody of the original work. I can't comment on this approach because I felt uncomfortable watching it. Some The plot was very unpleasant, and it went against my original intention of having fun and killing time, but I actually enjoyed reading it more, because the male protagonist is no longer an empty shell of a stallion from another world, and the female character's embrace is no longer just a tool to attract readers. The writing style and artistic conception have also been significantly improved. , I personally think that although it is not comparable to the manslaughter of the general, it is enough to be a work on the same track. Treating the male and female protagonists as human beings instead of writing the characters like programmed robots like most other pirate novels is completely incompatible with the thoughts of a person who normally travels through and then integrates into the world of pirates. (This may offend readers of several other books, but I really feel that the protagonists' butts in those Draconian opening novels are too crooked, and the descriptions of snatching female characters and ruthless, mean and evil deeds are too rigid) All in all, if you just want to enjoy the pictures, you can give up after reading this book halfway. But if you want to read a fanfic that is more three-dimensional and fuller even though the characters are seriously damaged from the original, I still recommend it.

The Celestial Dragon Book. It's rare to see them online, they are all about navy and pirates. There are some funny features in it

Many people say that Luffy has not been killed for so long. I feel that compared to taking Luffy offline directly, it is more interesting to keep Luffy and make the protagonist angry with him [laughing and crying]

Normally speaking, although Luffy seems careless, he is often unreliable and feels childish. But he was just a simple boy of that era. Think about it, I have only lived in a small village since I was a child, there is no real Internet or anything, and there is basically no adult supervision. The good friends in the village are ordinary kind people or people who treat him well. Although the female bandit often disciplined her, she did not dare to go too far. I didn't see Garp's expression in the village after Ace died. One look scared the female bandit half to death. If her feelings for Ace weren't too strong, she wouldn't have dared to punch him. What I mean is, Luffy is actually quite upright. They rarely kill, unless they are like Ah Long, they are basically knocked unconscious.

It looks good, but the author is too short.

In addition to making Luffy's thinking too backward, it can also explain the consciousness seizure from the original teacher Dan Kai asking who Luffy is now. . The plot is also easy to follow and can explain itself. Compared with those who kill without thinking and forcefully lick the Straw Hats, they are much better. [Pouts] It's a bit deliberate to directly block Brother Ming at the beginning. If you can move him easily, you won't have to worry about this problem so much. The delay in waiting for information updates and subsequent patches has been too long, and I have been stuck in the past era. Luffy hasn't been stressed for a long time.

The author is so small, the little human race is so big [laughs evilly]

It's a bit unpleasant, but I have the brains to follow the original work, and the writing is very novel, which is very different from other pirate novels.

How can I put it this way? Generally, people who read this kind of fanfic do it for the pleasure. The slow-paced one actually has no advantage in this subject matter. But there are too many other cool-paced doujins. How can I put it this way? It should be considered good in the slow-paced one. Maybe I read too many fast-paced and refreshing doujins and wanted to change to a slow-paced one. [Eat melon][eat melon] The author's words are very perseverant. No one can read so much and write so much. It's just that the update is too slow. It took him so many plots to reach the land of Wano. Anyway, come on, the author's first book [Blowing Kisses]

In terms of the story and brilliance of this book, it must be five stars, but if you are impatient, it is recommended to skip reading. Although it is possible to skip some exciting parts, the plot is relatively slow at the beginning, but after the plot really starts, it is always exciting. Sometimes I want to laugh, and sometimes it is embarrassing.

It's beautiful, the more I look at it, the more I like it [Sending my heart] Even the author is too short! ! ! Two chapters updated in one day [angry]

It's okay, but there are some loopholes, so it's still good to look at without thinking.

It's a book about torturing Luffy. I skipped through it so I didn't know many of the settings. To put it simply, Luffy's shortcomings are magnified in the anime. The protagonist is a Celestial Dragon. It's good to become stronger and open a harem. The main plot is to suppress Luffy in various ways to reduce his luck. Generally speaking, as long as you can accept this type, it will look good. Seeing Luffy deflated here will make you feel happy and feel that he deserves it, but it will not be substituted into the normal Luffy. I didn't read much of the first part, so I don't know how it is, but the second part is definitely very interesting. The ending for Luffy felt a bit cheap. I read other book reviews that the protagonist was tortured by Luffy in the early stages, so I suggest you read it from the second part. Anyway, the second part is really good.

I really like the development of the story, but the ending is a bit sloppy, but the summary is still full marks. I like the story structure.

The writing is good. I didn't have too much mentality at first, but I can really watch it. Although it has the feeling of invincible flow, it is written with ideas and can be rounded off. The plot is okay. But I do treat the heroines as human beings, but I take too much. . . . . I'm already numb,

Beautiful, really beautiful. Not so boring side push, it's very stupid and thief. The only novel in recent times that I couldn't get enough of after reading it in one sitting.

Personally, I think it's a pretty good pirate fanfic. It's like finding a piece of topaz in a cesspit. It's a bit uncomfortable at the front, but it's better at the back. If you can hold on, just keep reading. If you can't, don't read. There's nothing good to say (╹▽╹)

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You can jump to the Dragon Palace Kingdom in the front, which doesn't affect reading very much. It's a good read starting from Fish-Man Island, but the abuser in the front can't be washed out. Generally speaking, the back part is pretty good.

Overall, it deserves four stars. Although there are some shortcomings, it can be seen that the author has his own rhythm, which is quite good. Nowadays, Tomato has almost become a popular topic among readers. Once some plot of this book hurts the readers' hearts, the book will basically be destroyed by the readers' anger within a few months. The author can withstand such great pressure and keep updating, which is really extraordinary.

Why does such a beautiful book only have a rating of 6.6?

Do you have a group? Want to watch the full version?

I like this kind of thing. I don't like pirates so much since I became Nika.

Nami, have you accepted it? I haven't seen the back yet.

Tianlongren, it's so well written to steal a woman but also to create a good impression.

It feels a bit like Qiong Yao, hahaha, it reminds me of the Roaring Emperor in Qiong Yao's drama. Overall, it's good. The harem is always being collected, and it's quite reasonable. There are many dramatic plots, but when it comes to details, it's a bit long-winded. That's why I feel like it's like a Qiong Yao drama.

I came here for the harem at the beginning, and the author wrote very exciting things later on. It's a pity that it's finished. It would be great if there were a few hundred more pictures [laughing] Although the rating is a bit low, I think it's a very interesting work.