HP Riddle X Youthe Curse of Ouroboros

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The teacher's writing is really good. The writing style has a sense of drama and is very sophisticated about the world of Harry Potter. I feel sorry for the heroine's life experience, but a strong tree grew out of the mud. Her strength and wisdom are not as soft and fragile as her appearance shows. All weakness is a means to achieve the goal. I am really looking forward to the subsequent development [Blow Kiss] (The teacher's Lord is very touching. It is rare to see a detailed article about Lord's school days. The character is well grasped. I feel there is no OOC at all. It seems that I will meet the adult Lord Voldemort soon! [Please update])

The writing is very nice. I feel that the author has his own analysis and thinking about the setting. The logic is online. There is not much official content in the ancestors, so it depends on the big self-setting, but the writing is really nice! The sibling relationship is hehehehe. Tom, the scheming little bad guy, is also well written. The heroine is not a Mary Sue, not a pure evil girl. She is a beautiful sister who is selfish, shrewd and does not help her relatives. She is really a sister who "I hugged you when you were a child" and "pooped and pissed you until you grew up". The sister filter is a bit too big, hahahaha. "Tom has been smart since he was a child, but he is a bit naughty." "The child is a middle school student and got a middle school club to give him the nickname of a middle school student." Currently, in the eyes of the heroine, the Death Eater Preparatory Group and Voldemort have no deterrent effect hahahahahaha

It must have just been opened, so the score is not high. The writing is from the second person perspective, but the writing doesn't make people feel resentful. On the contrary, I think the writing style in the second person perspective looks more refined? The last HP article that allowed me to write a long review was because the family line was very touching, and the emotional scenes were a little slower, so I liked it better. This time, it was because the conflict points were very exciting and vivid. Regarding the heroine being a mixed-race Veela, and the heroine's attitude being flexible when confronting Black, I thought that part was really good. But not everyone can be a tom. After all, the heroine is a native, and she is not satisfied with the golden finger like other tom fanfics. Otherwise, I say you two toms will be finished! ! However, I am very satisfied with the current plot line and the heroine's personal line. I am not with Tom all the time, but I still have a social circle with girls. Emotional drama - a bit worrying. I remember that most HP fanfics would start from the aspect of his father's love potion, and it is true that Tom's style is more ambitious than love. And I think the description here is that the heroine is full of maternal glory towards Tom, but Tom is a little unhappy with the heroine's attitude. I don't think this stage is love. For Tom, it may be more possessive. Whoever you are, your heart belongs to me)? . Well, it's a bit cliché to say this. I think if Tom's feelings at this time are possessive, it would be more gradual. In fact, I also want to see the growth line of the heroine. Now the heroine is as different as Tom (the heroine is better than Tom, and Tom is pure and dark). I want to see the heroine grow up to have the right to speak (in fact, other growth lines are also possible, but I can only think of this metaphor). She has the right to speak, but not to be spoiled and coquettish! ! ! Hahaha. Actually, I have read CP articles. It's not impossible to do a little bit of this.

It's rare that Riddle, who is not OOC, stands out among the stereotyped Marian Redemption stories. I give full marks to the heroine's design, writing style, detailed characterization, and sense of cp. It's not a loss to invest in this article [top post] The author had better finish it all at once and then scare me (bushi)

A particularly good plot made me roll on the bed [Sending Hearts] Don't miss this book because it's in the second person! The writing is particularly good www. The second person perspective has a strong sense of substitution, and the writing style is also very fresh. The author's writing is also very consistent with the original work and does not break the character. It is logical. The heroine has a certain strength. There is no particularly frustrating plot at the moment. It made me roll on the bed [Sending Hearts]

It's so beautiful. The author must not stop updating. Both Anna and Tom are very distinctive. They are not silly sweet stories. I beg the author not to stop updating. There are very few original heroines that I like so much. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's really, really beautiful and written very logically. Anyway, I was attracted to it [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]

It's really beautiful🥰 Tom's character is very consistent with the original work and is not very OOC. The author did not belittle Tom either [Blow kiss] The heroine's personality is very attractive to me, the plot is not outrageous, and the author's writing style is also very good. The sibling relationship is also very interesting, and it is not all about emotions without foreshadowing [blowing kiss] Second person and Veela settings are also relatively rare, but the author writes it very well without any weird feeling [Blowing Kiss] The interaction between the heroine and Tom is also very sweet [Shy] Tom didn't have an IQ from the beginning. The author is also very good. Many contents have basis or information. Some of the less popular ones will be explained at the end of the chapter. It's really heart-warming when I read it🥹 The content is not all about Tom. The heroine also has her own plot. She is not Tom's pendant. And I personally feel that the heroine is a bit of a substitute for Tom (the heroine's brother who died young) [shy] I usually rarely post comments or book reviews, but the author hasn't updated for a while. I saw the author said that readers will post comments or book reviews, which will motivate me to update, so I decided to post more comments three times [send heart] The author should resume updating [please update] It's really well written. My kids want to see the plot behind it! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's very interesting to watch, and I'm really looking forward to the plot development in the future. The heroine gives me the feeling that she is also ambitious and very good at using her own advantages to give herself extra points or achieve her goals. I also like the description of her behavior. Looking forward to the follow-up!

It's super good-looking, not OOC at all, and I feel like the author has a lot of knowledge. Will the author finish the update? This is a book I particularly like. Your baby must not abandon it. [Sending my heart to you] I hope the chapters in this book can be longer. I like their stories so much. I wish for a thousand chapters! (Just kidding [send heart]

Sorry, the following is just my personal opinion The part I have read so far gives me the feeling that this is a masterpiece with delicate writing, clear characters and close to the original work, and the plot development is very interesting. It is a true fanfic. It conforms to the direction of the original work, but also adds the behavioral consequences of the additional role of the heroine and the entanglement with the original characters. In addition, the author's research on the original work and the supplementary knowledge make the plot more reasonable. The author's speculations about the original work (such as why Hagrid got the Acromantula) show that the author is rigorous in writing. To be honest, I really love this kind of logical writing, and the heroine's character is also very appealing to me. However, the flow of your work is limited. . Sure enough, it's Rotten Tomatoes' fault! ! Author baby, just wait, I will recommend this book to you on the major HP fan fiction recommendation posts! ! ! ! So dear, you must keep writing, please, I really like this plot ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I don't want it to be a scam, please ♡♡

This book is very well written. The emotional relationship between the heroine and Tang in the early stage is described very delicately, and some common knowledge about the heroine's own life at that time is also missing from time to time. There is also the author's detailed description of the environment at that time. From the details of the train, it can be seen that the author is very thorough after investigation. The author works hard and looks forward to the subsequent changes (๓´˘`๓)𓂃 𓈒𓏸໒꒱

Very beautiful! Tangtang has no OOC. The heroine's personality is really similar to Tangtang. They are both good at disguising themselves, and the heroine is also a very strategic baby [almost crying] [almost crying] It's really hard not to love her! The teacher's English reserve is very rich, and it can be seen that he has carefully studied the original work, and the annotations of each chapter are very careful. Very good teacher, very good book [Love][Love] It's second grade now! Looking forward to the subsequent development of the third grade, and when will Tangtang find the secret room? When will the heroine's secret be discovered? Looking forward to looking forward to [admiration] [admiration]

The second person perspective is very fresh, and it reads in the style of a drama. The author's love for Tom and his in-depth study of the original Harry Potter can be seen between the lines, especially some remarks that break the brainwashing bag. It is a very good article. The text description has a eloquent feeling, which makes you feel like you really want to raise a little Tom, he is so cute and adorable.

This is a rare non-OOC version of Tom Riddle among Tomato HP fanfics. The author is also a very rigorous textual researcher. I highly recommend it! Ps: Please update. Oh my god, it's not enough to watch [crying]

Finally tied. I feel like what my wife wrote is very real and detailed, as if I had actually lived in Hogwarts. The interaction between Riddle and the heroine is also very cute, not the Mary Sue kind, but very real life anyway. Riddle's character is also very Voldemort-like, without OOC or being weakened. There are also some authors who like to praise Grindelwald, but my wife's article is not like that. It is very, very close to the original work. Super Invincible Lao Fu's recommendation cannot be read without thinking. Super looking forward to the next plot! ! !

Super pretty! In the style of the original novel, the heroine has a distinctive personality and is smart. She is a real Snake Yard (in other novels, the heroine Shu Ming was assigned to the Ying Yard and turned out to be like a lion). Tom also fits the character design. He has no love brain, is greasy, and turns into a domineering president😘

Very beautiful! ! ! The little soup here is so cute! Don't stop updating [I'm about to cry] Come on, come on, come on! I give it a five-star review. I love the character of the heroine, the heroine is a joy to watch, and the writing is super good!

How could there be such a perfect novel in the world? The heroine, Tom Riddle, is very observant and very close to the original work. The author not only did not violate the original work, but also made additions. Love can really break the dimensional wall. The author's full love makes this world come alive.

Let's just say, tomato-free meal replacement, okay, such an excellent wife is really rare [Sending Hearts] Although Anna is very inexperienced in this book, she has been making progress, and I am looking forward to her future growth; Tommy is in line with my expectations of Riddle, but there is a touch of humanity in Anna's company, which is very vivid. The two babies are accompanying each other and making progress together. I really love Mrs. [Love] so much. We admire you so much. You must keep writing!

This is called a work. I haven't read HP derivatives in a long time. It's an unexpected surprise. The character of the heroine attracted me right away. Come on, wow!

The heroine doesn't have a cheat system or anything like that, and Riddle doesn't follow the original work OOC. The heroine's character is a 'bad' one. The real heroine's character is the highlight of the article (the language is not very good, maybe it's not well spoken, but it's what makes this book interesting) and it's written in the second person. The writing is really really really good Rouse's writing is so good that I was so impressed by Rouse's words. Come on Rouse＾0＾~Always support you [blowing kiss]

New treasure discovered! Author, please feel free to write, I will go to Amway to share it with everyone, the writing is really, really good! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It is close to the original work, has clear arrangements and strict logic, and is very comfortable to read. The wife who wrote the book is very knowledgeable about the British language and social environment. She seems very comfortable. There are notes after the text! I really like how my wife created the characters. The words reveal my soul and I can feel my "love" for the characters.

It's good-looking, sister-type, and the Machiavellian girl is really great. I don't know why this book has such a low score, but I think this book is really good-looking, and it's not a loss to invest in. Although the title of the book is Tom Riddle✖️You, this is not an otome novel. The heroine's name is a hybrid of Lestrange and Veela, and she has a growth process. And the introduction says that she will always follow Lao Fu, which is good.

I have read a lot of books about Riddle, and this one is the most faithful to the original work. It is in line with my expectations. I am very optimistic about you! ! The setting is awesome! !

This book won my heart. The characters are particularly interesting. The plot is completely filmable. The original script is well written. If you like the dark style, you can't miss it.

It can be seen that I have studied Harry Potter very thoroughly. Many of the plots that I wanted to see but could not film are all fulfilled here. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

I love you, author. Woooooooooooooo this is really amazing. I have liked Riddle for 5 years and it is rare that I have read a piece of writing that is not OOC and is very satisfying. Woohoo, everyone is very charming and the writing style is super invincible. It is really good. Woooooooo, it is so perfect.