Harry Potter: The Curse of the Ouroboros, Riddle X You

Here is the author! Give yourself a five-star rating to encourage yourself! Everyone is welcome to rate and comment positively! To be honest, I just wrote this article just to see what everyone thinks! If you think my writing is good, I hope you can give me five stars and praise me a few words... If you think my writing is poor, you can also give me low stars and criticize my shortcomings. I really hope to see everyone's feedback. Your opinions and thoughts are my biggest motivation for writing! (Humble request from a young author)

The teacher's writing is really good. The writing style has a sense of drama and is very sophisticated about the world of Harry Potter. I feel sorry for the heroine's life experience, but a strong tree grew out of the mud. Her strength and wisdom are not as soft and fragile as her appearance shows. All weakness is a means to achieve the goal. I am really looking forward to the subsequent development [Blow Kiss] (The teacher's Lord is very touching. It is rare to see a detailed article about Lord's school days. The character is well grasped. I feel there is no OOC at all. It seems that I will meet the adult Lord Voldemort soon! [Please update])

The writing is very nice. I feel that the author has his own analysis and thinking about the setting. The logic is online. There is not much official content in the ancestors, so it depends on the big self-setting, but the writing is really nice! The sibling relationship is hehehehe. Tom, the scheming little bad guy, is also well written. The heroine is not a Mary Sue, not a pure evil girl. She is a beautiful sister who is selfish, shrewd and does not help her relatives. She is really a sister who "I hugged you when you were a child" and "pooped and pissed you until you grew up". The sister filter is a bit too big, hahahaha. "Tom has been smart since he was a child, but he is a bit naughty." "The child is a middle school student and got a middle school club to give him the nickname of a middle school student." Currently, in the eyes of the heroine, the Death Eater Preparatory Group and Voldemort have no deterrent effect hahahahahaha

It must have just been opened, so the score is not high. The writing is from the second person perspective, but the writing doesn't make people feel resentful. On the contrary, I think the writing style in the second person perspective looks more refined? The last HP article that allowed me to write a long review was because the family line was very touching, and the emotional scenes were a little slower, so I liked it better. This time, it was because the conflict points were very exciting and vivid. Regarding the heroine being a mixed-race Veela, and the heroine's attitude being flexible when confronting Black, I thought that part was really good. But not everyone can be a tom. After all, the heroine is a native, and she is not satisfied with the golden finger like other tom fanfics. Otherwise, I say you two toms will be finished!! However, I am very satisfied with the current plot line and the heroine's personal line. I am not with Tom all the time, but I still have a social circle with girls. Emotional drama - a bit worrying. I remember that most HP fanfics would start from the aspect of his father's love potion, and it is true that Tom's style is more ambitious than love. And I think the description here is that the heroine is full of maternal glory towards Tom, but Tom is a little unhappy with the heroine's attitude. I don't think this stage is love. For Tom, it may be more possessive. Whoever you are, your heart belongs to me)? . Well, it's a bit cliché to say this. I think if Tom's feelings at this time are possessive, it would be more gradual. In fact, I also want to see the growth line of the heroine. Now the heroine is as different as Tom (the heroine is better than Tom, and Tom is pure and dark). I want to see the heroine grow up to have the right to speak (in fact, other growth lines are also possible, but I can only think of this metaphor). She has the right to speak, but not to be spoiled and coquettish!!! Hahaha. Actually, I have read CP articles. It's not impossible to do a little bit of this.

It's rare that Riddle, who is not OOC, stands out among the stereotyped Marian Redemption stories. I give full marks to the heroine's design, writing style, detailed characterization, and sense of cp. It's not a loss to invest in this article [top post] The author had better finish it all at once and then scare me (bushi)

It's really beautiful🥰 Tom's character is very consistent with the original work and is not very OOC. The author did not belittle Tom either [Blow kiss] The heroine's personality is very attractive to me, the plot is not outrageous, and the author's writing style is also very good. The sibling relationship is also very interesting, and it is not all about emotions without foreshadowing 😘 Second person and Veela settings are also relatively rare, but the author writes it very well without any weird feeling 😘 The interaction between the heroine and Tom is also very sweet 😳 Tom didn't have an IQ from the beginning. The author is also very good. Many contents have basis or information. Some of the less popular ones will be explained at the end of the chapter. It's really heart-warming when I read it🥹 The content is not all about Tom. The heroine also has her own plot. She is not Tom's pendant. And I personally feel that the heroine is a bit of a substitute for Tom (the heroine's brother who died young) 😳 I usually rarely post comments or book reviews, but the author hasn't updated for a while. I saw the author said that readers will post comments or book reviews, which will motivate me to update, so I decided to post more comments three times 💕 The author should resume updating [please update] It's really well written. My kids want to see the plot behind it!!!!!!!

A particularly good plot made me roll on the bed 💕 Don't miss this book because it's in the second person! The writing is particularly good www. The second person perspective has a strong sense of substitution, and the writing style is also very fresh. The author's writing is also very consistent with the original work and does not break the character. It is logical. The heroine has a certain strength. There is no particularly frustrating plot at the moment. It made me roll on the bed 💕

Sorry, the following is just my personal opinion The part I have read so far gives me the feeling that this is a masterpiece with delicate writing, clear characters and close to the original work, and the plot development is very interesting. It is a true fanfic. It conforms to the direction of the original work, but also adds the behavioral consequences of the additional role of the heroine and the entanglement with the original characters. In addition, the author's research on the original work and the supplementary knowledge make the plot more reasonable. The author's speculations about the original work (such as why Hagrid got the Acromantula) show that the author is rigorous in writing. To be honest, I really love this kind of logical writing, and the heroine's character is also very appealing to me. However, the flow of your work is limited. . Sure enough, it's Rotten Tomatoes' fault!! Author baby, just wait, I will recommend this book to you on the major HP fan fiction recommendation posts!!!! So dear, you must keep writing, please, I really like this plot ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I don't want it to be a scam, please ♡♡

It's so beautiful. The author must not stop updating. Both Anna and Tom are very distinctive. They are not silly sweet stories. I beg the author not to stop updating. There are very few original heroines that I like so much. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's really, really beautiful and written very logically. Anyway, I was attracted to it 😘 😘 😘 😘 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰