Crazy Criticism of Protons, Stop Digging the Grave, the Eldest Princess Is Not Dead

It looks good. I hope the male protagonist keeps the female protagonist by his side because he recognizes her. I think this point needs to be explained [Adoration] [Adoration]

Looks good! Finished reading one chapter without skipping! The male protagonist is nice to the female protagonist because he recognizes her. The male protagonist is really awesome! The heroine is the kind of heroine who wants to leave all the time (although I have never liked this type of heroine, but this article does not hide its flaws~) Recommended reading!

The moment of happiness was too short, and I didn't feel it was enough. Could it be that they felt it wasn't enough either.

It's really good to watch, but the emotional line is in the later stages and there are very few extras. The male and female protagonists are very clear, and their character settings are consistent. The female protagonist is not the kind of brainless. She analyzes everything, especially after escaping from death. She will think about others. The male protagonist is also very crazy. He dares to love and hate in the early stage. He is more addictive and tolerant. He drives smoothly and misunderstandings are quickly resolved. The male protagonist is reborn. , The heroine is a time traveler and has worn it twice, the character creation of the supporting characters is also very good, I love it [top post] [smirk] [smirk] [smirk] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [love] [love] [love] [love] [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] The plot has a lot of twists and turns. The only drawback is that there are very few extras. O(≧口≦)O, why are there so few? I haven't seen enough. It gives people a feeling that there is still more to come.

I feel it deserves a rating of 9.2-9.4. I really like the death escape plot. The author writes it well! It's a pity that the second half was a bit rushed and failed to detail the male protagonist's pain after the death of the eldest princess. It would have been better if the male protagonist had been more abused.

It's so good that I finished reading it in one day. When I started reading it, I was just out of pure boredom. I thought I would just read a few pieces and then stop reading. But unexpectedly I stayed up late to finish it. 🥴The ending is indeed a bit rushed and the length is too short, but everything that needs to be explained is explained. Overall, it is very good. It is the author's first novel and it is very well written! Come on! (•̀ᴗ•́)و̑̑ Actually, I really want to see the final scene that describes their lives in more detail, such as the heroine going to meet Pink Tao, etc. It's a little more specific, but it's not bad. That's how it ends. I can feel that they are living people in the book, and they all have a happy ending.

Come on, come on, tell me why this book only has a 7.7 Rating? Come on, this is obviously very beautiful. Two people who don't understand love, one is saved because of light. One is deeply in love because he doesn't know the origin of love. The dead and resurrected person in the middle is instantly recognizable. Isn't this embarrassing? A typical big dog male protagonist. What a shame. Regardless of the male protagonist or the female protagonist, they are both pure in both lives and only love each other. How pure.

: If you know me, you know what I want most is... : Is freedom : I know what you want most is freedom [crying] Although some things are not explained clearly and some holes are not filled in, it can be watched by those who are not very picky.

The plot progresses quite quickly, and the male protagonist is also very smart. He can immediately detect the changes in the female protagonist's substitutions. He is also very decisive and has never hurt the female protagonist. Why should there be restrictions from heaven? The heroine was too careful to live in the first life, and did not realize that the hero liked the heroine. The second life also did not last long, and the length of the two together later was also very fast. There is a bug. When the heroine enters the Qi Chu Hall, why is the heroine not allowed to see the body of her previous life?

From the beginning, I thought the relationship between the male and female protagonists was a bit inexplicable, but I ignored the inexplicable aspect and saw it in the back. Personally, I thought it was still good-looking. Yesterday, when I read about twenty chapters, I even complained to my friends that the rating was too high [facepalm]. From the moment the male protagonist left the female protagonist and started her career, it slowly started to look better. The writing in the back is quite delicate.

There are no words to describe my feelings. This book is really good. Whether it's the heroine or the hero, it's not easy from beginning to end. I really love this plot. I just lay on the bed for several hours to finish it. I'm still unfinished [crying]

The content of the article is a bit disorganized. There are too many elements of the novel that I want to express, and my thoughts are not clear enough. But overall it is a very good genre novel. In addition, the author has not accumulated much experience as a novice. I believe your book can get better and better. It is worth recommending [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript]

It's so good that I almost cried. It's been a long time since I've finished reading a book in one sitting. The book has been in a drought for too long and I lose my appetite after reading the previous books. This book is so to my liking, it can stir up my emotions from the beginning to the end.

Very nice! It's not long, so I stayed up all night to read it. The overall context of the article is relatively clear, the characters are distinct, and the male and female protagonists are both online. It is the first time that I can tell that the other party has been reborn or replaced so quickly. It makes me feel happy hahaha. It's just that it's too short after the truth is revealed in the end [I almost cried] I want to watch the Modo Modo extra

Looks good! ! ! It's just that the sweet time between the male and female protagonists is a bit short. The plot is also good, it's my favorite type! I hope the author can write a hit book in the future! It took me so long to find this great book, and it's a pity that I couldn't accompany it along the way.

It's really good to watch, really. Although the plot is not particularly novel, the connection is not cliché. It makes people feel like they can watch it. The emotional line between the male and female protagonists also flows smoothly.

This book is very interesting. The plot is not procrastinating, and each link is broken. I really love it [crying]. It is still a bit slow after reading it. Except for the later period, the male and female protagonists did not explain a word (it was explained clearly in the end). It can be said to be perfect, but the small problem I mentioned also happened to give the book an emotional continuation. If you think about it carefully, it is a foreshadowing for everyone's ending in the article (it's just the ending in the article, not the ending of life). It's rare to see such a good liberal arts, I really love it [crying]

Although the male protagonist's feelings are sudden and violent at the beginning, the original work is a male harem novel after all. As Long Aotian, the male protagonist's behavior when facing a white, rich and beautiful princess is not very reasonable. The "pseudo-substitute literature" in the later period is also very reasonable. After all, the male protagonist is a male harem novel, so it is very successful to be transformed into this. There are many descriptions of life details, which shows that the author is really attentive.

It's strange. According to the rating of Tomato novels, it should be above 9.5 Points.

It's super, super good-looking. Although there are only two endings, as a college student with fragile souls taking exams during finals week, it seems to make them both happy for ten thousand years. I strongly recommend that college students don't lie.

It's good, but the ending is a bit rushed

I had the mentality that it wouldn't look good, but it turned out to be good-looking [laughs]

It's good, but it's too short. I haven't seen enough of the interactions between the male and female protagonists.

The first part is pretty good to watch, and the characters are super vivid. Both the male and female protagonists are very attractive, and it is no longer a cookie-cutter plot. However, as you get to the back, it feels like the progress is getting slower and slower. The ending part also feels like it ends very quickly, and many pitfalls are left unfilled. The male protagonist's paranoia in the ending part is still a bit cool.

It's beautiful! It's really beautiful! I don't accept why the rating is so low! [Angry][Angry] Come and see! ! !

It's really beautiful. I really like this. [Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying] When I saw the words "Finished", I really wanted to cry to death.

It's super beautiful, but the author can explain the emotion of the male protagonist. I feel it came too suddenly, and it's the kind of love that exceeds my own life.

The pacing is fast, the male and female protagonists have online IQs, and they can explain themselves when they talk a lot. It's good to watch.

I've finished reading it, I've finished reading it, it's very well written. The content is full of ups and downs, and I really want to keep reading. The author is great, and I'm looking forward to your new book [sending my heart][learned][sending my heart][learned]🌹🌹🌹

A very interesting old saying is that the male and female protagonists spend too little time together and it is not enough to watch. The male and female protagonists' IQs are also online, and the ending is also very good.