Wrote a Yandere Novel and Was Killed by a Yandere School Beauty Offline.

It feels so good. Every time I look at the yandere's chest, there is an indescribable feeling. It's neither comfortable nor uncomfortable. It's tingling and tingling. It makes me so happy. It really makes me want to stop. [Shy][Shy][Shy] (Is there anyone who has the same feeling as me)

It's good, but it's not yandere enough, and the pressure on the male protagonist is not strong enough. Currently, it is only reflected in the female protagonist's desire to control the male protagonist. We should consider shrinking the male protagonist's communication circle, so that his circle of friends will gradually become compiled for him by the female protagonist, and then put pressure on the male protagonist through arrears, and let the female protagonist induce the male protagonist to compromise and accept the female protagonist's help through a series of external means such as external pressure, money, and the opinions of people around him. From this, the female protagonist can help the male protagonist to adapt to the life of the female protagonist in every bit of life. After the position, the male protagonist becomes dependent on the female protagonist and buys the seeds. Then the shrinkage pressure changes from external pressure to internal pressure, making the male protagonist mentally dependent on the female protagonist. After that, through emotions, the male protagonist can open his heart to the female protagonist, accept and compromise the female protagonist's shortcomings, and then step by step, finally harvest the food and eat it [sneaky laugh]

The writing is very good, but the male protagonist is too frustrated. When will he be able to fight back [crying]

I feel like I can write something about him running away and then the female protagonist can't find him. A month or two later I see the male protagonist crying and hugging him and saying, you will never have the chance to run away again in this life.

So far, I've read OK, there are no major problems, but this type of novels have a common problem: they all intentionally or unintentionally weaken the intervention of official power. The reality is: if a crime is reported for the reasons in the plot, the police will provide personal protection for a certain period of time as long as the reporting party insists on reporting the crime or uses a few more tricks to report the crime. Let alone a couple at this time, even if your parents come, you have to register [face covering] But if nothing else, the novel is quite good. I'll give it a four-star rating first, support the author, and then change it to a five-star rating later.

This book is still very well written overall. It is the first online novel I have read. The content controls the character of the yandere very accurately. It is neither mild nor serious. The plot has ups and downs. Unlike many other novels, readers can guess what the protagonist will do next and what will happen next. Some of the content can be used to enhance the realm of thinking, which is something other novels of the same type have never done. But after all, people will have the "peak-end effect". The "peak" is good, but the "end" is worse from my point of view. There are a lot of foreshadowings laid in the front that are not explained. The main plot later said that she wanted to cure her yandere, but it ended with no results (it would make sense if it ended as OE instead of HE). Including what the male protagonist mentioned earlier about being with a girl when he was a child, it was not clearly explained in the end that it was the female protagonist. I still hope that the yandere novel can end with a pure love ending. Of course, I can also understand the author. Because of Shen He, he was forced to delete a lot of words. Maybe his mentality was a little bit damaged, but I still very much hope that the author can change the ending or write a few extra chapters.

It's a bit easy to take off, so don't look at it if you're still practicing S [Thinking]

I'm quite sad. I discovered this book too late. I've already blocked it from reading it now. It would be great if the author could improve this book a little more and add a few extra chapters to this book, such as Jiang Ye's parents, the plot of the wedding, and the unexpected love between the two. After all, it's so frequent. I feel that if I add extra chapters, more people will read it and it will get a higher rating. I hope the author can give it a reference @, by the way, if the child is a daughter who is also a yandere, the author's new book is available [Shy]

After reading it, please rate it. The heroine in this novel is not very yandere, but there is no basement plot, and the heroine has an amazing social status, a lot of money, high martial arts, and is talented and an all-around player. The male protagonist is very weak and is led by the female protagonist from the beginning to the end. From going to Japan, Gudao, Qiandao Lake, to college and finally to Germany, the male protagonist completes the test of the female protagonist step by step and finally comes together. The process is relatively sweet, there is no Shura field plot, and the final plot of donating money to the mountainous area can be regarded as sublimating this book, which is worth reading. May I ask what kind of yandere is this? [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

I read it, it looks good. I might try to write something more outrageous. For details, please refer to the book I'm Not a Cabbage. You can be a little more possessive [laughter]

This book... How should I put it... Is simply... So beautiful, the more I read it, the more it looks like the author's autobiography [laughing]

The plot is quite fast, and the heroine doesn't feel yandere enough (I just want to see more of the outrageous things)

I love watching it very much because the author has written a heroine that is my favorite type

Overall, it is more realistic and mildly yandere. A little bit poisonous (Chapter 43...)

The plot content is quite good, but it is recommended to strengthen the heroine more to reflect the "sickness" and "delicacy" [Thoughts]

Damn, this is so beautiful. It saved my book shortage and solved my desire to read Xiao Huangshu [laughing]

Let the yandere who suits my aesthetics fall in love with me [Adoration]

I don't know why, maybe I've read too many Shuangwen articles, and I always feel uncomfortable reading this, but judging from the content, the author does write very well.

I like to watch the male protagonist being loved the most. It's very sweet.

Although I don't think this book is very good, I still gave it five stars in order to help the author. At the beginning, the protagonist felt too weak when being controlled by the female protagonist. Generally, boys are much stronger than girls. The male protagonist should be able to fight back easily, but I think it is necessary for the plot. I'm not being too strict. It's not that I'm not good at it, it's just that I don't like watching it very much.

I feel like I'm not just a yandere, I'm a queen plus S, just paranoid.

Blindly guessing that the author is from Jiangsu, Jiang Yan? Jiang Ye [laughing] Not bad, it's a feast for the eyes. [Love]

The writing is still very immersive, but the sense of immersion is too strong, and it feels like a light on the back [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]. The main storyline is also well written and there are no cliche plots. Although I didn't read it any further, to be honest, I'm not really suitable for yandere books, but I still really want to recommend this book and take it off the bookshelf. [Laugh]

Have you personally experienced the adaptation? If so, recommend one to me.

It fits my view of forced love very well. Come on, come on, come on, this is the only forced love book I have ever read. I am even more looking forward to seeing the male protagonist accept the love of the female protagonist while being moved. Macho chauvinism can exist, but it should not be when you have no strength. Keep writing about refusing to make soy sauce for the sake of dignity, which is very unappetizing and disgusting. Instead, it is better to accept the status quo and choose a better way to prove it. However, it is difficult to write about a wedding like this but it fits the current situation. Moreover, the heroine is very crazy and criticizes her. This is the real yandere, and it is beyond common sense. It is much more interesting to write like this. Finally, I hope to give readers an explanation as to why the heroine likes the hero. There must be a reason for forced love.

The writing is exquisite, the language is concise, the plot is rich and realistic, but the number of words is a bit short, which makes it very unsatisfactory.

The content is very well written, the plot is ups and downs, soothing and turbulent. It is a good novel.

Very beautiful, 100 points recommended

Haokan (Why do you need to make up 5 words?)

The book is very good, but I am underage