I Brought a Mega-Mall to Ancient Times to Escape Famine

The whole story is quite good, without any scumbag relatives or mess. The heroine travels through time with domineering power and makes full use of space to benefit the people. Her parents are loving and friendly to her sisters, which is quite enjoyable to watch. The step-by-step process of the love story with the male protagonist is very real. What doesn't quench my thirst is that the ending is perfect but a little rushed. All in all, it's a good article. I give the author a big five-star thumbs up!

It was quite interesting, but the ending was a bit too hasty, as if it was rushed by.

The story is quite interesting, but there are too many typos and omissions, and many sentences are not fluent. Some holes are dug and ignored, such as the bear, which is never mentioned again. Fortunately, it is not long, so even those who are not well-read can read it.

Except that it ends too quickly, everything else is pretty good.

You can still take a look, but I won't mention the space later, which is a bit regretful!

It gets more and more exciting later on, but why did it suddenly disappear? Come on, author.

It's okay, it's very well written.

It was pretty good, but it felt like the ending was a bit too fast.

The plot is vivid and interesting, I want to keep reading

You can write a little longer later! It looks great. Give the author a big thumbs up 👍