My All-Time Favorite Book, Number 7

There is a problem with the plot arrangement. There are more plots for the secondary characters than for the main characters, and even the plots for the secondary characters appear more naturally. The emotional development of the female character is really a bit fast. Now Ryoko seems to have become dependent on the male protagonist after being rescued, and the male protagonist also seems to be caring about her body and deliberately delaying her time. Yuki got in touch with the hero for a very outrageous reason. It would be better to just say that the male protagonist is interested in sex. This start was a bit hellish, I felt my blood pressure was high when I saw Chapter 63, it was fast when it should be slow, and it was dragging when it should be fast.

With such excellent academic performance, I was deceived into studying in a Japanese university. Without any financial conditions, I still had to work in a convenience store... It was quite speechless.

Sure enough, the hero of a novel like this has to be smart. The location, the cheap rent, the landlord who leaves in a hurry, the female neighbor who knocks on the door in the middle of the night, plus the strange words, any normal person would probably think of ghosts. As for our protagonist, he is not aware of it at all. And this sentence, uh uh, yes, Chen Feng, we will be neighbors here from now on, please take care of me, the strange neighbor who knocks on the door in the middle of the night. Hearing the soles of my feet digging out the three-bedroom apartment, others were wondering that your name was different from the local ones, and then you backhanded me and said, "What is this thing?" Shouldn't a normal person say that he is from China first? You should say first that you are from China, and we will talk about it later. A strange female neighbor knocks on the door in the middle of the night. It's a little better, but in the end, you gave me this disgusting person? At least I feel sick→_→😅😅😅😅

The character of the protagonist does not match what he does. There are obviously many ways to make money for a genius, but he just chooses to work in a convenience store. He can make money by revealing his supernatural powers casually. It would be better if it was explained at the beginning that he has to hide his strength🍉

It feels like the protagonist is not cultivating the Tao but the Sunflower Manual

There is too much babbling nonsense, and the dialogue is too greasy and unnatural. The author should experience life more, read more classics, and in short, work hard.

Three stars for the female lead. From the cuteness point of view, the female protagonist is very good. The female protagonist in the back is just like someone who came out of a template assembly line. She is not cute and interesting, and the plot is wasted. It makes the protagonist look like some kind of nanny, especially the senior sister who has no idea about her own strength.

Chapter 25 What shocked her even more was that Chen Feng was not only the representative of the freshmen, especially after he said these words, there was no calmness among the school teachers. Don't you even read the books written by the author himself?

I always feel that there is something wrong with the correlation between the two lines of daily life and supernatural. Obviously everything is written at the same time, but if you remove any line, it seems to be feasible. It feels like it's not where it is, but where it should be. Or perhaps it has something to do with the fact that the main characters in other book reviews don't match the character [rolls eyes]

The protagonist is grumbling and pretentious in his work, and he also likes the second dimension. Then why do you let a woman get close to you? When he gets close, he turns into a eunuch. He's pretty crazy even if he's not very capable.