The Xianwu Dynasty Began to Rise from Mortals

As for this book, the subject matter is quite good, and it's not bad for those who like military art. From what the banner holder said at the beginning, it can be seen that the map should be very big. If you make a specific guess about the world view, it must be a cultivator. What I am writing now is still in the stage of fighting for hegemony. But the main character is a soldier. How to write it specifically has two aspects: one is to focus on cultivating immortals and write about the combat power of a single target; the other is to rely on the current deduction and create a new system. But how to draw the ink and compare the combat power with the cultivation of immortality without losing the balance depends on how the author writes it. It is best not to overwhelm the combat power. Also, I think that when writing deductions in the Art of War, it should not just rely on adding deduction points to automatically upgrade, but should also be combined with the protagonist's own thinking, just like the words in the Art of War that the author has written before. It's better to have the protagonist's own feelings. In terms of strategy, the development of the protagonist is still a little immature, but writing a book is a process of watching the protagonist slowly grow up. This growth process from immaturity to maturity requires careful consideration by the author.

Thank you all for watching! If you encounter any problems, you can point them out. I am a person who listens to advice. There are still some typos that I may not have finished correcting, but if you just tell me, I will correct them right away. Thank you guys [blowing kiss], I know my writing is not good, thank you for watching

I feel that the description is quite good. The protagonist is a leader who is equivalent to the peasant rebel army. There should be a setting for cultivating immortality in it. I don't know what level the protagonist can reach in the end. But looking at the previous plot, I feel that the description is quite good. The protagonist is a leader equivalent to a peasant rebel army. There should be a setting for cultivating immortality. I don't know what level the protagonist can reach in the end, but judging from the previous plot, there is nothing poisonous about it.

It has some meaning and is a book with great potential!

I won't say anything else, it's okay, I have the potential to become a sacred tree, come on! (PS: The author is really positive and easy-going. He will actively correct problems when he encounters them. He is much better than some authors who can only criticize people)

The writing is very good, but there is not much content about developing farming when I am either at war or on the way to war. [Anger]

It's very interesting. It's a good novel about the destiny of the country and the martial arts of ordinary people against the cultivators of immortals.

Looks good. I hope it doesn't break. Thank you.

It's very well written. It's a good book.

Isn't it that the number in this one is a bit low?

The pace was a bit slow in the early stages, and even the first person who appeared at the beginning was a villain. However, although the plot was slow, it was well written!

A potential stock with the potential for a fantasy novel to become popular.

It's the first time I've seen this type of movie, and it's pretty good. Come on [think]

The idea is very new, but if the author wants to write a longer story, I personally suggest that he practice describing large-scale wars, otherwise he will not be interested in reading this kind of article.

Okay, five stars for you

This book is not bad

Okay, the plot is pretty smooth.

It's okay, but it's already unstable and needs to be observed.

Okay, good and worth a look

Pretty good, but too short

It's good to encourage me.

Come on, come on, come on

Not bad, take a look if you know

Not bad, you can take a look

Looks good, very satisfied

After reading it, it is judged as: top grade

I'll give you seven stars to avoid making you proud, so I'll give you five stars!

Not bad, the only drawback is a bit short

It looks good so far, and it's also delicious in tomatoes.

Okay, I hope you can write it well and don't collapse later.