Zerg's Warmth System

Nice. The background is Zerg. What attracts me most is that each story has a different protagonist, but there is a certain connection between the stories. The protagonist of each story is also the supporting character of other stories. Moreover, the holes dug in the front were filled in in the back.

I think that apart from the fact that the plot was written too fast and the expressions were not clear enough, there seemed to be no flaws. You can write more interactions and various description techniques to provide imagination (●'◡'●)

Several independent stories, more or less related to each other, the last one is a bit fast, the others are okay [There is a saying that I really feel sorry for the small system. Lin Rang suffered a little loss as the first one, but the loss was only because he did not take advantage of the system. Every other host took a lot of advantage of the system. The small system is really difficult. Even if you walk around for a while, you don't have many points.]

Super pretty! ! 11 And the boss are definitely a couple~ We should realize it soon. Every couple is a very good person. Everyone stays with their wives. Many people said that the first protagonist is not good, but I think he is just a college student who has not entered the society. Don't have such high requirements. Alas, the author of the very sweet article I love you ＾3＾ is really sweet~ [Blow kiss]

It feels okay, but there is no party. It is just the meeting between the first and second protagonist.

Each of these stories is very healing. It makes me feel better. I love reading it and I look forward to updating it. The author is great

There are a lot of typos, and there are also some funny elements. All in all, it's a good book [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

I have looked for a lot of Zerg novels, but nothing like this one surprised me. Every little story is very good, with different protagonists and different personalities, as if they all really exist. Love this novel so much!

It's still pretty cool, and there are some connections between each world.

I can't stop laughing. This book gave me the feeling of telling a joke in a serious way, but I still like it. The author's writing style is quite rare, haha. I like it. The simple words do not have complicated embellishments, and the matter is finished in just a few strokes. It is very interesting [laughing and crying]

The relationship progresses so fast, it's so confusing But I like this plot [Adoration] Come on [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][send heart][send heart]

Wow wow wow, this article really suits my taste. I read it in one go and I like the brainless sweet article [shy][shy][shy]

It's okay, the rhythm of the sweet story is okay, and the logic would be perfect if it were better! ! !

Looks great, keep it upｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

[Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] There are too few good-looking ones, and the One-Yi System is too kind. I thought there was a relationship between the big boss system and the One-Yi System [grievance]

Very nice, very nice. I like this kind of sweet article.

Very good, come on

Bang Bang Bang Bang Bang Bang Bang

It's very interesting. I really hope there will be a sequel.

Actually it's still possible

It's beautiful, it's a sweet article [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Very nice novel

The water flows slowly and the writing is smooth ₍₍Ϡ(੭•̀ω•́)੭✧⃛

Not bad, I've finished reading it

Cute little sweet text

Very fast, very sweet, very good

It's very cozy, nothing unusual.

The author, cheers, cheers, cheers

Each has his or her own personality, I prefer the dull pair at the back

System: friends of friends are friends, introduce a few more people