To put it simply, the heroine participates in various variety shows, and the time jumps very quickly. The time in variety shows is inconsistent with reality.
Reader comments
The relationship between the characters is too complicated, and I don't know which angle to think about it from. It's not quite right from the heroine's perspective, and it's also not quite right if it's written from someone else's perspective.
If this is the case, I can accept it. After all, I have read a lot of poorly written books. The key is that the heroine is pretentious. I really can't stand it. I can accept it if you use small tricks. The key is that the inner monologue is really like a first or second grade elementary school student, and the heroine probably doesn't appear at all in the first few chapters. It's like no one else. Most of them are written about the heroine of the Youth League, which feels like a supporting role.
The relationship between the characters is too complicated, and I don't know which angle to think about it from. It's not quite right from the heroine's perspective, and it's also not quite right if it's written from someone else's perspective. If this is the case, I can accept it. After all, I have read a lot of poorly written books. The key is that the heroine is pretentious. I really can't stand it. I can accept it if you use small tricks. The key is that the inner monologue is really like a first or second grade elementary school student, and the heroine probably doesn't appear at all in the first few chapters. It's like no one else. Most of them are written about the heroine of the Youth League, which feels like a supporting role.
Lots of typos
I like what you mean