I Share a World of Food, and the Whole World Goes Wild!

The subject matter is very good, and the writing is okay, but the protagonist's presence is too low, and Chapter 48 is a bit speechless. The protagonist is probably from the Dragon Kingdom, but he feels that he has no sense of belonging to the country. Although the protagonist has left at that time, the conflict started with those black people, but the appearance of the protagonist should be the face of the Dragon Kingdom. Those black people saw it and dared to take the initiative to provoke people with Asian faces after the protagonist left. Also, the protagonist did not monitor the newcomers or take corresponding precautions. I almost didn't understand, it felt like the protagonist was being downplayed. Otherwise, why not let the protagonist pretend to be 13 and deprive those who actively provoke and verbally insult them from the game for life? The protagonist has the system and external permissions to enter and exit the food world, but the protagonist is downplayed, so it would be better not to have a protagonist.

. . . The character description is a bit disappointing with a good imagination. The main character is invisible throughout the whole process. Can you understand that the supporting characters are a bit empty? Weird. . . In Princess Vase, the author forcibly creates conflict. I wanted to highlight the character, but the result was that it became more abstract like a cat and a tiger. The first player was always frustrated, and Bell from another world was okay. God of Cooking didn't show any improvement in his cooking? ⊙_⊙After all, in a world where food is a captive, chefs are also very important.

It's nice to watch, but is the main character too exhausted? It feels like it would be better if there was no main character at all. Can the description of food be more detailed? Otherwise, there are no pictures or information about fantasy food, which makes people unable to imagine how delicious it is. However, we still have to admit that the author's subject matter is old, no It's a bit empty to live up to the fantasy without reference. It's better to have more cooking links, to come out with food cells as soon as possible, and to make the protagonist useful, and not to be the kind who can only rely on the players. How can I say that they don't care about the existence of the protagonist, plus the protagonist is not even as good as a tool, which affects the viewing experience.

You don't even have a novice gift pack at the beginning, but you have food cells. Why do you have to give it later? If there is no novice gift pack in front of you, why don't you give it to me? This is the prisoner of food. If the protagonist uses the power of food cells, it should be very interesting. At least the five people will get this power in the future after knowing it, and they should explore vigorously.

Please add more chapters. It's good to read but too short. I haven't finished it yet.

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The beginning is too blunt, and it doesn't even convey the feeling of being a prisoner of food. I suggest you watch the anime again. Writing a novel is not about him but about him. Besides, this game directly drags five people into it. Is it a game or the main god's space? No matter how powerful those five people are, he still has moments of panic.

In the novel, the male protagonist is really just an NPC. Compared with other players, the male protagonist's cautious behavior makes people feel uncomfortable, especially when fighting wild boars. Even if the male protagonist is beaten half to death and then eats meat to recover, it is better than just crushing him. At least he tried hard. It would be okay to write about food instead of being shocked all the time.

Food has levels, animals also have levels, players also have levels, [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] There are many highly martial creatures in anime. If you don't know martial arts and go out to find ingredients, you may get killed.

It's okay to write whatever you have nothing to do, I really hope there will be a few like this in reality. When I see this, I really wish there was such a thing. It's the male protagonist. I feel like why don't you do it yourself? You have to pick someone, because the delicious food in the end will cost the whole world anyway. Anyway, the male protagonist has very little participation. I give four stars because the food is so well written.