Time Travel: Beat up the Scumbag and Save the Sickly Girl!

The subject matter is very fresh, but too many plots are too classic. Take the heroine Gu Qingyan, for example, she is a classic image of a queen. She feels that everyone must obey her, and no one can disobey her. She treats the male protagonist as her dog, and the subsequent shield plot is even more classic. , I can also see that the following plot is probably the plot where the yandere female protagonist comes from the game to reality and conflicts with Gu Qingyan. Then Gu Qingyan feels that the male protagonist only belongs to her dog, and then goes through the Shura field, and finally finds out that she likes her after going through a lot of Shura fields. The male protagonist has a very classic image of a wasted house. He is afraid of society, likes to think wildly, is a loser, and has a sister. Then the younger sister has a conflict with the male protagonist. I feel that the younger sister may come to the male protagonist's school to question why he didn't get a divorce. He speaks out, then goes through a bunch of events and realizes that the male protagonist did not mean it, and finally resolves the knot and is happily together. There will definitely be conflicts with the yandere heroine in the middle, and maybe he may become a yandere later on, and then there will be a plot to compete with the yandere heroine. The writing style is too immature, which makes people feel a little embarrassed. To sum up, the subject matter is very fresh and makes people want to read more. However, the writing style is too immature, the plot is too classic, and the character of Gu Qingyan is too classic. If it were a few years ago, I might like this heroine, but look I feel like I don't really like this kind of female protagonist. The kidnapping plot in the first game is a bit classic, but it is indeed a node that sublimates emotions. I hope the author can not design this kind of plot in the next game and have his own new ideas, and then the male protagonist may do it later. I like the author to avoid becoming another copy of Li Cheng, take the initiative when it is time to take the initiative, and then hope that the male protagonist can grow up in the future and stop being like a loser. I also hope that the author can write this novel well. This subject matter is indeed very fresh, and it is a brand new one among yandere novels. My imagination, I was attracted by your subject matter, so I can continue to read. If it doesn't fall apart, if you polish the writing carefully, it may actually get a rating of nine or more. Finally, I wish the author can write better and better, be innovative in the plot, and become a boss from a newbie, come on. ̗̀(๑ᵔ⌔ᵔ๑)!

The author brings up a lot of shortcomings of the male protagonist in the harem that I can't figure out. He obviously has no merit and is even inferior, but there are many women who fall in love with him. It's very interesting.

Author, why are there so few people in your novel so pitiful? π_π It's over, but it's pretty good

I wanted to give you two stars, but seeing as you are a newbie, you still need some encouragement. In fact, what others said is correct. It is equivalent to Brother Chen having the ability to travel through time to conquer other female protagonists. If this author returns it to me, it won't work. Give me a five-star rating first.

The male protagonist is still relatively fragile. I just finished reading the first chapter. It is true that the male protagonist has psychological problems due to the environment of his native family [eat melon] I suggest that Gu Qingxian can treat the dog well [sneaky smile]

When I saw this novel, I thought it was a cool novel, but I ended up smoking a pack of cigarettes. The family in front of me really seemed to have happened to me. It happened in school. I lived alone and worked alone. I also fantasized about having a friend to share my life with, but I also got together like the protagonist. I fantasized about having an app that I could use to live an extraordinary life, but the reality is that reality cannot be changed. I hope the author will update more.

It's a good book, but the writing felt a bit immature at first, but later on it felt pretty good, keep up the good work

It's okay, but the protagonist needs a relatively long time to leave

Come on! Five stars for encouragement, I read it in one go. Although the author is still a little new, I think it is enough

The subject matter is still good. No matter what others say, it is already very awesome to be able to write it. I am happy to read it and I am happy to do it. You have to work hard.

Although... But I like Xiaola

It's pretty good. Come on, code words [laughing]

Very nice, come on

The subject matter is novel and quite good.

I hope some supporting characters will also have the opportunity to appear, Xiao La, Wang Xue and now Qing'er

The author's book is so good. I hope you can update it more. I will always support you.

The subject matter is very novel, but there are a lot of typos. Considering newcomers, five stars are given.

Come on, this book is really good. I hope the author can read more [laughter]

I really feel good about it and it's quite interesting. I hope the author won't stop updating and stick to it.

Ok ok ok

Author, please code words The author, the male protagonist can't do it in reality, but he has to stand up in fantasy.

Come on, author, I think the kidnapping around chapter 50 is unreasonable. If I were a young man in time travel, I wouldn't eat beef.

The writing is very good, but the yandere flavor is not strong enough

It's nothing, I just like it and I will always encourage you, author, don't give up [Like]

The book is very good, and the plot is also good. For me, the only shortcoming is the chocolate plot. Please give it a five-star encouragement [Chigua]

Very beautiful very

It's good to watch, I love watching it, and I'll keep watching it, but White Snake is a bit hard to get used to. Come on, come on, come on!

Very good book

I can only say that the low rating is not without reason, and it still needs to be polished. But there are some bright spots, please encourage me

The setting is novel and the content is interesting, including the stories and real-life characters that keep appearing. There are too many and it is difficult to grasp. Overall, it is a good success.