Junior Brother Lei Linggen and Senior Brother Sword Cultivator HE Are Here

This is a double book in which the main heroine enjoys the story in the early stage. Although the protagonist is the main character in the mid-term, the income is always the senior sister's full income, whoring is free. In the later stage of the past life memories, I skipped to read the ending, so I only commented on the ending of the past life chapter that I saw. In my opinion, the senior sister's role is full, and then the book comes to the end. Generally speaking, as long as the senior sister appears, she is the home, and the little sisters who don't like it can avoid the lightning.

The first one is that the senior sister has too many ink pens, and the golden finger given to him is too big. The supporting role cannot be higher than the protagonist, right? My sister has a strong identity and her own qualifications are also very good, and now she has a divine weapon and a divine beast. You, the divine beast, seem to be the official partner of the senior sister, and she also seems to have a mysterious identity. However, the first of the two protagonists has very few emotional scenes between them, and she feels like an ordinary senior brother. And the junior brother, the second one is their life experience, they seem not to be compared to the senior sister, the qualifications are also the protagonist Shou only has one Lei Linggen, but the qualifications seem to be quite high, the qualifications of the protagonist attack seem to be a genius setting, but the senior sister is also a genius design, I feel that the protagonist Shou and the protagonist attack are both available in some worlds, and It's better than the two of them. In terms of luck, I feel that the luck of the protagonist Gong and Shou is not as good as that of the senior sister. Because the protagonist Gong and Shou, even if they have good things, the senior sister will get one later. Just like the protagonist Shou entered the secret realm and got a spiritual beast. When I came, the senior sister got a mythical beast, and the protagonist I also gave some of the things that Shou left in the secret realm to my senior sister. The star stones I obtained in them allowed me to make my natal weapon. The protagonist Gong refined a sword, and this sword was still of an earth level. I remember it seemed to be an earth level, but it seemed to be able to grow upwards according to the protagonist Gong's cultivation level. It seems that the protagonist Shou, in the secret realm I got a thunder and lightning, and this thunder and lightning, the protagonist is not allowed to have his own natal weapon, the protagonist only has an earth-level spirit sword, but your senior sister has an artifact, and this artifact has a spirit, and there is a tree with a spiritual energy group on it. This tree was also discovered by my senior sister, but my sister's setting is too high It's too full, even more so than the main character. The relationship between the two main characters seems to have been deliberately added, and the transition is not very good. When I saw the senior sister in the middle got both a mythical beast and a magical weapon, I thought I was reading a story about a strong female character, but then I re-read my resume to find out. What I originally watched was a pair of male protagonists cultivating immortals, and the protagonist is lucky. I didn't see anywhere that the protagonist's luck is particularly good. I can only say that it is good. I got a secret realm, and this secret realm allowed the protagonist to have something and gain a space. Moreover, this space was also damaged. The ability of this space Ten do not save one, and the senior sister obtained the artifact is particularly powerful. This is to make the senior sister weaker and not let her surpass the protagonist. I am not talking about this senior sister, she must be particularly weak, or something, but she can't be too powerful, or change it into a strong female novel.

To be honest, I quite like this book. I really like the protagonist's various opportunities and his progress with Gong. But I think the description of the second senior sister is a bit overdone. The protagonist is not as good as her in terms of opportunities, cultivation, status, and luck. Her official match seems to be better than hers. She herself is quite powerful, she knows magic spells and formations. But as for the protagonist, he doesn't feel like he has any special abilities. He has a thunder root, but it doesn't feel like it's useful. His senior sister is just a proper heroine, with an affectionate, powerful and perfect official match. I know the author wanted to flesh out the characters of the supporting characters, but your portrayal of the protagonist was too little and not clear enough. It felt like he was nothing special, and the emotional line between the two protagonists was not clear, so I basically never saw it. Except for some hints in the last few chapters, there is nothing. But I still like the plot. That's right, the protagonist is too weak now, so he still needs to improve himself. At least you have to have some special skills, whether it's swordsmanship or something else, you have to be good at it. I know he knows swordsmanship, but he's not good at it and doesn't have strong attack power. I don't know what skills the author wants him to learn. I'm still looking forward to it, don't let me down! I hope they can all prove the truth together

Nice. This kind of book has a good overall concept. I haven't seen it for a long time. It looks good and big. There will be more and more to come [Sending my heart] That's it. . . . The main character's limelight was stolen by the senior sister. Feel. . . Senior sister is more like the protagonist [laughs awkwardly]

It looks good, but the author seems to like to use exclamation points, and sometimes it looks a bit fierce. How should I put it, I feel like I've over-emphasized the Second Senior Sister's story. If I hadn't read the story about the two male protagonists, I would have thought it was a romance novel I'd read before.

It's okay, it looks good hehehehehehe The author can write more delicately in terms of emotions, which will make it more natural. The other plots are actually quite good, come on! Second time Why does the senior sister have so much better opportunities than the protagonist? . Another genius with artifacts and beasts. . Moreover, both of them are time-travelling, and the protagonists are not outstanding at all compared to the two. The protagonist is made to look like a supporting character [face covering] I hope the author can focus on the two protagonists. You can write supporting characters, but the characters of the supporting characters should not be more fully developed than the protagonist. Use pen and ink to write more about things related to the protagonist's personality, portray the protagonist's character, and the protagonist's opportunities. The luck of the protagonist should not be lower than that of the supporting character. It has to be better than the supporting role. The same goes for Gong. Describe more about the two people getting along and growing together. Gong should also focus on writing. Come on!

It's good to watch, I love to read it, please update more, it's so funny. I originally wanted to read it again, but I can't wait to read it. I will read it every day when I see an update.

In the early stage, I read: The senior sister (not the protagonist) looks too much like the protagonist [exploration] I watched it later: It feels so good, so good, it smells so good [shy], and the main character is too sweet [blowing kiss] Although Senior Sister did have a lot of writing in the early stages, it was really satisfying after getting through 100 chapters. The protagonist's golden fingers are full, and Senior Sister's scenes are much less. New readers, don't give up. The rest of it is really awesome [Chigua] (Only personal advice: don't fight, don't fight, don't fight)

I hope that the male protagonist will be able to act alone a little bit in the future when he becomes more powerful.

The emotional line is very slow, a bit similar to Long Aotian and so on. Currently, I think it is a bit biased towards male videos. Well, I think this second senior sister, although the character design is okay, but I don't particularly like it. She should be a very slow-burning one. Well, the protagonist's luck is very good. Well, I suggest speeding up the process [please update] [sending heartfelt messages]

It's pretty good, but I feel like the senior sister who wrote it is more powerful than the protagonist.

[Laughing and crying] At the beginning, if it weren't for the two male protagonists written in the introduction, I would have thought that the senior sister was the protagonist, and her luck was better than Yaoyao [laughing] [laughing] But it was quite good, and I finished it in one sitting [face covering] It was really hard to cry when I went there a hundred thousand years ago at the end

It's good to watch, and the more you watch it, the more exciting it becomes, and the relationship between the two male protagonists becomes sweeter and sweeter.

After reading half of it, I feel that the author is suitable for writing a micro-group portrait or a team cultivation novel. The emotional line can be ignored. The protagonist's CP sense is not strong. The scenes have always been the senior sister and junior brother. Even the senior sister has more descriptions than the junior brother, and the senior brother has become the background.

The writing is very good, but there are too many supporting roles in the early stage! So I gave it one less star, but the author wrote it very well. I hope the author can write better and better. Come on!

It's quite good-looking, a bit biased toward geniuses, but the description is not very sublime. The protagonist's talent is good, and his sect and family are harmonious. It has a somewhat plain but happy feeling. It's a pity that although the protagonist's spiritual roots and good luck are mentioned, they are not particularly outstanding in the description. This is not enough to make my heart itch. Now I'm at Chapter 50, and there's no emotional line yet. The author should give it a lot of credit and give me more [blowing kisses]

The excellent character design is not without thought. What I like most is that the protagonist's outlook on life is related to the surrounding environment. Good people will not grow up in a bad environment. Each character has his own story. This is the first time I see such a positive article, I support it!

I just feel like the senior sister's role is a bit too much.

The two male protagonists are great, but the senior sister's role is a bit too much, and it's too late to catch up with the main female protagonist.

The plot is generally good, and the character of the protagonist is relatively full, but the configuration of the senior sister is really too high, much higher than the two protagonists. I think the configuration of this supporting cast should not exceed that of the two protagonists. This overwhelms the two protagonists. I hope there will be improvements in the next version [Chigua] The plot is good, I still like the main character very much

I watched it in one sitting, it was really good. Gu Jingyuan and Su Yao rushed to each other and joined forces. When I first watched it, I almost thought it wasn't about two male protagonists when I saw Ye Mingshu. But as I slowly read, I realized that this senior sister is very good. Maybe there was too much description of her at the beginning, but then it mainly focused on the two male protagonists. Then I saw that Ye Mingshu had found his own destination and was with Mo Lin. The two couples really have no regrets, and they actually responded to the word "happy" written by the author at the end. And "Jing Yao" CP is also happy in their world. If possible, I still hope that the author can write more extra chapters.

I love watching it, it's a bit cruel, but it's not harmful, and I think it's still a bit short. I really like it, can there be more extras [crying] I finished it in one go, and after reading the comment section, it was quite polarizing. I think this book is, at best, like an immature group portrait novel, but at worst, it's indifferent. I think there's too much emphasis on the female supporting role, but I accept it well. The only problem is that What I am very satisfied with is that there is almost no description of the process of the senior brother falling in love with the junior brother. It is too little and it makes people feel grateful. But, in hindsight, it seems that it must have been influenced by his previous life, but there is still too little written about this life [facepalm]

The few who have finished the exam asked. There are indeed many roles for the senior sister, but the excitement of the male protagonist comes out later. I can still read it, but I don't understand the mythical beast. I ended up with a natal mythical beast. Maybe it's because my identity is too awesome. It's okay.

Hehehe, it looks good, it's great, it's wonderful, ヾ(Ő∀Ő๑)ﾉIt's so exciting! I support you, keep working hard, but the chapters are a bit short, I haven't read Yin yet ((o(´∀｀)o)) cheering (*˘˘*).｡.:*♡

It's quite good to watch, but there are a lot of senior sisters in the front, and there is no emotional line of the protagonist. I almost thought that they were not bisexuals, and they didn't appear in the back. Overall, it is very good.

It's a very heartwarming article. The sect is harmonious, the family tradition is good, there are no family spirits, and all enemies are external. Very comfortable to watch. It's just that the part where you suddenly return to the God Realm and become the Son of God and go through the process is a bit stiff.

It was pretty good. Then towards the end, the style was not as relaxed as before, but it can still be considered a 🍅 story that doesn't have too many chapters to read. What I like the most is that there is no intrigue among the protagonist's sect, and the atmosphere is very harmonious. The masters and masters don't hide their secrets, the disciples are united, and the peak masters are united. There are no bad things written about it, which makes me feel comfortable.

I want to see the love line. When will the sweet love between the senior brother and the younger junior brother be revealed?

It looks good, but the character of the senior sister is not well written and has no sense of boundaries. Everything else looks good [Like][Like][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The plot setting is very good and coherent, and the plot is also ups and downs, which makes people can't help but keep reading. However, the senior sister got the opportunity to write it in too detail. I think it is only necessary to write in detail about Linmo, and others can be mentioned in one sentence.