The Yukinoshita Yukino Development Plan

The front is a bit like a composition. Maybe school teachers will give high marks to this kind of book. In fact, if you read modern literature, you will know that this kind of gorgeous writing style is basically not used. After all, novels convey images, not prose. It is a novel that uses simple writing style to write the most profound truth. The adjectives themselves have their own annotations. , Can be the icing on the cake if used well, but if used incorrectly, the words will not convey the meaning, are deliberately mysterious, and are suspected of deliberately showing off literary talent, which will make the article seem quite exaggerated. When the feelings you express are not supported by enough connotation, it is the so-called gold and jade, but the outside is ruined. You can read Yu Hua's works. I still like it.

Ya, but really not suitable for writing this kind of subject matter. Most people who read fan fiction don't use a lot of brain cells to understand it. White text would be better, this kind of reading is too tiring. But it's also a good article.

Tsk, there is a sense of pretentiousness in the stories written by literary youth authors about literary youths, which is indeed a bit beyond the common aesthetic form of this platform... But according to our little bourgeois aesthetic, it is really a masterpiece, and it also brings many characteristics of Japanese light novels. It can be regarded as combining the flavor of literary youth, petty bourgeoisie sentiment and the light melancholy of the second dimension❤️

The writing style is very good, but I feel that it is not suitable for writing about fans. Writing about fans is a waste of talent. The author's writing style has the feeling of youth pain literature.

I read a few, and the writing is quite good, but I think this kind of writing is not suitable for a youth novel like Chunwu. I came to the fandom to read different stories, or to bring myself into the text to feel comfortable. This requires a straightforward and relaxed narrative method. Too much rhetorical modification will make people brain-burning. Of course, this is a personal opinion. This book is very literary and many people will definitely like it. Come on, author, I will follow you first and look forward to you writing an original literary work of your own in the future. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The writing style and depth of this book are suitable for slow-paced reading. It can be said to be against the trend of current fan fiction, but it can definitely be said to be a good book, and it also reflects the author's literary quality from the side.

The writing is very good and makes my brain start thinking again. However, I have read another book written by the author before, but I can't find it now. I don't know why. In fact, the author can completely conceive his own original characters, and there is no need to copy them from the TV series. If he writes them, it will be a good book. Finally resurrected, I can be considered an old fan [full]

The first few pictures are a bit boring, but the atmosphere becomes lively later on. The protagonist seems to have the same way of thinking as a great teacher. To sum up, this book is very interesting.

It should be said that the author is actually trying to write other genres. The quality and literary style of the book have been discussed in depth and are not suitable for the subject matter. You can try not to use the world view and characters of other animations or novels. Using self-created characters can give the characters more soul and color.

Good. My habit of reading novels is to read ten lines at a glance, especially today's short-form texts, which can be understood at a glance. This book by the author has too many metaphors and is cryptic, but it is very interesting. After reading more than 10 chapters, I feel a little tired. I will wait until I calm down and savor it again. After reading too many refreshing articles, I will feel a little overwhelmed. Overall an interesting book.