Is Your Use of Magic Going Too Far?

The setting is quite interesting, and the writing is also good. I hope it is a CP-free story. The male protagonist who is engaged in career is really attractive, okay?

I hope there will be more female protagonists, who can have both career and love.

It's very powerful. The harem story has an inner flavor and the details are well written. Full marks.

The characters are vivid, the writing is good, and you can watch it, but there are also many problems. At first, it was said that the protagonist used the Eye of God without any consumption, and later it was said that the protagonist used several big moves, which cost a lot. Then he said that the Eye of God has great limitations and that you have to learn magic by yourself. OK, of course you can learn it. There are many skills that are not overwhelming, but there is no way to develop the Eye of God at all. The protagonist himself also said that the Eye of God is very powerful. , I need to develop the ability of the Eye of God, but there is no action. It is really putting the cart before the horse. The protagonist's system is unique. The protagonist is so strong because of the system and the Eye of God. In fact, when fighting people, the protagonist basically relies on the power of the Eye of God to win. When fighting Voldemort later, the protagonist and Voldemort used magic to fight a few moves, and then he was beaten internally. , I almost can't use the magic I learned, I still can only use the Eye of God, the ability of the Eye of God is sometimes strong, sometimes weak. At the beginning, it was said that the Eye of God will come with the ability of the character. When you get the Eye of Lisa, you can control the thunder element. If you don't have a wand, you can directly release thunderstorms when you don't know any magic. You also gain magic knowledge and talent. After that, you have a wand, which means you can strengthen your opponent. The Eye of God releases skills to control and increase its power. When you obtain the Eye of God of Sugar, you gain knowledge of alchemy and can control the wind element. The protagonist rubs a whirlwind in his hand, and rides a magic broom with the help of wind element in Quidditch competition. When you obtain the Eye of Mona God, you control the water element and can move freely underwater. When you obtain the Eye of Ganyu God, you control the ice element, and the surrounding area is surrounded by rain. Wen, when he obtained Zhongli's Eye of God, there was an earthquake, and the article said that Zhongli actually did not have the Eye of God, and the protagonist completely and directly inherited Zhongli's abilities and personality (the protagonist relied on Zhongli's personality to break the age limit set by Dumbledore for the Goblet of Fire, and almost broke the Goblet of Fire). The so-called Eye of God was just a carrier created by the system, and then the protagonist only used Zhongli's Eye of God. Open the shield and zoom in to recruit Tianxing, and then the shield is still brittle. Who is Zhongli? God of War, Emperor of the Rock King. He started at the age of 5000. He wiped out the Demon God. He can change the terrain when he fights. The rock gun he shot down created the island of Guyun Pavilion. Voldemort and what are those little bastards under him? There is also Funina's Eye of God, which improves the control of the water element. The protagonist is only used to show off. Magic Mirror Hair During the press conference, they played tricks, made a waterfall, and then changed it into a curtain, a staircase, a water curtain to display the ppt, and obtained the God's Eye of Villette, and only used the breath of Villette to frighten the Phoenix. Obviously the protagonist can use the God's Eye freely and can make his own moves, but he can't, so he only uses the fixed skills of the God's Eye, and the protagonist clearly knows the development behind the original work, and knows about Harry's body. There is Voldemort's soul inside, and he will be controlled by Voldemort, so he doesn't want to change. He cares about Harry for a while, and then lets it go. There is also a person with the prophet's blood from the Ministry of Magic who predicted to the protagonist that he will be stabbed in the back by the people around him. The protagonist is just like the characters in those horror movies and directly regards the prophecy as nonsense. The protagonist clearly knows that the prophet in the original book has made a successful prediction, so he doesn't care. The protagonist obviously knows that he is fragile. If he doesn't have a shield, he will still be injured and die when attacked. He should at least take some precautions.

It looks good, but that comment is poisonous. I can't see it.

The author is great, when the male protagonist gathers all the God's Eyes, there will be "seven dragon balls to summon the dragon". Will all the gods in the original God tear apart time and space to the male protagonist's time and space? Hope there is [send heart][send heart]

It's the best-looking time-travel novel I've ever read, and it's cool where it should be. It's just that the updates are a little slow, but it's more stable than anything else. The worldviews of Genshin Impact and Harry are perfectly combined! There is no sense of fragmentation. And there is nothing very embarrassing) There are very few poisonous points! You can really watch it for a long time! [Sending Hearts] Sincerely recommend!

Well enough. But there are some minor pitfalls, such as the early gossips that casually revealed irrelevant plot points, and the key plot points began to appear that the protagonist himself was strict and would not spread rumors without evidence. The biggest problem at the moment is that Sirius is still wanted in Triwizard Tournament. I don't know if the author did it on purpose or accidentally.

This is a fan novel that I have read so far, oh no, it should be the only one that is such a good fusion of elements and magic. The plot is smooth and the characters are relatively fleshed-out. So far, there are no major negative points, except that it is not very friendly to Snape. (If you like Snape, you should not read this book)

I've read about 60% of it so far. I haven't read many Harry Potter fans so I don't have much to compare with, but I felt quite comfortable reading this one. First of all, it can be seen that the author is very thoughtful about the setting and is very familiar with the original work, which made me feel very involved in reading it. Then, the author has a good control over the rhythm. Just fighting or drama will be boring, but the author can control the rhythm well and make it comfortable to read. It can be said that the plot design of this book is still very good. As for the question, the only thing that comes to mind is that there is almost no emotional drama. Regardless of whether the author plans to write about a harem or a single female protagonist, it seems that it will not have much impact on the plot so far. It is recommended that this book be read as a plot novel and not have any expectations for this part. The one thing that is not a problem is that the protagonist can be said to be invincible before fighting Voldemort. The abilities given by the system can be used to deal with any situation. He gives you a chance before doing something, and then completes it perfectly. It seems very cool, but it is a bit boring if it has always been this routine. Thinking, I prefer to watch the confrontation between characters other than the protagonist. For example, other people's matches in the Quidditch match can give me a sense of tension, but as soon as the protagonist appears, it feels like the game is over, and there is no suspense about winning. Otherwise, this book is excellent and highly recommended.

The author's writing style is a bit high. I have read so many Harry series fanfics. The writing style of this book is the closest to that of the earlier fanfic "Harry Potter: The Secret Treasure". That is considered the pinnacle of the early Harry Potter series.

Oops, it's such a pity that such a beautiful book has such a low score. What impressed me most in the whole book was the plot with the fire dragon and the second direct battle with Voldemort. After the setback, I guess I was in a hurry to finish it, so the writing was a bit sloppy. I had no problem with the whole book and it gave me a great surprise. I think this is the best book in the Harry Potter series that I have read. The road is long and the sea of ​​books is vast. Goodbye, everyone. [Understood][Understood]

How should I put it? Starting from more than 300 chapters, the latter part is obviously not as rich as the previous one, but it is more exciting than the previous one. Near the end, a Carol is introduced, who is probably the protagonist of the next book. I am starting to look forward to it.

Everything else is pretty good looking, but not very friendly to Sri Lanka.

I don't know whether it's more or less, Zhang Qiu definitely counts, but Hermione and Fu, they both seem to like the male protagonist, but why does the male protagonist look so frigid? I can't tell if it's one person or more. It looks like there's a single heroine at the moment, but it's ambiguous.

It's good to read, but one thing is bad. The update speed can't keep up with my viewing speed. This will make me let the real book eat dust for a while. I'll take a look again when I have the chance.

There is a new setting and a happy ending, which is very happy. The first half of the book and the second half of the book are two parts, very sudden, with no foreshadowing, and even the system does not appear later. It feels like it was written by two people.

Can you give the protagonist a magical costume later [laughing]

It's good to read. At least in Tomato HP, this book is considered first-class or top-notch. Use elemental power to promote the plot and make "slight" changes to the original progression. Although the power of the Eye of God is beyond the standard, it is still reasonable. At the same time, in order to prevent the protagonist from using the power of the Eye of God to directly kill Voldemort, a wave of reinforcements was given to Voldemort's forces in the later stages of the plot. The robber and even Dumbledore were not able to defeat him. This article draws out half of Harry's performance, highlighting the strength of the protagonist. But it's actually not that abrupt. After all, in the later stage, it will be a fight between gods and gods, and Harry will not be able to intervene.

Great book. The single heroine Zhang Qiu, Hermione and Fleur liked the protagonist but did not accept it. The protagonist's power is the Eye of Genshin Impact.

Everything is fine, but Qiu Zhang is really uncomfortable. She writes in English and you write Chinese like this. Her last name is Qiu. Other names besides her are normal.

Very pretty. Can the author please consider 1999? There are very similar ones in 1999. Such as 37, Marcus, 6 and so on.

A rare book, come on, author!

You seem to have forgotten the system rewards

It's pretty cool, but some characters are a bit too OOC. I just don't understand how those who say harem define harem. Hermione and the protagonist have nothing to do with each other, so the fact that Hermione likes the protagonist is a bit poisonous. Fleur's behavior doesn't deviate much from the original character, which is okay. The single female protagonist Qiu Zhang.

Unlike other similar novels, the more you read, the more interesting it becomes. Every day, the male protagonist is a true Sigma man, don't be deceived and don't have a harem

It's good to read, but it's new, so I suggest you save it and read it again.

If you want to read this book, I suggest you read Chapter 107 first. This is a poisonous point in my opinion. If you think it's okay, you can definitely read it. The book is really good, if it doesn't poison me (only for me)!

Good looking so far

It's really not enough. Why is such a good fan not on 9.50 [Smile]! The setting is bold and interesting, and so is the writing! But the ending was something I didn't expect. I thought Harry and Voldemort were going to try to fight each other, and the protagonist would come back to end it, but I didn't expect it to be a cruel lie [facepalm]