The Writing Is Tough, Not Bloody, and the Writing Is Unpleasant. the Male Protagonist Is Not Playful and Smiley, but Is Cold on the Outside and Cold on the Inside.
The writing is tough, not bloody, not funny, the male protagonist is not playful and smiling, cold on the outside and hot on the inside, traditional fairy tale, fantasy, rebirth, urban, can be knifed, can be tortured, that's it bt
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Are you tired of time travel, systems, cheats, cheats, and novels without detailed logic? Then I recommend you to read this slow-burn fairy tale novel that I just bought. Just looking at the name and introduction of this novel, you can feel the feeling of retro traditional fairy tale novels from ten years ago. It's very slow-moving, but the writing is very contagious. Watching the protagonist is like raising an electronic child. The protagonist of this novel is Lin Yan. He was an orphan who was picked up without spiritual roots, but by chance, he planted the most inferior five spiritual roots. He has been smart, kind and upright since he was a child. He is exactly the protagonist of ten years ago, but his qualifications are not good. At present, I have read 200,000 words and there are no plug-ins. I can only go up step by step. The details of alchemy, weapon refining, cultivation, and psychological activities are not at the same level as other novels. Even if they were placed in the pile of novels ten years ago, they would still be considered top-notch. I prefer the female characters in this novel. They are no longer vassals or concubines in other novels. They give me the feeling of self-improvement. I can't find many novels of this type. Some of the characters in it, ranging from monks to bandits, are all highly intelligent. What I like most is that the people who want to kill you will not talk to you too much. The people who want to kill you will definitely be fully prepared. But this novel is indeed too slow to catch on, and is incompatible with the current mainstream novels. It is like the new era of literature, which has abandoned the sailing ship of such books. If you want to have aftertaste after reading the book, then I think this novel is your best choice!
The writing is good, and the description of the characteristics of the villagers is more realistic. In the early stage, the male protagonist will question his ability and be confused because he has no spiritual roots. I think it is very real, and this situation also exists in reality. I will always support the author greatly
As someone who doesn't read much of Xiu Xian's novels, I accidentally saw it, and it was quite good. Although the first part is mediocre, I still have the desire to read more. I'm curious about Lin Yan's ending and whether the halo of the protagonist is too strong [laughing] The previous plot has many details, and it is not as fast-paced as many cool articles nowadays. I admire the author's great state of mind. It is rare to continue the story slowly like this. I support the author and he can continue to do so.
I have been a bookworm for 10 years, and the author has updated it to 300,000 words. I have also been chasing this book for a month, from 100,000 words to now. I will simply make a long comment here. At this time, it is an extremely slow-burning traditional fairy tale novel with no cheats or plug-ins, and is not a typical cool novel. The protagonist's name is Lin Yan. He is kind, steady, smart and bold. He is the character of the traditional fairy novels 10 years ago. At present, he has 300,000 words and no big ambitions. He just wants to go home. In today's world of literature where poor writing is the majority, this writing style and structure can be regarded as the best among the top-grade fairy novels, but it is still far from the best. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Chapter 103, about the revolving door of the moment before the protagonist is about to die, has shown the author's most sincere description of feelings. It reminded me of my deceased grandma and relatives, which made me very moved. This is why I wrote this long review. The description of pain in Chapter 102 made me feel scared even when I was sleeping. I don't know what the author went through to write such words. The description of the villagers in the early stage was very long, tens of thousands of words, but it was these foreshadowings that created Lin Yan's character. Let's briefly talk about the protagonist. He was picked up by a simple villager who had no worries about food and clothing. He has a pair of "Qing Ning Yuan Eyes" but no spiritual roots. The confusion in the early stage is very touching. The author spends a lot of pen and ink describing the intrigues among lower-level disciples due to lack of resources, which makes people feel helpless but very real. Lin Yan was also involved in the Buddhist Grottoes because of the greed of the lower-level disciples, and thus obtained the Bodhi Son and shaped the Five Spiritual Roots. I think this paragraph is the pinnacle of the early stage. The description of the Buddhist Grottoes is very epic and picturesque. I recommend you to read it. I have loved every chapter since then, whether it is the brainy bandit, the mortal Tian Ling who is trying to save himself, or the greedy Ding Yue who is afraid of death. They make me feel that they are a living person, a thinking person, rather than an appendage of the protagonist. The author respects the characters and respects the readers, which is why I like this novel so much. It has 300,000 words, and the only time the protagonist pretends to be is because Bodhisattva controls fire and makes elixirs. The plot is so twists and turns that I couldn't help but laugh out loud after reading it several times. Every time the protagonist deals with a crisis, there must be some foreshadowing beforehand, and the feeling of recycling the foreshadowing is very satisfying. Now that I have written 300,000 words, there are more and more foreshadowings, and the world is getting bigger and bigger. I can't help but keep chasing it, and I have found the feeling I had ten years ago. The work has not become a hit so far, perhaps because the current novel market cannot accommodate this kind of non-plug-in fairy tale novels that need to be read with brains. As for the author, a sentence you wrote is very suitable for you: "I hope that the little benefactor can still maintain his original intention no matter where he is on the road to immortality." I hope the same is true for your novels. In addition, I wish you a great success, come on. The description of the scenery is really incomparable. I'm not exaggerating. It's just that it's still completely foggy. I don't know what the protagonist's next step will be useful [face covering]
The unpretentious sentences are full of sincere feelings. Xiaolin Yan's experience from infancy is very real and full of touching. The author's structure is good, and the map he built is not small, but it is a bit straightforward and procrastinating. Overall, it is well received
Very good. I haven't found a good novel in a long time.
Keep up the good work and write good works