Villain: Omniscient Storyline! the Protagonist's Mother Starts

The plot is quite good and quite coherent. Unfortunately, the plot is a bit short, the number of chapters is a bit short, and the pace is a bit fast. It can be considered a qualified and refreshing article.

Well written, good luck to the author. Pure cool writing. But you should change the author's name. You should be called Mr. Delete

It can be predicted that the final ending is not finished in just a few sentences.

The cheats are a bit powerful, the ending is a bit rushed, but otherwise it's pretty good. It's a fun read.

This is a cool article. It's really good and beautiful.

I just finished watching it, and I think it's still okay. The protagonist is invincible, he picks up girls quickly, and he doesn't have a lot of supervision. But for some reason, the writing is a little tighter at the end, and it feels like it's gone as soon as you get started. Anyway, if you want to kill time, you can still watch it. [Cover face]

Pepe should write a little more later, but overall it's pretty good.

The ending is a bit short but still very exciting. If you want to see the details, please don't comment.

Well written, keep up the good work.

Not bad. Looking forward to the next book.

It's really good

Good, good, good, good