After the End of the Path to Immortality

The author of this novel is a treasure! No one knows? ! Then I have to move! The author's writing style is delicate, the characters' characteristics are very distinct, the overall content is very complete, and it is not the kind of article that is mindless and logical. That's the hexagram I like hehehehe. If there is anything else that is not good, it is that this is a novel that is being serialized! I'll wait! Sit back and wait for updates [please update]

The author's writing is very good! ! There won't be many flashy metaphors, but at the same time, the text has a strong sense of picture, and there is no need to rely on piles of words to create a vague beauty. (I've seen too many of these on Tomato :-/) The plot is also very good and fascinating, and I really enjoyed the character design! ! I was too busy a while ago and now I have the final exam. I haven't read it for a long time. I'll catch up on my progress during the summer vacation.

I'll give it five stars first. The writing is fluent, not the kind of sloppy writing that describes Shou's beauty throughout. There are too many scenes of abuse of the main character in the early stage, which makes me feel uncomfortable, sick and vomiting blood. However, it is quite comfortable and comfortable to read later. I look forward to the development of the main and emotional lines in the future. The character design is good.

Why is such a beautiful book not popular? It's so unfair. This is the best book I've read in the past seven or eight years. I hope it won't be a dud! I wait for updates every day. I hope this book becomes popular! ! ! Love love love love Can you update two chapters every day? It's really well written, I follow it every day...

It turned out to be a rare pure-blood native who has not traveled through time and is not reborn😭 I ate it up

Will the protagonist finally recover his spiritual roots? Or have you been practicing spiritual awareness? I feel so sorry for little Zhi'er

Author, please keep updating. I see that you haven't updated for almost 3 days. Hahahaha. Although I have just started to read about Chapter 10, I like this story very much and I must finish it! (Also, I would like to ask what percentage of the plot progress is now)

This book is super beautiful, the writing is top-notch, the plot is eloquently told, and the protagonists get along with each other very well! ! Get fired up! ! !

The writing is smooth and ancient, and the language and characters are mutually exclusive; The characters grow with flesh and blood, and have their own personalities and thoughts; Combining it with realistic plots, it is different from the traditional fairy tales that only focus on cultivating immortals and lazily cultivating the mind. It has new ideas; The plot development is logical, and the revenge trail is innovative, which makes people's eyes bright. Overall, it's a good article.

It's really beautiful! The plot connects quite naturally, I like it!

The book is quite good, so please give it a thumbs up to the author!

It looks good, the writing is very good and smooth, and the dialogue and plot are also very smooth.

Very good, worth a look! I hope the emotional line won't be too cruel [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] The writing is very good It's really beautiful. Why are there so few people? To be honest, this introduction is not very attractive to me, but it is really good-looking! It's very natural, very delicate, and very gentle [send heart] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] jiejiejiejie I want to see them sweet and sweet [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] Author, come on, come on! ! ! The author has a big start! The author reminds you to pay attention to safety when driving! Be careful to avoid auditing vehicles! The author urges you to drive healthily! I want to see something sweet! ! Jie Jie Jie (Dark and creepy, twisted, the author please leave me alone, I'm going crazy hahahahaha)

The characters of the two protagonists are not the popular time travel style (? I was pleasantly surprised! The article is very smooth to read, and I personally think it is not inferior to some of the same type of articles on the hot list. Come on, teacher!

I discovered a treasure book. It's very delicately written. I haven't seen such a good-looking book for a long time [shy][shy]. I was almost fooled by the introduction, but it's so good that I read it.

It's very interesting and the plot is very compact. But I want to ask the author, how many thousand words do you estimate for this book? Now I'm almost equal.

Very nice, I like it very much

Very interesting, good luck to the author

Like! ! Big dogs are so cute! !

I really like the author's writing style I'm really anxious, Dada, I'm hungry, Fanfan [I'm about to cry] [Sending my heart]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking really nice

Very interesting, good luck to the author

Very good quality article.

The tiger is really cute.

I didn't get any important points for a long time

It looks good. I want to know if I can continue to practice after receiving it, or if I can continue to practice the sea of ​​consciousness. Is there a theory of lifespan?

I'm not saying it's too much. I'm stuck at this point. Please update soon.

The plot is perfect, the protagonist is really strong, but the emotional line is too awkward. I hope the knot can be solved as soon as possible. Xiao Zheer, you deserve to be loved.

I really like this book. I like the character of the protagonist very much. Great support for the author. I have read the latest chapter. I hope there will be no prison plot in the future.

It's very interesting, the writing is good, and the plot is fascinating. It shouldn't be rated so low.