The Time-Travelers Acting Against Each Other Have a Systematic

Well written. In order to prevent some people from recommending this book among the "big heroine stories" and misunderstanding some readers who want to read heroine stories, I have seen the latest chapter and can make it clear: this is a group portrait story, not a story about a big heroine without cp, and the only intelligent character with the title of "big boss" is a male. Although each story is more or less exciting, and the characters are portrayed in different styles, there is still a vague feeling that "strong women are stronger than men", and the number of genders in the protagonist group is indeed uneven. As a group portrait, it is good, but it is by no means a female protagonist. After reading some of the later updates, I can only say that if you read it as a story about a heroine, you will be disappointed. Sisters who love heroines should leave after reading the first story. I don't know where the brave and scheming heroine is, or if she has been tricked into the book.

It's good-looking. Apart from the few flaws, several protagonists have a story line, and I look forward to the follow-up development. The author's imagination is really great, and the logic of the story is also very good. The point that Jianghu is not about fighting and killing, but about human relationships is particularly interesting.

It looks really good, and the knife is also a real knife. I laughed so happily in the front, but I cried so much in the back that I broke down. Listening to the snow extra episode made me cry to death, Xiao Gu ahhhh! Death Soldier and Xiao Gu are the only ones that made me burst into tears What the author wrote is really very real. This is the true reflection of the time traveler after traveling to another world and struggling to survive. Unlike in some articles, once you travel through time, you know everything and can build anything. Everyone has to figure it out on their own. No cp group portrait and high writing skills! Everyone has a very distinct personality and image I don't understand. There is indeed something wrong with the article. We didn't criticize it and the tone was fine. We just pointed out the contradictions in the article and hoped that the article could be revised. But why did we just disband the fan group? ? Escape? We didn't argue, we just discussed what was unreasonable, and everyone had a good attitude. So I really don't understand your actions. You have supported this book for several months, promoted it everywhere, and even wrote tens of thousands of words for AiDian. Your actions are really chilling!

It's really great. It's a really great group portrait. Huaihan (the orphan) is outspoken and likes to overcome all obstacles with one force. The police officer (the orphan) looks cold but actually loves to worry the most. Although No. 1 (Gu Jiu) is unreliable, he will always do earth-shattering things unexpectedly. (The protagonist of Dihua flow), although the dead man is a non-chief, he is either on the run or surviving in the wilderness, but fortunately he has the support of his partners, including the newly added boss named "Big Boss" (the boss is a real boss). He looks crazy, but in fact The scheming prince, the official lady who single-handedly supported the reputation of traveler literature but could not escape the fate of being a social beast, the very European and cute girl No. 8, And the "minor" Xiao Jiu who was cared for by his friends and found himself little by little, there are The smart and cautious No. 10, Shangguan Lian who longs for freedom and hopes that her sisters can be safe, Lian Er who inherits Shangguan Lian's will, Huai Shuang who is sober and caring for her sister, Wen Qingzhu who has been immersed in guilt for many years... Everyone has flesh and blood and highlights. If there is anything bad about this article, it is that the author is not quick to update it, but good works must be polished carefully.

A very good book, I really like Shangguanlian! ! The plot of the first volume and the relationship between the characters are very interesting and left a deep impression on me. Everyone was happy and playing together. By the end, the whole story was sublimated. They are all cute and adorable babies. Personally, I felt that the second volume was really not good. I read a little bit and then stopped reading. The new characters were really unlikable, and there wasn't much plot for the dead man and the storyteller (I read the author's words), and I wasn't interested in getting to know the new characters. The second volume gave me the feeling that this article was going to become a unit article, and it was only told from Huaihan's perspective. To sum up, the first volume is really perfect! ! There has never been a book that shocked me so much. The introduction of new characters in the second volume was quite disgusting (?) And it seems that the author meant that the second volume should focus on writing new characters. Maybe it is because I am more extreme and I really don't like the addition of new characters (so I stopped reading the second volume after reading more than half of it). Let me tell you, the first volume is a true god! ! Strong amway (bixin

After reading the first volume, I can't help but give it a five-star review. The characters are really well created. Everyone is real and vivid, and their personalities have contrasts and reversals. I originally thought that Huai Shuangyi was a soft and weak girl, but she actually saw that Huaihan was not the original sister a long time ago. She said, "Sister A doesn't know anything and can run to a wider world." She has to bear the hatred of her parents alone. She knows that A Jie is not A Jie. She should not bear this hatred, and she is not willing to bear it. Such a weak girl, she was still only a few years old, but she could go to the Demon Cult out of hatred. I originally thought that Xiao Muling was a silly sweet girl who liked An Yizhi, a scheming girl, and the original heroine in countless routines. But she lurked here to bring down An Yizhi, and she planned every step to avenge her parents and eliminate demons. In order to get revenge, she separated from her brother and went to the Demon Sect. Huaishuang separated from her sister in order to avenge and went to the Demon Sect. They are both the same people. I originally thought that Shangguan Lian was an infatuated dead man who fell in love with the young master in the traditional way. Because of An Yi's ridiculous charity, he regarded An Yi as the light in his heart, but it was never the case. She was superb, cold, arrogant and flamboyant. She could have escaped from the prison long ago, but she didn't. She said that there are people she cares about here. There are junior sisters she cares about, and there are many dead soldiers she cares about. These dead soldiers should also live like human beings. Her wish has never been to get the young master, and she has never been a lover. She wants a broader world, and wants to lead these people out of the cage together. She is not a dead soldier, but a normal person. She is the Lotus in the Fire. She wants to use her final death to awaken the human will of these dead soldiers. The regret to make up for it has never been love. She just wants to walk out of the cage with her junior sister and take a slow walk in the sun together. She wants to take a man with strong martial arts skills but a dull heart to leave Huashan. Unfortunately, she can't do it. She wants to save him until her death. Unfortunately, no one knows about each other's happiness. The dead man's final desperate fight, Huaihan finally used Shangguanlian to kill the enemy even if he spent all his image points, the orphan tried his best to collect intelligence, the storyteller asked not for revenge when he died, but to find the orphan. This two-way rush, this true love in the world in a desperate situation. Each of them has flesh and blood, fighting for their ideals, and even though it is so difficult, they still do not give up. Even though it hurts so much, faith still shines in my heart. The main plot is obviously so sad, but they are so optimistic. The daily gags become the sharp daggers that stab the readers in the end. The comedy is filled with uncontrollable sadness, and the sadness is accompanied by extremely strong hope. When Lian Er was in despair, when she was about to be killed by Yong Chengzi, she saw - the sword light broke through the already extremely decayed door, and Feng Xue squeezed into the house desperately. It was Huaihan who disguised himself as Shangguanlian and risked his life to save her. Yongchengzi asked who Huaihan was, and she said that it was the ghost of Shangguanlian who turned into a ghost and came to demand his life. She said this—— "Her soul is filled with anger and resentment, and she doesn't want to see you waiting to cause harm to the world and play tricks on others. If she doesn't hear the call of the King of Hell or the hook of gods and ghosts, three souls will leave the underworld, seven souls will break through the netherworld, turn into evil ghosts and return to the mortal world, and come to seek life!" Yongchengzi died, Huaihan returned to her original appearance and was dying. She was only a few years old child at this time. She fell in the wilderness, longing for someone to save her. She could save others, but she could not save herself. She was in a coma for two months. When she woke up, she saw her sister in the white light for the first time. Huai Shuang said that she was not her sister. But how could Huai Shuang deny her sister? She just didn't want to be a drag anymore. "Her sister is unparalleled in the world and invincible. Even the leader of the martial arts league is worthy of it." What touches me very much is that the feelings in this novel are so sincere and run in both directions. This has always been the case and has never changed.

I have finished reading the first volume. I would like to call it Tomato's most gratifying and Jianghu novels. It is 10,000 times better than the otherworldly immortality novels on the list that are labeled as Jianghu novels and write about different levels of combat power. In this book, I can see the chivalrous righteousness of Jianghu people. Although it is a group portrait novel, the protagonist is... The characters are more three-dimensional and full-bodied, and the writing is much better than some of the high-scoring books written by men. It is rare that I can calm down and comment on a good article that I highly recommend. I don't comment on the writing. Everyone has their own preferences in this thing. The plot throws away the minor flaws, and it can be said to be the existence of a god.

It's really good to watch. I was still reading it at night when I was very sleepy. The cat outside was meowing like a child crying. I felt creepy while watching it. I felt that every sentence was carefully thought out. This is not what a novice can write! I will consider buying physical books whenever they come out (this poor person never buys physical books about the development of online novels) "Unbalanced male-female ratio": Life or death, gender is not important to them at all, and there is no love line. If you don't get married or have children, you can choose which gender you love. Number 5 has been lost, and number 1 has an unknown species. Maybe they will all forget their original selves in the future. I also hope that our world will be full of asexual people. "Strong women are stronger than men": It is true that No. 6 Is smarter, but the heroine is responsible for force. The heroine is not written as a brave and foolhardy martial arts idiot, but ten years later, she can use force to solve most minor troubles. She also has partners and smart people she can trust. She can take off some baggage. Otherwise, will the heroine die of exhaustion? ! The calligraphy and ink are also responsible for the writing. In fact, each has its own merits. Even if the author has really experienced these things, the author cannot completely create a character. "Disbanding the fan group": Although I did not participate, the author said that he is a novice in writing novels, and it is true that he cannot handle it well, but no one is perfect, and maybe he does not want to be affected by the outside world. For now, gender in this context is meaningless. This is their story, not the story of the heroine alone. If everything has to be about female heroes, then just call it "The Biography of Chu Huaihan"

This is the first time I see such a beautiful group portrait. Oh my gosh. The quarrels in the forum at the beginning made me laugh. Later when I saw them helping each other, I almost cried. [I almost cried]. They are all a good group of people. I really like their characters, their joyful grudges in the world, and their persistent righteousness in their hearts. . Come on, teacher! ! Very well written! ! So cool! ! I saved so many chapters because of school and finally tied up with the first volume hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha (^ω^) It will be fun to read the next volume when it is finished (*^ω^*) It's so beautiful. Author, I will support you forever. Hahahahahahahahahahaha. I found the treasure. I just love reading this kind of writing. Jie Jie Jie. Come on, code! ! ! ↖(^ω^)↗

The plot and character settings are pretty good, but it's all about knives. If you're mentally weak, don't watch it. It's easy to get depressed. I went into it because of the cheerfulness in the introduction, but I was almost fooled by the knife. It's all about struggle, pain, blood and tears, hatred for the world, and I can't be happy at all 🤕

It's super good-looking. Martial arts enthusiasts will not lose money if they invest in it. Although they have different identities, the time travelers are all good people. For time-travelers, the existence of the forum is a spiritual pillar, giving them a place to relax outside the cruel reality. They really like the friendship of group friends who support each other and show sincerity. The cool-looking bosses like Brother Bingjie become the comedic actors once they get together hahahahahahaha

What attracts me most about this book is the forum and the martial arts. When I read the beginning, I wasn't really interested because the other time travelers didn't seem very strong. Until the death warrior officially appeared, I fell in love with this book immediately. In addition, the storyteller's official appearance has become more sophisticated, and the perspective begins to switch constantly, and the sense of group portrait suddenly comes up. This is the bond between us time-travelers! Also very strong is the sense of martial arts. God knows how difficult it is to find a book that can make people feel "joyful". The author is really great, and the big scenes at the end of the volume are handled very well. There was fun and knives, and I laughed and cried at the same time. There are a lot of foreshadowings, and they are being recycled steadily. By the way, if you are a staunch CP party member, don't always click into the comment area like me, because many people are consuming CP... There are ten time-travelers in total, all with different characters. Basically, you can guess who said what in the forum without looking at the person's name. I love watching time travelers help each other! It's really a warm and harmonious family!

It is a real group portrait and a familiar martial arts arena. A group of people are joking around and complaining about each other, but they are serious about things, funny and meaningful, and they are a very warm family of time travellers. [Blow kiss] Although some people still don't have official names, as it was said at the beginning of the book, they are not the protagonists, but the character growth of each of them has been written out. The lack of names does not affect the story they leave behind.

At present, the four protagonists are working on multiple lines, with clear organization and no sense of disorganization. The heroine is also decisive in killing, attaches great importance to love and justice, and is quite suitable for the appetite. It's just too little, I wish there were more.

It's very interesting, the subject matter is novel, and the content is also very interesting.

The theme is very novel. A group of time travelers help each other and stay together in different worlds. There is no strong golden finger, and you have to be squeezed by the unscrupulous system. Only by accumulating enough high-priced impression points can you go home, but it is difficult to earn impression points. With the martial arts world as the background, the characters are portrayed with flesh and blood, showing the righteousness of family and country, as well as pain and humor. It makes people laugh and be touched by the characters. And one thing I like very much is that the original owner who is time-traveled is not a simple identity card. The original owner is a real person. They have their own ideals, hatred and life. After being passed through, people around them will notice their differences. This is very real. This is a very, very beautiful group portrait article. Highly recommended, no loss in investment.

Hahaha, it's so good to watch. It's the first time I've read a martial arts genre. This book is very well written. It's not looking for stories in memes, nor is it forced to be funny. It has its own style and its own comedy, especially because it's in literature, and the atmosphere of martial arts is still very strong. Time travel The mutual help and dialogue between the characters were quite funny, it was nice to watch, and there was something high-spirited about it, especially Lian Niangzi. Although I didn't cry, she is indeed a very three-dimensional person, and her wishes are also great. She and Qin also have a hard time getting over each other, which is a pity. Sigh, but it's normal for Jianghu Wen to have a knife. If he didn't have a knife, I wouldn't feel normal.

It's really beautiful! I came here based on my imagination at first, but I didn't expect it to be unexpectedly good-looking. Both the group portraits and the protagonists are very vivid and vivid. I have regained the enthusiasm of reading martial arts novels all night long many years ago! Jianghu is that glass of wine, a sword, a promise, and a body of passion. It is the youthful spirit and uprightness that I originally longed for. The reason why the devil is called a devil is because it deviates from the bright side of human nature! It's not what we call evil as righteousness at all! Right is right! So I sing, so I praise! Chongya Xiaochu! And use this blood to build the edge of your sword!

It is really an excellent group portrait article, and it is also a piece of gold that I, a professional tomato fisher, finally managed to fish out. I didn't expect that this book will be finished soon, which is very touching. I can guarantee that this book of ten characters will give a huge shock to those who like me have been sitting on tomatoes all year round. The plot distribution of each character is relatively even, and each person's character is very unique. The protagonists have no cp, and the book circle environment is also very good.

It is a very interesting group martial arts novel, with warmth, humanity, explosive points, trust and suspicion, conspiracy and straightforwardness, silence and honesty, from all-out indifference to speechless and concerned about everything, from the dangerous beginning of Tianbeng to the peaceful position of power, from panic and confusion with fantasy to being open-minded and accepting. As the plot progresses, the connection between the time-travelers and the world gradually deepens and is painted with new colors. The author's writing ability is also very commendable, and the plot arrangement is very brilliant! My heart beats so fast! Come! Look!

Each time traveler has a unique personality and background. They continue to grow and transform through mutual performances and cooperation. There are not only fierce confrontations of swords and swords, but also the lingering sadness of the love between children. Gratitudes and hatreds are intertwined, like an intricate net, tightly binding people. Every decision and every encounter may change a person's destiny and write a thrilling chapter. Those tragic stories have long been over. It's just that they, the time-travelers, forced another chapter in order to survive. But just this chapter is enough to change the fate of some people and allow the story to continue. This is the meaning of time-travel, right? The author's writing is very beautiful and the background of the story is great. Come on!

It's also a very awesome article written by Klaas. The group portraits are so cool. Oh, but the group portraits in the first volume are not obvious. They mainly focus on Chu Huaihan, also known as No. 4. This reassuring big sister is so determined and courageous. It's so cool. There are so many beauties here, hehe, and there are also No. 1, 2, And 5 who provide jokes. Group, I really like their interaction. The little Gu on the 3rd is also a cute creature. He was fragile and sensitive before untying the knot. After untying the knot, he also learned from the bad example of the 5th. Oh my God, the boss of the 6th is the most reassuring elder among the time travelers. The character of the 7th is also very real. , I am the same way, No. 8 Is like a little sun, kind but not weak, I was scared even when facing the Queen. Xiao Jiu is also growing up little by little in the company of the time travellers. He is very good at acting and has the qualities of an actor (reminds me of the drama "Five Men" again, it is really good) Laughing (laughing so hard that I can't breathe), No. 10 Doesn't have much pen and ink, but from the beginning he was on guard against time-travelers, and now he still defends the boss, which is really cool. I also love the tragedy of the if line, okay? I like it so much, so sad, so like, so sad... It's not enough at all! ! !

I sincerely recommend it. Everyone in it has flesh and blood, and there are extra stories to supplement the story. Spoilers below: 1. The boss is really sharp. He touched the truth several times and had to be rewashed in his memory (worship the boss) 2. I thought No. 8 Was a cute little girl and stopped paying attention to her. Who would have thought that she would be so smart and brave, and have strong ability to withstand stress (it's so cool that she can still remain normal under the baptism of the Demon Cult) In the beginning of No. 3.4, I used my intelligence to help my sister survive. How will the heroine directly choose to use force to solve the problem later (maybe it's because of the boss, mainly because the boss is too strong. I worship and worship the boss again) No. 4.3 Was quite open-minded when he was young. When he grew up, he pretended to be cold-faced, but he was still a person who was cold on the outside and hot on the inside. 5. Is No. 5'S mental state too normal (it's all the bug's fault), but No. 5 Did a lot of good work in many funny parts (at this time, I have to talk about a shit). Your eldest brother No. 5 Is actually the second most miserable person in the book (I think so, but I think no one doubts that the first most miserable person) 6. You, Miss No. 7, Are the real man with the body of a girl and the heart of a girl. I was surprised for a while when I knew that No. 7 Was a woman before traveling through time. However, helping No. 10 Take the scientific examination is really a hard life (don't be afraid of No. 7, Your life is at least not among the top two). On 7.9, I hope he can time travel. After all, he has lived under the camera since he was a child before time travel. It is really heartbreaking to have no self. But fortunately, after time travel, he received everyone's care and gradually gained self-awareness and self-emotion. When I saw this, I really felt that the big family of time travelers was so heartwarming. The following is a spoiler for later chapters (probably after more than 700 chapters): You were really wronged on the 8.10Th. Both time-travelers and readers suspected that you were the person behind the scenes. It turned out that it was really not the case. It was so unfair! 9. Xiaobai, you are really a good system. Perhaps, as early as No. 1 Named you Xiaobai, you gradually developed feelings. Even if you don't know how people get along with each other, you regard No. 1 As a companion. So that No. 1 Later went to extremes. You were forced to break the contract and wanted to make changes. In the end, you joined the opposite team of No. 1 And went to destruction because of No. 1'S disobedience. 10. The dead man is the most miserable person in the book. At first, I only thought that Death Man was an unlucky African chieftain and the second most hilarious person in the whole story. After reading the story, I realized that Death Man was a failure both materially and spiritually. In the beginning, there were only Dead Man and No. 1, And their relationship was not very good. They committed some crimes during the long period of loneliness. Later, after the incident of the real and fake young master, the two reconciled and formed a great friendship. At this point, Dead Man began to regard No. 1 As the most trusted person (in fact, it was more than just dependence. It felt that Dead Man pinned his spirit and destiny on No. 1. Even if there were more time travelers later, the relationship between the two was still close). But when investigating the "Immortal" incident, the dead man felt vaguely uneasy, and in his heart, he had already pointed the man behind the scenes to the person he trusted most based on the clues. Perhaps for self-protection, he did not think deeply and followed the time-travelers to find the truth. But when the truth came to light and the mastermind behind the scenes was No. 1, He decided to face No. 1 In person, stopping No. 1'S future plans and obliterating himself who was physically and mentally dependent on No. 1 (It's a different kind of redemption story) 11. (The boy who slays dragons eventually becomes a dragon, and I'm talking about you, No. 1. No. 1, Who are you worthy of? Are you worthy of Xiaobai, who was named by you and has always been with you? Are you worthy of the dead man who entrusted his trust and life to you? Are you worthy of the big family of time-travelers who help each other and live and die together? Are you worthy of yourself who saved the world in the first place? When you go to extremes, you know you shouldn't do this, but You did it anyway, and tried to shirk the responsibility and share the blame. When you killed yourself with a sword, everyone thought you were brave, but you chose to escape and give up in the face of reality, which exposed the fact that you were a coward.) No. 1 Is a character that people love and hate. At first, he just wanted to save the world, but in the process of saving, he carried out destruction, and finally went to extremes. This kind of thing makes it difficult to judge right and wrong. But because from the first chapter, No. 1 Has given people a lot of good impressions, and the truth is finally discovered, which makes readers want to hate but can't. I have been chasing this book for a long time, and it is also the first time I have posted such a long book review. I hope that a physical book will be released soon, preferably with peripherals (I wish every time traveler would have one). Summary: Group portrait nb This is a group portrait story, not a heroine story. If you eliminate the "big heroine" in a group portrait story, it will ruin your popularity. The following is my personal output: I'm begging you, I'm going too far with the "big heroine". How come there are "literal inquisitions" in both cp and non-cp stories?

My wife is so pretty! It is really a collision of modern systems and martial arts. It is not an ordinary novelist's novel. The protagonists are not just gags, but they are constantly changing their thoughts in this martial arts world. They are not bystanders but people who have experienced it first-hand. The author is very talented, so beautiful, so beautiful, so beautiful

This kind of flesh-and-blood article should not be classified as a male or female video. I felt the author's delicacy in description and characterization of the characters. The first volume gradually changed from funny to serious, especially the climax paragraphs. The writing style was really transcendent. Some of them made me reluctant to continue reading. I wanted to save a few more chapters and read them in one go. Later on, the number of characters in the plot increased. Thank you to the author. The difficulty will definitely be higher. I have great expectations for this book. This is the first time I write a book review and it is a short review. I really like it. Thank you to the author.

The writing is so good. Several time-travelers are ups and downs in the rivers and lakes, and are eventually involved in the rivers and lakes. They are heroic and courageous, ups and downs in life, happy in the rivers and lakes, unwilling and unrestrained. The huge torrent of fate and the rut of history wash away everyone. I cried...

Taking back my earlier criticism of the writing style, the author depicts a very ancient and flesh-and-blood world. The delicacy that is different from male works is also very moving. There is no very compact and tense plot, and there are not a large number of daily chapters that contrast with it. Some details and logic are not handled well, so it is not a very refined work. But it is full of emotions and therefore worth reading. (I wrote a lot of bad sentences, but I'm too lazy to change them over and over again. After all, it's just a book review, as long as it can be understood)

The concept is very good and attractive, and the characters in the first chapter are also well drawn. However, after the second chapter, it seems a little sloppy, leaning towards a daily style, with less depictions of strategies and confrontations. In addition, with the increase in the number of characters, the depictions of many people are slightly sloppy. Jiang Qiuchi's choice at the end of the third chapter felt unsatisfactory. I personally felt that her character would resist in such a major event (why can't the novel take the best). It was quite uncomfortable after reading it. It felt like someone's role was forcibly deleted (although it was a supporting role, there were no relevant scenes in the third chapter, and most of them were mentioned in one or two strokes)

A true group portrait article!!! Each of the ten time-travelers has their own story line, and the non-travelers are also well-characterized. Compared with some novels where the protagonist C is the whole person and the supporting characters are highlighted, this is a true group portrait novel! I like this kind of "grand alliance of time-travelers" rather than in-fighting and multi-perspective switching group portraits. It has been reviewed now. There is no meal replacement on the entire network. I am starving to death [I'm about to cry] In addition, the author has given warnings in the introduction and table of contents, and has not labeled the film as a heroine or a strong woman. Can some people stop being stalked like ghosts?

It's a very nice story about the Jianghu group portraits. It's not family members who are better than family members. I like every character very much. I hope to get to the capital copy soon. I want to see everyone making a big fuss in the capital city. In fact, there are more people in the second volume, and many people have become Riddlers. Number 4 has been marginalized into a pure thug (she was still the main force in gathering information in the first volume? Why is she now purely fighting and not using her brain)? (Kuan, it feels like a pure sadomasochism number 3, so I arranged a youth pain literary script), I hope to add more plots to 3/4/7/8/9/10, 78910 is currently pure soy sauce/3 pure masochism is too much/ 4 is marginalized, 56 is the least written but the most vivid [exploration], I hope my wife will not complicate too many things, procrastinating for too long and making it too complicated is not a good thing (such as the experience of procrastinating No. 3, The division of power in the Panda Pavilion)