Su Yuemian (fourth son) woke up and found that she had traveled through time. Later, she found out that she had been born in her mother's womb. She wanted to strengthen the local owner of the Su family. Her ancestors committed evil and assigned her the identity of a task tool.
As soon as she entered the sect, there were murderous intentions everywhere, but she was a little lucky. She had a childhood sweetheart who always accompanied her. Every time she did a task, she tried to die at the hands of the boss, but she was never killed, and she spent a long and happy youth.
Unexpectedly, the father of his childhood sweetheart has been causing trouble behind his back and persecuting his son, and the two are separated by accident.
Reader comments
For the first book, I just kept writing. I made a rough outline in my notebook. When I wrote more than 100 chapters, I was most anxious. The characters were not distinct, and the tone was not bright and bright at first. There was always an uneven sadness wandering between the lines. It is still the same now with more than 500 chapters.
I went to Zhihu and read a lot of posts, and I found that it was full of newcomers' mistakes, which makes them unhappy. The writing style is old, the words are lacking in sense, details, and warmth. In short, they are just not likable. The book reviews said that my words and sentences were a little uncomfortable when combined. I read it many times, but I really don't understand what's wrong with it, and I still haven't figured it out yet. Unfortunately, I still can't imitate the sentences on the high score list. Maybe she didn't feel happy, and the words she used were not very life-like.
I still want to give myself five stars. I persisted for so long and no one paid attention. If I didn't believe that I wouldn't be able to reach this point, of course I would be lazy. After writing, I found that I didn't read enough books, I wasn't accurate enough, I didn't have any talent, and I was very serious and not clever.
I said before that the foreshadowing has been buried for too long, and too much has been buried. Many of them have not been solved yet, but they are slowly being collected, but it is difficult to collect, and the story continues.
Big cheers for the author, yes, let's work hard together.
Everyone has a dream, and if you work hard, it will bloom
The writing is smooth and the story is vivid. Come on💪
For the first book, I just kept writing. I made a rough outline in my notebook. When I wrote more than 100 chapters, I was most anxious. The characters were not distinct, and the tone was not bright and bright at first. There was always an uneven sadness wandering between the lines. It is still the same now with more than 500 chapters. I went to Zhihu and read a lot of posts, and I found that it was full of newcomers' mistakes, which makes them unhappy. The writing style is old, the words are lacking in sense, details, and warmth. In short, they are just not likable. The book reviews said that my words and sentences were a little uncomfortable when combined. I read it many times, but I really don't understand what's wrong with it, and I still haven't figured it out yet. Unfortunately, I still can't imitate the sentences on the high score list. Maybe she didn't feel happy, and the words she used were not very life-like. I still want to give myself five stars. I persisted for so long and no one paid attention. If I didn't believe that I wouldn't be able to reach this point, of course I would be lazy. After writing, I found that I didn't read enough books, I wasn't accurate enough, I didn't have any talent, and I was very serious and not clever. I said before that the foreshadowing has been buried for too long, and too much has been buried. Many of them have not been solved yet, but they are slowly being collected, but it is difficult to collect, and the story continues.
Big cheers for the author, yes, let's work hard together.
Everyone has a dream, and if you work hard, it will bloom
The writing is smooth and the story is vivid. Come on💪