Doomsday: The Age of City-States

There is electricity, but why doesn't there be a high-voltage power grid? As long as a certain section of the high-voltage cable is damaged, a high-voltage electricity area can be formed. Water can also conduct electricity. One electricity will cover a large area, and the cutting machine behind it is also very useful for defense.

I caught up on it from the previous one, and still like this kind of realistic apocalyptic novel. The author has made obvious progress, please continue coding, I will take care of it first.

After reading Chapter 200, I can summarize that this novel is neat. There is no description of details, the plot is purely dialogue. There is no need for explanatory narration to explain anything, only the actions and dialogues of the characters are used to let the readers understand what is going on. Then the characters are also very neatly created, they are just as timid as they are reckless, and there is no explanation. Never forcefully show off. Moreover, the protagonist's personal charm is quite great and is constantly growing, and it is not reflected through changes in positions. But because there is no narration, you can only realize it by comparing it with the previous text. Suitable for real apocalyptic writing, no or light superpowers

The general direction is good, but Han Rui's character feels a bit unreasonable. In the end of the world, since we are a team, he is always "good-hearted", helping, and often disrupts the team's position. In this case, the protagonist does not impose restrictions, or kicks out of the team. I feel that he can slowly change it. Good intentions in the end of the world are wishes, but they cannot be done all the time and at any time, otherwise it will not work if the entire group is destroyed just to save one person.

It's very possible, it's very novel, and it's not a virgin for the male protagonist. It should be a character design based on the masses to pave the way for the later stages. It's a big move. It just ended a little early. I really wanted to see what City-State would be like after that, but I didn't dare write about it. Is this it?

The author probably adapted it from a Korean comic book, and the plot is roughly the same. As soon as she saw the prophet, she knew that it was probably the prophet who predicted that the male protagonist was the savior, and she predicted that she would marry the male protagonist.

I just finished listening to another book and found it by following the online name. The author's description of human nature is so real. He is neither crazy nor a virgin. I hope this one has a more perfect ending. The last one was a bit rushed and there were not many love lines. I have listened to dozens of chapters this time and it is basically perfect.

Generally speaking, they are all good, but I don't know whether the author needs to write or because he does not have rich experience and knowledge in real life. The descriptions of some characters are based on stereotypes circulated on the Internet. They are very stereotyped and somewhat taken for granted. People are complex, multi-faceted, and three-dimensional, and the same goes for things created by people. Characters portrayed with a single facial makeup will be simpler but not full. Everything else is okay, keep watching.

The plot advances relatively quickly, and it's not the kind of game that hasn't even left the Novice Village after dozens of chapters. The writing is really good. I look forward to writing more exciting stories. Please support it with five stars.

It's quite good-looking and very close to the real world. I recommend it to those who like realistic style. In addition, I hope the author will write new ideas and break away from the old routine of apocalyptic novels that always change from destroying zombies to destroying humans.