[Witch Journey Fan][Single heroine Irena][Non-travel][No system]
[Warm reminder: The author is very inexperienced and has a lot of OOC and eating settings content later. Please read it at your own discretion.
There is also a third volume that restarts the world view. If you want to see a slightly better view, you can start reading from the third volume]
Author-chan: My first book, the writing is not very good, but author-chan has made up his mind to update it as long as the work is still there. In addition, the author will add his own original country, including the birthplace of the protagonist.
Introduction sauce:
"Yes, I am also a traveler. I have to continue traveling."
Lorraine is a traveling musketeer;
Well, it should be said that, of course, this does not mean that he does not know magic
But he prefers muskets to wands (he doesn't like memorizing convoluted spells)
Because of an escape, he began his journey to freedom.
Is she a witch on the same journey as me? Why does my wallet feel unsafe every time I see her?
(The introduction is weak, let's move to the main text and read a few chapters before leaving, please)
Reader comments
Haokang, it's just that Irena was too cold in the early stage. Lorraine only needed more than 100 pictures to use her magic power perfectly (I still grabbed Shiloh's). It can be strengthened appropriately. In addition, the pace is indeed a bit slow. The protagonist is more like a bystander. In the love chapter, the protagonist can be changed to have a sense of participation. It looks good in daily writing. Come on, work on it😋
The author's writing style is very good, and the first-person narration really stood out to me, but I don't know why no one read it, and the author's perseverance is indeed worthy of this rating [heartfelt] Come on! Don't stop updating
After reading the first five chapters, I feel really good [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]. If you write it well, I believe I can get a score of nine or more.
Okay, I have read Chapter 60 now. Let me tell you my impressions. I feel that there is too little interaction between the protagonist and Irena, which makes me feel that they are not familiar with each other. Then I only watched the series, and I felt that the protagonist in some chapters was useless at all, and passed by as soon as I opened and closed my eyes. It was not very interesting. At present, Irena's portrayal is too little. If I exclude the subjective impression from watching the series, then I feel that the heroine in this article is a very cold lady [face covering] [face covering], not as lively as Irena in the series.
It's very good, and it's considered top-notch among the Demon Brigade fandoms, but the update is too slow. As long as I can write the end, maybe it will be on par with Higanbana.
As far as what I've read so far is concerned, it's good. The characters are well drawn, which is top-notch in Tomato.
As far as the following text is concerned, the writing style is not very good, but it is enough for Tomato (
And there are very few people who want to complain, but it's also true that anime like Witch Journey and Problem Children Are From Another World haven't been released for a long time (sad)
Witch is a bit better, Problem Child is almost not popular at all now
The writing is very good, at least it is the best among the Demon Travel fanfics I have read (so when will it be updated)
Excellent, the writing skills are good, there are no major mistakes, and there are no grammatical errors after reading it so far. Overall, I give it four and a half stars. However, I cannot give it four and a half stars, so I will give it five stars.
Very nice, very nice.
Good 👀Look! ! The writing is not bad
Not like a novel, like a dream I experienced personally
Very nice, recommended
Yeah, it's pretty good, but it's just not that popular.
A book with great potential
I feel like the male protagonist has no sense of involvement. The previous episode felt like a daily routine and not like a relationship, but somehow it felt pretty good. The popularity shouldn't be so low.
It's really good. It should be very popular. Hurry up and make me popular.
Come on, come on, come on
Very sweet, the plot is well arranged
Very good, why do you have to make up the words to post a comment?
It's okay, but the first-person perspective is not very comfortable.
Very good, really!
Bad Sister Irena [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]
Overall OK
I don't know why it looks a bit like "David Copperfield" [laughing]
@ Has the author considered strengthening Lorraine's musket (such as combining it with the magic power Lorraine obtained)? I feel that the role of the musket is a little small [laughing]
There are a lot of minor points, but it is considered a high-quality article in the Demon Travel fandom. I hope the author can write better and better and update it steadily.
Okay, okay, good, good, worthy of praise
It's a very nice Demon Brigade fic, good luck to the author.
Can the author write about swords? Like Frederica from Volume 8
Haokang, it's just that Irena was too cold in the early stage. Lorraine only needed more than 100 pictures to use her magic power perfectly (I still grabbed Shiloh's). It can be strengthened appropriately. In addition, the pace is indeed a bit slow. The protagonist is more like a bystander. In the love chapter, the protagonist can be changed to have a sense of participation. It looks good in daily writing. Come on, work on it😋
The author's writing style is very good, and the first-person narration really stood out to me, but I don't know why no one read it, and the author's perseverance is indeed worthy of this rating [heartfelt] Come on! Don't stop updating
After reading the first five chapters, I feel really good [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]. If you write it well, I believe I can get a score of nine or more. Okay, I have read Chapter 60 now. Let me tell you my impressions. I feel that there is too little interaction between the protagonist and Irena, which makes me feel that they are not familiar with each other. Then I only watched the series, and I felt that the protagonist in some chapters was useless at all, and passed by as soon as I opened and closed my eyes. It was not very interesting. At present, Irena's portrayal is too little. If I exclude the subjective impression from watching the series, then I feel that the heroine in this article is a very cold lady [face covering] [face covering], not as lively as Irena in the series.
It's very good, and it's considered top-notch among the Demon Brigade fandoms, but the update is too slow. As long as I can write the end, maybe it will be on par with Higanbana.
As far as what I've read so far is concerned, it's good. The characters are well drawn, which is top-notch in Tomato. As far as the following text is concerned, the writing style is not very good, but it is enough for Tomato ( And there are very few people who want to complain, but it's also true that anime like Witch Journey and Problem Children Are From Another World haven't been released for a long time (sad) Witch is a bit better, Problem Child is almost not popular at all now
The writing is very good, at least it is the best among the Demon Travel fanfics I have read (so when will it be updated)
Excellent, the writing skills are good, there are no major mistakes, and there are no grammatical errors after reading it so far. Overall, I give it four and a half stars. However, I cannot give it four and a half stars, so I will give it five stars.
Very nice, very nice.
Good 👀Look! ! The writing is not bad
Not like a novel, like a dream I experienced personally
Very nice, recommended
Yeah, it's pretty good, but it's just not that popular.
A book with great potential
I feel like the male protagonist has no sense of involvement. The previous episode felt like a daily routine and not like a relationship, but somehow it felt pretty good. The popularity shouldn't be so low. It's really good. It should be very popular. Hurry up and make me popular.
Come on, come on, come on
Very sweet, the plot is well arranged
Very good, why do you have to make up the words to post a comment?
It's okay, but the first-person perspective is not very comfortable.
Very good, really!
Bad Sister Irena [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]
Overall OK
I don't know why it looks a bit like "David Copperfield" [laughing] @ Has the author considered strengthening Lorraine's musket (such as combining it with the magic power Lorraine obtained)? I feel that the role of the musket is a little small [laughing]
There are a lot of minor points, but it is considered a high-quality article in the Demon Travel fandom. I hope the author can write better and better and update it steadily.
Okay, okay, good, good, worthy of praise
It's a very nice Demon Brigade fic, good luck to the author.
Can the author write about swords? Like Frederica from Volume 8