Wen Shui Never Saw This Coming

It's a bit short, and I can't read enough. It's very good. Kudos to the author! Rate it: The most important thing! Why not put "band", "lost dog heroine Kai", "Onmizu Kazuhiko" and other tags in the title, introduction and tags? A lot more people will read it that way! There is a problem with paragraphing. The character's language and psychology can be written in separate paragraphs. If you divide it into more paragraphs, the look and feel will be much better. Some parts of the description are just right, and some parts are redundant. There is a slight problem with the character's usual tone. The word "ah" appears too much, which is not reasonable. In terms of punctuation, parentheses should be used to complain or supplement the content. When used to write about psychology, it should be divided into separate paragraphs or marked with something like "" or "" to make it clearer. Of course, it is not impossible to use parentheses, it is a bit strange. When dealing with people with warm-water personalities, if it's superficial social interaction like: chatting, hanging out, eating together, or even making some exaggerated jokes, it's fine. But it is difficult to have a deep relationship. You may go out many times and chat with him many times when you have nothing to do. He may not necessarily regard you as a friend. He will only think that you are a familiar person His psychological defense is very strong. It is soft on the surface, but if you dig a little deeper, you will find that he is very tough. He is a rare male protagonist who is hot on the outside and cold on the inside. He has a strong control over himself. Therefore, for the girls in the band who have not yet broken out, if there is no proactive person like Lao Ba to encourage them to solve the problem, and they are not very familiar with him, he may even act coldly and watch the band disband. "Have I become very familiar with you after a lifetime?" Jiashu's desire for control is external, while Wen Shui's desire for control is internal. Unless he himself (or is encouraged) to step out of his comfort zone, you will never be able to change him. Wen Shui enjoys a sense of stability and will try his best to maintain this sense of stability. He knows everything, but he doesn't want to know, and the girls in the band who always break the rules... Ha, I can't wait to see what kind of gravity ending it will be. For Wen Shui, making friends is a "lifetime" thing. It is not something that can be done by closing the mouth, but the resonance of the soul. This hidden gravity feels very suitable for Su Shi, but Wen Shui is actually much heavier than Su Shi, who is often unable to hold back. It's a pity that Jia Shu's desire for control has not been clearly demonstrated at the moment. Damn it, I want to see Jia Men show off his power, completely possess the warm water, release his sister's love to his heart's content, and trample all that ethical shit under his feet!

Five-star praise. There are too few mygo fan books on Tomato. I hope the author can keep updating them until they are finished.

To be honest, warm water can be quite gravitational sometimes, which just makes the gravity of the two of them collide with each other.

It's not bad, but there are only Wenshui Jiaoshu, not Laoba and the others.

The writing is okay, but the writing is too detailed and it is a bit difficult to read when you are tired🤦 This is a personal problem. Moreover, I really couldn't hold back when Xiangzi's mother escaped from death. If the author had his own ideas, I would be looking forward to it... Or was this written before the Songle Doll was aired?

I can't figure out how Aiyin lost? Poor Lao Wen was played between Arnold's hands 🤦🤦🤦

Five stars inspire the author. I hope the warm water can bring happiness to Ai Yin. I can no longer listen to Chun Ri Ying. Poet Mei Yige

Seeing Xiangma's resurrection, I didn't hesitate

It's very beautiful, but who is the heroine? I'm a little panicked. I hope Ai Yin has a good ending. I've seen the back, it's wonderful, it's fun to watch

The writing is very good. I suggest you add a name to the chapter. I am looking forward to the plot of Xiao Mu later 🥰