Anime Crossover: I Become the Supreme God of the Anime World

How can I put it? There is too little description about the protagonist. You should write around the protagonist instead of always writing the original text. After all, if you want to know the story, you can directly watch the anime. I have finished reading Fairy Tail. I can only say that the protagonist is the same without her. I can't see the growth and the story. Most of them are original texts, but the writing is quite good. The low score is that I really can't see whether the story will develop around the protagonist or the rest will be the same. It is just developing the original plot. I hope it can be developed from the perspective of the protagonist and not be like the original plot.

The description is okay, but the time is vague. Please at least describe the approximate time period and summary of the time. If you were in the guild one second and changed venues the next second, the impression would be a bit bad. For example, at the beginning, you should at least write down the approximate time of the Tenrou Island incident. Each time span should be written out and cannot be skipped directly. For example, where you are going, write a rough route name and how long it has been. I hope the author can optimize the details