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Very good-looking, just... Just good every time... Short ヽ(゜▽゜)－C<(/;◇;)/~[Drag the author away] (つ> _◕)つ▄▇▇ (Guan Xiaoheiwu code word) ٩(●´৺`●)૭🍻٩(●´৺`●)و (handsome and sassy reader): Yeah＼(ω＼)(／ω)/

What is the situation of Gu Qingtian at the end of the introduction? Is he getting married by side?

Emm... Normal real online game novel, writing style, logic, character creation, plot online, good novel, come on

It's good, not bad, it doesn't drag out the plot, and it makes people want to keep watching. So can you give me more?

Very very beautiful! The heroine has an online IQ, is decisive in killing, has brains, and has the qualities of an emperor and a hero. The fighting scenes are good, and the IQ scenes are also exciting. Here is a spoiler, there is a marriage scene in the middle, but it is just a vest marriage, and the heroine destroys him in the end

Writing Tips: Do not give settings such as character, which will reduce the sense of substitution and make readers feel disconnected, and will limit the author's subsequent writing. Ten thousand people have ten thousand Hamlets in their hearts. The protagonist should not talk too much, think too much, and do too much. As long as the actions performed are recognized, there will naturally be a sense of substitution and identity. The character will also become three-dimensional in the reader's mind.

Fang Yuanxing transferred to another world?

Very good, but should the author improve the qualifications of the protagonist? It seems quite uncomfortable. He should restore his flower as soon as possible and improve the qualifications of the protagonist.

The protagonist is decisive in killing, has strength and means

Change single, the writing is excellent, there is almost no description of women's clothing and body, but the huge world view of the game is well established. It can be read as a story about a single and invincible heroine. It's very smooth to defeat monsters, upgrade and explode equipment, but it lacks the characteristics of a transformation story, which is helpless.

So far so well written.

I like it, heroine

It's delicious. Half of the online novels are gender-neutral, and 90% of them are loli. I finally found something that I like to read that is not a loli [crying]

Great, no need to say more

In this advanced state, I feel nothing if I don't recite poetry [smile][smile].

Aren't you the one who hasn't unblocked it yet? Husband, oh, oh, oh, oh, my spiritual food, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh,

The author said the book was good a few days ago, but why has it been reviewed now? No! [Crying] There has been no update for two days, so I skipped to the last paragraph, and I finally know why [Petrochemical] Review by all evils, there are few books that meet my taste, but I didn't expect it, but it was rejected by the review [Petrochemical] [Petrochemical] [Petrochemical] [Petrochemical] After reading it, I really want to read the follow-up. The tomato review is indeed the root of all evil [cry][cry][cry]

I feel that the main reason why this book has so few readers is the name and cover [Chigua] Overall, it looks pretty good. I like the heroine's decisiveness in killing.

It's fun to write

It's nice, but it's a pity it's blocked. . .

The best book on transformation! It's just too short!

Woo woo woo

Lily, a little bit poisonous If you kill decisively, there will be no lily.

Suddenly I thought about whether to raise a daughter. Mom is Jiang Yunchan. It just so happens that the plot of the Gu family is now. The mother can use the wealth of the son to plan the property of the Gu family.

Okay, pretty good-looking

A little bit less, not enough to see.

Not bad, you can watch it

It looks great, but why isn't it popular? [What]

It's so good that you won't get tired of it, and the plot is compact. If you don't update it, I won't be able to bear it [cry][cry][cry][cry]