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Just keep writing. Although the writing style is immature, it is already better than most of the Dog City Pokémon articles.

Very good, I hope the author will update it more often. Please continue to update according to this progress. Would make a great book. Basically there are no bad points, the whole book is quite good. There are still too few chapters at the moment. Not enough

The writing is very good, but I suggest the author to be less emotional and more about battles. After all, Pokémon is mainly about battles, and secondly, Ash's harem. Also, I would like to ask whether Xiaozhi is an adult or a minor in this book?

It's pretty good. It's not the kind of running story with dream-fulfilling skins. It's a good innovation for Udo Sundae to join the team and conquer the ultra-ancient Pokémon. It has an original plot and generally follows the original work. I hope it sticks to it and doesn't stop updating.

Don't stop reading for a novel of ten million words

It's so well written, come on, come on, come on

It's very well written, I hope the author can stick to it

Good support

Please save more manuscripts. I haven't even arrived at the Kanto Chapter Quartz Competition yet, so there are still too few.

So far it looks pretty good

Looks good, come on, come on, come on

Author Am I alive?

So far so good, I hope the author can stick to it [please update]

It's very beautiful. I hope the author won't stop updating it! ! ! [Sending Hearts][Asking for Updates][Top Post] I hope the author can design the outline at the end well. This book is very suitable for writing a full-length novel. Good luck to the author! ! ! (Has the author considered completing several regions? Personally, I think it would be better to write about the Kalos region, with some chapters from the Sun and Moon chapters interspersed. This is just a personal suggestion)

It's really good, keep up the good work

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

It's okay, but the picture of Super Ancient Kuailong didn't feel right.

It's okay, it's a restoration of the original work, but I don't have any regrets.