Naruto: Adding a Haki Module from the Start

Why do I always have the feeling of returning to the battle with an elbow technique? It is known that Yami is the Holy Lord. In the later stage, there will be 12 spells plus the complete Shura plus 8 demonic energy. There will not be another one occupying Sasuke's body. The decent side did not mourn the death of the guardian for a moment. Shuu will appear next, and then there will be another wave of wheel battles. One thing I would like to say is that I still really want to see the Heaven and the Cursed Buddhist Monastery. There are reincarnations in the dirty earth. It's not too much to add a descending spell. The guardians are all at the six-level level. In the later stage, they should be at the six-level level with domains. The guardians add darkness, the night organization adds the protagonist group, and the saint master with all the buffs. If you have the opportunity, please give Shi'er a space for 1v1 duel.

Yes, stick to it, the writing is good, the plot is relatively novel, but the word count is not good. After the word count exceeds 300,000 words, the rating can be improved. The slow growth period in the early stage is not bad, but the writing style in the middle and later stages needs to be improved, and the subject matter is more novel and original. You can ignore it if you don't like listening to it. To be honest, if you don't have good control over your writing style, don't write something like this again. It takes too much time to design and it's easy to lose track of the story line. The protagonist is invincible in the later stage and has no ignition point. It is better to encounter this kind of multi-world fusion element after you have enough experience in writing. If you simply combine two or three elements, you can still grasp it well with your writing style. However, there are a lot of things and the story line is too complicated. The protagonist's personal image is not rich enough, and the readers are not deeply involved. The protagonist's performance is too indifferent, which is not good for shaping the protagonist's image. But if you can add a finishing touch at the end, it can make it come true. In short, the story line is a bit messy and you will have no problem as long as you sort it out. Come on! This book is very interesting.

There are no shortcomings except that the word count is a bit short.

Come on, come on, come on😘

Nice! Hope it's a million-dollar masterpiece!

Come on, five-star support

٩(๑•ㅂ•)۶Author, you should give me more, it's not enough at all.

Ok ok ok

Very well written, I support it

Not bad, but the word count is a little short.