[Vest + module system + create a new ninja world!
In the 21st century, a game called "Minecraft" became popular all over the Internet. Aoki was a part-time worker in the game development department. Not long ago, he finished the Naruto module and was staying up late to develop the Pirates module...
"Zizzizi..." (Sound of electric current)
...
"Why did I come to the world of Naruto?"
[Ding! It is detected that the developer is in place and the module development system has been activated!
[Developed module detected: Armed Color Domineering Integration Pack, do you want to load it?
Aoki looked at the blue panel in front of him and fell into deep thought...
A few years later, there were many more legends in the ninja world
The one who can levitate islands out of thin air, Xiu!
The god of destruction who can cause huge earthquakes at will, Ara!
A visitor from outer space, the absolute master of powerful technological power, Zero!
The style of painting in the ninja world seems to be gradually becoming more high-end...
Reader comments
Why do I always have the feeling of returning to the battle with an elbow technique? It is known that Yami is the Holy Lord. In the later stage, there will be 12 spells plus the complete Shura plus 8 demonic energy. There will not be another one occupying Sasuke's body. The decent side did not mourn the death of the guardian for a moment. Shuu will appear next, and then there will be another wave of wheel battles.
One thing I would like to say is that I still really want to see the Heaven and the Cursed Buddhist Monastery. There are reincarnations in the dirty earth. It's not too much to add a descending spell.
The guardians are all at the six-level level. In the later stage, they should be at the six-level level with domains. The guardians add darkness, the night organization adds the protagonist group, and the saint master with all the buffs. If you have the opportunity, please give Shi'er a space for 1v1 duel.
There are no shortcomings except that the word count is a bit short.
Yes, stick to it, the writing is good, the plot is relatively novel, but the word count is not good. After the word count exceeds 300,000 words, the rating can be improved. The slow growth period in the early stage is not bad, but the writing style in the middle and later stages needs to be improved, and the subject matter is more novel and original.
You can ignore it if you don't like listening to it. To be honest, if you don't have good control over your writing style, don't write something like this again. It takes too much time to design and it's easy to lose track of the story line. The protagonist is invincible in the later stage and has no ignition point. It is better to encounter this kind of multi-world fusion element after you have enough experience in writing. If you simply combine two or three elements, you can still grasp it well with your writing style. However, there are a lot of things and the story line is too complicated. The protagonist's personal image is not rich enough, and the readers are not deeply involved. The protagonist's performance is too indifferent, which is not good for shaping the protagonist's image. But if you can add a finishing touch at the end, it can make it come true. In short, the story line is a bit messy and you will have no problem as long as you sort it out. Come on! This book is very interesting.
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Not bad, but the word count is a little short.
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Author, why are you so short?
It's pretty good. But you don't know how to name the author. Wouldn't it be nice to ask a book friend to help you?
Come on, it looks okay so far
It's pretty good, I hope I keep sticking to it
I read this in one breath, urging me to update more. I just hope that I won't get frustrated later because there are too many and too complicated things.
Well, how should I put it? The content and ideas are quite good, but I prefer this kind of more complex book. I hope the author will keep up the good work, continue, and don't stop updating.
It's all okay, and it suits my taste, but the words are a bit short. Come on＾0＾~
Well written, but not much traffic
Come on, it's really beautiful. I wish you success in your studies.
Why do I always have the feeling of returning to the battle with an elbow technique? It is known that Yami is the Holy Lord. In the later stage, there will be 12 spells plus the complete Shura plus 8 demonic energy. There will not be another one occupying Sasuke's body. The decent side did not mourn the death of the guardian for a moment. Shuu will appear next, and then there will be another wave of wheel battles. One thing I would like to say is that I still really want to see the Heaven and the Cursed Buddhist Monastery. There are reincarnations in the dirty earth. It's not too much to add a descending spell. The guardians are all at the six-level level. In the later stage, they should be at the six-level level with domains. The guardians add darkness, the night organization adds the protagonist group, and the saint master with all the buffs. If you have the opportunity, please give Shi'er a space for 1v1 duel.
There are no shortcomings except that the word count is a bit short.
Yes, stick to it, the writing is good, the plot is relatively novel, but the word count is not good. After the word count exceeds 300,000 words, the rating can be improved. The slow growth period in the early stage is not bad, but the writing style in the middle and later stages needs to be improved, and the subject matter is more novel and original. You can ignore it if you don't like listening to it. To be honest, if you don't have good control over your writing style, don't write something like this again. It takes too much time to design and it's easy to lose track of the story line. The protagonist is invincible in the later stage and has no ignition point. It is better to encounter this kind of multi-world fusion element after you have enough experience in writing. If you simply combine two or three elements, you can still grasp it well with your writing style. However, there are a lot of things and the story line is too complicated. The protagonist's personal image is not rich enough, and the readers are not deeply involved. The protagonist's performance is too indifferent, which is not good for shaping the protagonist's image. But if you can add a finishing touch at the end, it can make it come true. In short, the story line is a bit messy and you will have no problem as long as you sort it out. Come on! This book is very interesting.
Come on, come on, come on😘
It's really good
Very well written, I support it
Ok ok ok
Come on, five-star support
Nice! Hope it's a million-dollar masterpiece!
Not bad, but the word count is a little short.
٩(๑•ㅂ•)۶Author, you should give me more, it's not enough at all.
Come on, it looks pretty
Come on, the author is looking forward to it
It's so cool. I like you as the author.
Come on, work hard and don't stop
It's quite interesting
Good looking good looking good looking From what I saw yesterday, today I think it's pretty good, and it's to my liking.
Come on, come on, come on
Come on, come on, brother
Author, why are you so short?
It's pretty good. But you don't know how to name the author. Wouldn't it be nice to ask a book friend to help you?
Come on, it looks okay so far
It's pretty good, I hope I keep sticking to it
I read this in one breath, urging me to update more. I just hope that I won't get frustrated later because there are too many and too complicated things.
Well, how should I put it? The content and ideas are quite good, but I prefer this kind of more complex book. I hope the author will keep up the good work, continue, and don't stop updating.
It's all okay, and it suits my taste, but the words are a bit short. Come on＾0＾~
Well written, but not much traffic
Come on, it's really beautiful. I wish you success in your studies.
Really well written
Okay, I feel like I can watch it