Variety Comic: I Became Their Wings

Not bad, but I feel that if there are multiple female protagonists, Megumi may have to be reduced. Otherwise, the ranks of Yukino + Eiriri + Senpai will not be enough for Megumi to fight alone. Plus, there is a green plum buff, which will make it even more difficult.

According to the definition of tragic aesthetics, that is, "destroying beautiful things and shocking people emotionally, so as to make people think deeply" Let's spend some of the pen and ink on shaping the image of the mother, such as the plot of getting along with the mother, etc., To express her character and the joy she brings to the protagonist. And then destroy. Of course, you can also use the [suspended death] technique to first cause a character to die in the plot, just like the content in the current prologue. Then in the subsequent plots, through seeing things and thinking about people, or recalling, dreaming, etc., Plots related to the mother continue to appear, deepening the character image of the mother. The advantage is that it can achieve the tragic effect without delaying the advancement of the plot, making the character line flexible and fragmented. This can also be seen as the use of Leonardo da Vinci-style narrative techniques.

As a slow-paced comprehensive comic, the quality of this book is quite high, but perhaps it is because the author originally wrote a single-female protagonist. The character of the male protagonist created in the early stage and the current plot development feel a bit like a single-female protagonist. Overall, the quality is high. Since the author has laid the foundation for the previous comprehensive comic of the same type, the writing style is quite good and the updates are stable. However, the author has been complaining in the group recently that the data is too poor. I hope more people will read it. The author also said that it will not be unfinished, so why do you care so much? Just rush and it's over

From the beginning of the book, the plot has been guided by "reality". The protagonist Yasuhiko Uesugi embarked on a journey of searching for "reality" due to various incidents in his youth. During this period, he gained friendship with everyone in the service department and established relationships with Eiri, Megumi's love, reconciliation with family, etc. This journey of finding "reality" can actually be seen as the process of Uesugi's growth and change. All in all, the writing is still very good. Come on, the author [Like] Support [Like]

Hello author, I copied this book on other platforms. The data is good and the response from readers is very good. However, the update is a bit slow. I hope you will not be disrespectful and do it faster. Don't make my readers wait too long. Thanks!!!

It's not bad. You'll get better after getting through the first three chapters (it was really awkward at first, and I always felt that the author was writing about the car wheel and the story over and over again). Those who dislike the seal's appearance can rest assured, as the hair style changed in just a few chapters, and the protagonist's personality also changed very quickly. This is a good thing in my opinion (I don't like awkward things). I only gave four stars because it said there were multiple girls, but the author voted in the group and decided that there would only be four. When I entered the group and asked, no one knew which four they were. I wonder, I don't know what this group is for. . . . I left a message asking the author but there was no reply. . . The key point is that I saw that the author replied to everyone in the book review area that all women would be accepted. . . Isn't this a scam? [Smile] Yukino Sage Megumi heard that there is also a glass, what about the passerby heroine and the other two female supporting characters? There are also dumplings. I also replied to others before that I wanted to collect them. . . Since you don't take it all in, some people must be dissatisfied, so why bother releasing it covertly? Seeing that the result is confiscated later, it will rebound. . . I promised you 5 stars for the heroine's name, and several level 10 seniors in your group don't even know who the heroine is. . . As expected, the discussion group talks about everything except the works [Chigua]

It's pretty good to read, but I personally think it's a bit abrupt that Megumi Kato allows the male protagonist to accept other girls, but then again, it's really impossible to have a harem if you don't write it like this. Putting this aside, this book is still quite good and you can read it (if you don't like it, don't criticize [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile])

This comprehensive comic is one of my favorite novels I have ever read. But what I care most about is multiple girls or single girl [I'm about to cry] The author's writing style is very good. I hope the author will keep it up. Come on, the author must not write poisonous points, otherwise this book will be ruined [Like] [Please update]

I just discovered that I have read the author's previous book. Please support it with five stars. This book will be confiscated and marked.

The content is exquisite, and the development of the story can be regarded as the mutual redemption of the protagonist and the people around him. The protagonist also takes care of everyone around him very tenderly. He gradually gains human touch and is no longer a numb machine. I am looking forward to the subsequent development and hope to give the heroines in the book a good ending.

Very nice looking, nothing bad about it so far. The plot is mainly a series of daily stories about the male protagonist who has been pursuing reality, that is, the meaning of truly existing in this world, due to family changes. The advantage is that you are not doing daily life aimlessly. The disadvantage is that there are too few streams on the platform. Why don't you promote it well, Tomato! ! !

Do you accept dumplings? Many fan fictions do not accept dumplings. They always leave the dumplings to the great teacher. The character of dumplings and the great teacher are not reasonable at all [face covering] I hope they can accept the dumplings.

It is still very good. Compared with other comprehensive comics, this one still feels very comfortable to my senses. There is nothing that ruins the outlook and character [shy] [shy], support [top post] [top post]

I've been watching the author for so long. To be honest, I always thought it was a single heroine. I feel that the other heroines are a bit underdeveloped, especially Yukino in the early stage. I hope the author can add more stories about Yukino, I really like Yukino

To be honest, it's pretty good-looking, but I'm a little confused. Tuanzi is the heroine. Looking at it now, Tuanzi seems to have more scenes with Mr. Da. If you don't play with dumplings, you will be deducted two stars [Thoughts]

I think it's quite ok

The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work

There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. I personally think it is very beautiful.

Come on, write, it's all about experience and experimentation. Once you have written enough and gained experience, you can write a light novel yourself. Now it is still limited to comprehensive comics, and the audience may indeed be a little smaller. After all, it's not like Star Railway. [Thinking] Come on, most of the comics are for love.

Please bear with me and read it, it is a very good comic. I hope that the protagonist will not fall in love mindlessly in the future, and it is best to fall in love with a complete emotional process and experience like now. [Blowing kiss]

The book is very good, but why doesn't anyone read it?

This book is very good so far, but I want to ask, is it a single heroine or multiple heroines?

Okay, it looks good [like]

I like it very much, maybe because I also like the feeling of being alone and spending time with friends occasionally.

The needle is good [like], I just like to see the daily life [send heartfelt]

It's really good to watch, but the rating feels low. Maybe it's because of the protagonist's character?

I'm even more looking forward to the senior sister's plot, and I want someone with high aggression to muddy the waters [laughing]

The writing is very good, especially Hui, who is gentle, considerate and a little bit sinister, completely explaining what a perfect girlfriend is. Eri Kashiwagi is too arrogant and Kasumigaoka is too venomous, but Huihao is better. Of course, the best ones are definitely Thor-chan, Tamago-chan, Takagi-san and Clara. Let me declare that Thor-chan, Tamago-chan, Takagi-san and Clara are the best in the world! ! !

Did Ying Lili and An Yilun kiss when they were children? If so, slip away.

It's okay, but I'm curious about one thing. The male protagonist has confirmed his relationship with Megumi, so why are he still holding hands with Eirili under the table while eating in the cafeteria? And Hui seemed to know and didn't stop it, and didn't react [anything]. Also, the author of this novel is very slow in updating.