Carry********

Typos, missing words, wrong or missing information, lots of nonsense, long paragraphs, and also, don't wizards have mental power? I didn't even mention it. They only have physical agility and so on. How can a wizard use his staff to knock the enemy to death first? Reading "Lightning Protection" gives me a feeling of powerlessness as if I'm stuck in a swamp.

Nondescript?

It's boring and looks tiring

Many wizarding novels have this problem and make them too tired to read. Originally, wizarding novels were just mixed into such long paragraphs.

I'm so tired. After reading ten chapters, I can't hold on anymore.