The Exiled Immortal Arrives

After roughly reading more than a dozen chapters, the setting of the book is detailed and the background is complete, but I haven't seen any eye-catching plot yet. Language needs to be tempered. For example, the official notice issued in Chapter 18, how come there is such colloquial language? The description of the characters' emotions is not detailed enough. How can the aloof heroine so easily make a secret promise to a netizen she hasn't seen for a year? The above is my feeling after reading it for the first time. The book is a good book and has the prototype of a fine product. I hope the author will continue to work hard.