What's Wrong with You, Alpha?

Oh my God, it's been a long time since I've seen something like this that suits my taste. My wife is so hot!!! I really like the characters of the protagonists. The arrogant and cold beauty and the responsible and humorous loyal dog are a perfect match, right?!?! It's locked. Please give me more updates. I really want to see the follow-up. When will they get together? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. I want to see the daily life of a sweet couple 😢 😢 😢 When will our little orchid accept He Xiao? Oh my god, I can't do it anymore. I really like it 😢 😢 😢 😢

Super pretty! In the ABO world, Shen Xun, who looks cold but is actually thoughtful, shoulders the important task of developing inhibitors. On one side, he is as powerful as He Xiao, but on the other side, he is as mean as He Xiao. The two people meet, get to know each other, and then understand their feelings ❤️ So sweet, so beautiful 💕 💕

Although it is a love story with a more everyday style, it is a niche ABO theme, but it is explained in detail in the text. Even readers who have not been exposed to ABO themes can understand this kind of theme during the reading process. The plot of the main plot is well laid out, and the foreshadowing is also taken care of later in the story. I won't say much more to avoid spoilers. The characters are vividly created. In addition to the protagonist, the supporting characters are also relatively full-bodied and three-dimensional. When you look at the back, you feel like the villain is even more difficult to hate. The emotional line of the two protagonists develops very naturally, from the bond of pheromones to the emotional resonance. He and Shen are the kind of relationship that starts from their appearance, falls into their talents, and is loyal to their souls. The protagonist has a sound personality and good values, and the main plot is also very positive. It is a novel that can satisfy XP and read with three perspectives. The shortcoming may be that the length limits the development of some plots. Some of the sub-CP lines would be very interesting if they could be developed in detail, but most of them are jump-forward and give some hints and descriptions, which are too little developed. But in other words, this also gives readers more room for imagination. If readers with rich imagination can come up with wonderful encounters and love by themselves when watching the sub-CP, it can be considered a good reading experience.

It's good-looking. Compared with many private ABOs nowadays, the big book is a very authentic and original ABO worldview. The author's writing style is also very delicate, and the characters are vividly described.

I think this book is mainly about some overall settings in the early stage, which attracted me to the later stage. It is actually not as high as I imagined. However, as a sweet pet novel, its essence is also very good. It is very sweet and not long. It is worth reading.

So pretty!!!! I already like the characters, and the plot is great! Shen Xun and He Xiao are really made for each other. He Xiao really plays straight. Although Shen Xun can't express his love clearly, he also gives He Xiao a sense of security. It's so sweet. The author is great 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

It looks good. There are not many authors with mature writing in Tomato. There is no abuse in the whole text (except for the supporting character Fu Yanyu and the pair of deputy CPs). The characters of the two protagonists are very good, especially Shen Xun, who is beautiful and strong. The cold and beautiful character in the early stage really fascinated me.

What is very different is that this is an ABO article that uses the production of inhibitors as a clue. This book is not long, and it makes people want to read it continuously (the only one recently that did not skip the plot, and never stopped reading halfway), the writing is not bad, the IQs of the two male protagonists are very online, and every supporting character portrayed by the author has its own meaning of life. Sister Jiang Ran is my favorite character among them - she has great academic ability, a little aloof but also very humorous. If such a person existed in the real world, most people would be attracted by her charm. In my opinion - He Xiao (Gong) and Shen Xun (Shou) are destined to meet and fall in love, and they will definitely become each other's backing. Because of the time difference between parallel time and space, I was unable to send my blessings on the same day. Happy wedding!

Overall, the emotional setting of the plot of the article is very good, but the connection is very unnatural in many places. It is recommended to use symbols when switching scenes, otherwise the view will appear very fragmented, or to say that you want to go to a certain place above, and not to jump suddenly like this. Then the author's writing is not very good in some places, and the writing in some places feels very inconsistent, and it is a bit contradictory to the following (personal feeling after reading it as a whole), but the protagonist's emotional line is well written, and the overall view of the article is very good.

It's really good-looking, and the author's writing style is great. Most of the books on Tomato are a bit childish in their writing style, but this one is not at all. It's really good-looking.