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New book released, keywords: Yujiao, landmine type, high sugar, female competition, female chasing male, counter strategy, immersive viewing. Produced by Shenlai, it is completely original and has avant-garde settings. Please support it. [Love]

So good, so right, just too little. There are no faults in the description, the daily life is not boring, and the characters are eye-catching. Although the relationship was a bit science fiction in the early days of getting along, it is a coincidence. There would be no intersection without unusual events. I feel that the important thing about this type of writing is to sell characters and candy. In this book, the female character not only has her own story and identity, but also has a close connection with the male protagonist. The bond and emotional intertwining will be deepened due to events, and the character and emotional curve will be enriched. Selling sweets is not a mindless selling of sweets. The social attributes and psychological description of the female characters are taken into consideration. Everyone has his or her own role, and Bai Xing is the best character I have created so far. Other female characters will be more or less distorted, but Shirahoshi appears to be more real because of her social attributes. This is one point. Also, her psychological description and mentality changes are well written. She will be affected by her experience and sister, and will feel lost when the male protagonist cares about her. She is smart and cowardly, self-reliant, but not very confident. She can support the burden of life, and she is very eager for someone to come into her heart and think about a better life that is less restrained. I think she's quite distinct. Although I think the reason for approaching the male protagonist in the first place is a bit sci-fi. I don't know if it's because of her own playfulness or what, but it's not a problem. In terms of the same progress, the look and feel is better than the previous version. I hope to work hard to update it [Love]

I haven't commented for a long time, but to witness the rise of the masterpiece, I must move my lazy fingers. The description of each character is detailed and deeply rooted in people's hearts, full of "reality". The protagonist himself is also full of charm. The plot is sweet but has a yandere theme. The author has a wide range of professional knowledge and a rich reserve. Writing this kind of urban novel has natural advantages. The plot is brilliant, the content is full, and there are many hidden lines. It can be very attractive. I am not worried about it being unfinished at the moment. After reading the author's words, I wanted to give this book crazily. The real materials and real experiences. The author's book made me feel "qi" for the first time while reading online articles, and I felt the charm of art originating from life. The final salvation penetrated the heart of a person like me. Does salvation accompany life? I look forward to the author's follow-up performance. I wonder if there can be such a masterpiece that allows me to be redeemed in words. I also hope that the author can move towards the light and be redeemed in art and life. Come on, Hoshino-san.

It's really good-looking. It can be seen that the author has a deep understanding in the field of two-dimensional. It doesn't feel pure and refreshing, and there will be some useful information from time to time. It is very novel for people like me who don't know these people, so I will read it more carefully. Although the character of the younger sister is not very long, every portrayal is superb. Chengfushen is absolutely loyal to her brother and only loves her brother. All the accidents that her brother thinks are her intentional actions. Moreover, I feel that the logic of the author's writing is clear and not stiff. The author writes in great detail about the hearts of each female character in the female competition and palace battle. In other words, the values ​​​​of the protagonist of the novel indirectly reveal the author's values ​​​​and behavior. According to the author, the sister's soul, Shirahoshi's mold, etc., Means that the author must have met someone very similar in real life [laughing] or the author recommends a virtual anchor with Kangkang's strength [laughing]

Without practical experience, this book would not be published. It really amazes me. The description and psychological description of each heroine are so real and real that it is impossible to criticize. The author is not a famous person, but he is destined to be, and he will be. Of the many accounts on Tomato over the years, only a few have published this book review. The author also touched on the male protagonist's previous affairs, including the black cat, the big sister, and the Yin Ci P who once loved music to the point of being crazy. This all attracted my speculation and expectation. I also had a musical dream, but the missing strings were gathering dust. I had never touched them since I got my Grade 10 certificate. The heavy workload of my studies made it impossible for me to stretch out my fingers to touch the strings. I could only sing late at night and bring that unstoppable smile to my tears. I also want to write songs, like that Yinqingp, singing only for myself. What's wrong with singing alone? At least I was real at that time, and I could feel myself, instead of the body I had during the day, playing the role of a good boy with both good character and academic performance. At this point, this book is perfect and flawless in my eyes. The author's Lu Qing is so real that I seem to see myself. . . I will see you on the celebrity list, I will. . . I will bear witness for you, so before that you have to hold on well for me. I am still waiting for you. God is coming. . .

It's a good book. The characters and backgrounds are well developed. I won't say much. I highly recommend it, but I'm afraid of being banned due to high scores. I'll give it four stars [blowing kiss] No, no, the rating is not high now. I'll leave it up to subsequent readers [Love] [Learned]

It deserves the rating of this book. The God of Gods in Tomato can compete with the protagonist next door who is also named Lu (it seems to be slightly better. If the male protagonist doesn't have a harem, who will have a harem😡) Every character is very distinct, and the plot is attractive and has the author's own unique style, which makes people keep reading. Also, Tanghua is so in love that I haven't had such a pure and invincible character in a long time. What's even more terrifying is the other characters written by the author. The female characters are all equally coquettish and yandere, but they are also different types [laughing] The protagonist is thoughtful, capable, and very comfortable to watch. There is also a lot of relevant professional knowledge that seems to be more close to real life. I can only say full marks! It's so good that I can't bear to finish reading it. The author is so awesome. Don't miss out on the characters. Come on, come on! [Top post]

Thanks to the author for letting me see such excellent content! The emotional description is quite delicate! I hope the author can speed up the update! Looking forward to new content from the author [Love]

Md, it's so good-looking. The characters are so distinctive. Each character has his own characteristics. It's so damn good-looking. If the author writes more, it won't be enough!

First of all, I would like to comment on this work. I can only say that it is very good. It is very different from the novels I originally read. I am also a patient with depression. I often suffer from anxiety, palpitations, and breathlessness. I have read a novel called School Beauty before. It is very sweet when I read it. It is completely different from this novel. But in terms of writing and emotion, the author said the same in the article. It is very important to have energy. I can only say that it is invincible. As long as this book is not unfinished. Not a supervisor, mom is absolutely invincible. Damn, she's huge and good-looking. Push, push, push.

I read the author's last book and finished this one overnight. At present, there are relatively many female protagonists. When I was a kid, the length of the novel would be mixed with various perspective switches to make it smoother. There won't be that sudden feeling. The overall feeling is very good. The two yanderes I have seen so far are confirmed and one is in development. There is just one relatively minor flaw. That means there are too many female protagonists. The author tries his best to connect every aspect of the heroine's life with the male protagonist's life. It just felt like it was too busy. Although I didn't feel this way when I read it in one go, when I thought about it after reading it, I had this feeling. Each of them was too busy, and they felt like they were surrounding the male protagonist all day long. Although reading novels is what you want to experience. But it always gives me a strange feeling, maybe because I read less yandere literature. There are also some details that the author expresses very well. I can't tell you the specifics now because I watched it all night. Just wait patiently for my follow-up review. The next few chapters have been patched up, and it seems to be pretty good so far, so please read and cherish it. After reading the last two pages today, I saw the author's comments about this book. It comes to my heart (but let's not read the author). I once suffered from moderate depression. I took salt sertraline and lithium carbonate. Somatization was my biggest difficulty, but now I am much better. The author wants to take the path of healing, just like another writer I know, but that one gets more and more depressed the more he writes. The following contains spoilers, read with caution At present, I have seen a description of a young lady who plays the piano. She is very low-key. She is currently pursuing the same music path as the protagonist, but the male protagonist has withdrawn from the circle for some reason. As a result, the white moonlight in her heart has disappeared, coupled with the pressure of the big family, and because of the needs of her own identity (because In order to be a brand spokesperson and follow the path of an idol, I have to disguise myself. She laughs, she cries, and she blooms. I won't let you know if there are talented people in the comment section who can answer it for themselves. Even though she is full of lupus, she still works hard to cure her half-sister. She is a high-altitude flower that is missing but not missing. (I forgot this word... My Chinese is not good...)

If there are a lot of characters, you have to pay attention to the appearance rate [face covering] The current portrayal of the characters is very good and the characteristics are very distinctive. There are also characters that match the reader's xp. There are also cute big thunder succubi, female imp lolita, big boss sister, and popular idol next door. New characters expected to appear in the future include workplace OL, aloof rich daughter, and childhood sweetheart sister next door. In addition to the character description, the story is also very good. Some of the stories are really thought-provoking and touching. Overall, it is very good. I'm also looking forward to the author's next burst of inspiration! Wisdom Teeth (So is this a harem story?) Do you think it's possible to adapt this book into an anime? It feels a bit like China's own quintiles.

The plot is very good, the characters are well described and leave a deep impression on people.

I can only say that he is worthy of being a teacher from God. From the spiritual messenger to the beautiful palace and now to the yandere sister, the character portrayal is really full. Compared with the previous two games, this one is more to my liking. The current characters of Su Ling, Bai Xing, and Tanghua The image is already very full. Should I say that this kind of book appears in 🍅? It is simply a dimensionality reduction blow. As an old two-dimensional (probably), it has satisfied all my light novel fantasies. I can only say that it has to be a teacher of God (praise) I strongly support Teacher Shenlai. I really like this book and the teacher himself () both the writing and the writing style are impeccable. Compared to the last time, Li Gong is even more impressive. However, I still hope that the teacher can take good care of his body. After all, the body is the capital of revolution. Above, come on, Teacher Shenlai! Full support to you! [Top post]

A sacred book, the ceiling of emotional web articles, she is not the empty regret and sad feeling of falling into the abyss of "My Twenty-Six-Year-Old Female Tenant", nor is it the sweet and joy that penetrates the heart of "The School Beauty from No Scandal Until I Go to College". She is a kind of redemptive dependence, showing that the darkness can also guide us out of the darkness. The people in the article are all in jail or in the quagmire, but the persistence still exists, like a hanging thread, hanging on their broken and drifting fate. Obsession is the devil whispering in the darkness of the mystery. Obsession is also a glimmer of light in the abyss of silence. That was the beginning of sorrow and the coming of redemption. At first, I fell into the morbid attachment in the article, feeling the love that I had missed before, and also became obsessed with the lust, so as to forget the emotional lack. Later, I indulged in the grief that was inadvertently revealed, as if it could assimilate and then fade away the scars engraved in my heart. I fell in love with the redemption in grief and could comfort the missed period. Looking at those women who have sad pasts but are still stubbornly staying in the world, something that has been buried for a long time seems to emerge inadvertently. It turns out that I, like Zeng Jin, was also a young man, with likes and dislikes. It turns out that what I buried was not only the darkness, but also the light that went deep into the invisible place in my heart. She reminded me of joy and sorrow, and showed me that I too had a past. Looking forward to the content after chapter 81. After all, the male protagonist will face the regret that he once escaped. What will happen in the past? Let him escape for three years without having any contact with him. What kind of confession will there be? That mist-like (she) is looking forward to it. The author does not have to insist on adding more updates. Delicate and beautiful writing will never lack those who wait persistently. The score of 9.5 For the eighty-one chapters is really a great achievement. And in the future, if this article is completely written, it will definitely become a well-known novel, not only famous in Tomato, but also in the real novel world.

Very well written. The personalities of the characters are very distinct, and each person's characteristics, identity and situation are quickly revealed through highly personalized events. The author's control of the rhythm is really good, including the occurrence and progress of conflicts, and the interlacing of bright and dark lines are arranged very reasonably. After reading this book, I understood the importance of rhythm to a book. When should characters appear and when should they enter again? How should the connection between characters be triggered in a timely manner without violating their identity and situation? How should subsequent development leave suspense and create a sense of expectation? These are all points that need to be controlled, and the author handled them very well. In addition, the essential attribute of each female character is Honkai. This seems very simple, but it is actually very difficult to let each female character naturally flow to Honkai while avoiding homogeneity and superficiality. Among the dozen or so yandere novels I have personally read, the treatment in this book is the most unobtrusive and least objectionable to me. Because the actual source of yandere, or the source of our hope, comes from extreme love and possessiveness, but in many cases such extremes are difficult to deal with, because it is difficult to achieve such extremes that people can see it at a glance, while at the same time carefully controlling the boundaries and retaining this preferred "yandere nature" rather than pure love. I hope the author can keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to the next plot.

Divine book! The comments are not professional, but they are definitely based on my feelings. This book gave me an intuitive feeling of shock, and the image is the shock of reading "Three-Body Problem"! Although unrelated, both share the horror of facing something grand. In terms of character creation, Lu Qing saw the three-dimensional white star, and we also saw three-dimensional characters. As the book said, with "qi", souls were injected. In terms of content, this is a two-way redemption story. The male protagonist's past is a mystery. Each carefully designed inner monologue not only enriches the character image, but also is a process of solving the mystery. In addition, as a characteristic of this book, the dangerous and charming yandere feeling is really unstoppable. Sometimes I even need to wait for my mood to calm down before I can continue reading. Finally, I conclude with Yu Hua's words: Damn it, the writing is so awesome!

It took me a few days to read the latest chapter intermittently. This book really made me feel the beauty of redemption, especially in the process of the female protagonists in the book being slowly healed by the male protagonist. It made me cry several times and also felt healed. From the beginning, I was worried about the situation of the female protagonists, to the appearance of the male protagonist giving them hope of living. This book is really one of the addictive ones. After all, everyone wants their future to have a happy ending. I am very grateful to the author for letting me read such a beautiful book. Author, please can you let me see the ending of the harem [crying][crying][crying]

On the subjective side, I personally like Bai Xing very much. Maomao's struggle, hard work, never giving up in the face of setbacks, the sincerity of expressing feelings, and a hint of push for the next level, which perfectly hit my heart. Objectively speaking, Mr. Shenlai's writing style is delicate, and he has made a unique portrayal of each character's psychology, experience and behavior. Each character's three-dimensional image is full and full, just like a real person (just like the protagonist Lu Qing's psychology when writing novels). Of course, Mr. Shenlai has indeed combined people he knows into it (doge). Anyway, I think it is very good (≧∇≦*)

Author, look at me, look at me! It can be said that it is a ceiling-level yandere novel that made me feel like I was seeing my wife Yuno again for the first time. Nowadays, most yanderes in yandere literature come from blackening. This article is great. What I really like is the possessiveness after being blackened? It's redemption, it's Amano Yukiteru's simple greeting when my wife Yuno was most desperate, it's the beautiful love that my wife Yuno gave up on the world and said, "Yukiteru can use me as much as he wants and kill me." It is infinite despair, with nowhere to escape, that precious light. In the end, was it really just Amano Yukiteru who redeemed my wife Yuno? Their twisted love reveals purity and holiness in the end. Yandere novels have now entered an inexplicable dead end, turning into a hatchet and turning dark at every turn. There are many complex factors in the occurrence of yandere. I love you to the core, but I can't accept being in the same bed with you. I have to go far, but I have the obsession to go to the end. It is my honor to die for you, but how much I want to live a humble life with you. Yandere is not an extension of blackness. The yandere is the center of the contradictory sick leave whirlpool, the brave girl, she doesn't want to let go of her obsession, rest assured of her persistence in love, rest assured of Dawn's redemption! I don't really like yanderes, especially my wife Yuno. Because of her bravery, persistence, and determination. They all remind me of times when I was weak, tired, and wanted to give up. But every time I see her, I sympathize with her: Another person trapped by love, I hope you can be saved. May you be different from me: when I think of my cowardly self, I always feel a touch of regret. The author is great, this is my understanding of yandere. Hope it's useful to you. Your writing is very different. You should have some of your own understanding in this article, and don't be influenced by the yandere articles on the market. At the same time, my sister is not my biological child, right? If you think about it carefully, there is a very interesting inference. "Sister" really made a bold move. I want to see her get the backlash, hahahahahahaha

It's very interesting to watch. The life of Tang Hua made me very sad. The interaction between Su Ling and the protagonist and the intrigue with Bai Xing made me extremely happy (it's so sweet that a goblin like me wouldn't dare to dream about it [I almost cried]). Bai Xing's liveliness and cuteness also really poked me, but I was afraid of being banned [laughter]

Great book, everyone's characters are interesting. It is a semi-daily book that can be read slowly and can be regarded as a light novel. The only problem is that depression is unlikely to be so scheming, and my sister's too deep-seated may be a bit unpleasant. [Cover face] It's my fault. Star treasures and sugar babies are both very good, but they are all jade in the rough with flaws. But I really can't stand the character of the younger sister. The following contains spoilers and strongly subjective opinions The protagonist (ye) has a past that he doesn't want to see again, and he hides it very well. My sister is extremely controlling and keeps trying to tear apart my father's past.

The existence of an invincible track in the same series, especially when the author said that everything he had personally experienced and understood, I was completely shocked. Everything that is truly written is the best. I have been completely conquered by the author and moved by his ideas and values. Thank you author, I really learned a lot. The fields are not interoperable, but such learning attitudes and concepts are always good. I'm glad that the author got out of the illness and stopped in tomatoes to tell me what a real novel is. Therefore, I will not retreat or give up. Although I cannot keep up with updates during the monthly holiday, I will definitely watch the finale carefully. Finally, please update! (Crazy) (drooling) (rolling eyes up) [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

I read another book by the author last year. Although the ending was hasty, it couldn't stop me from liking her. The author's writing skills are really delicate, and the characterization of the characters is also very detailed. Later, because of the ending of Crystal Palace, I paid less attention to the author. I saw this book on the recommendation list today, and read it for a while with the intention of giving it a try. Unexpectedly, I finished reading it all in just one moment, and then I came over to review it. That's when I saw that it was written by Crystal Palace. I really like the author's description, and I hope the author will work harder! As long as nothing unexpected happens, I will definitely chase it to the end. I really don't hope that this time it will end sadly like Crystal Palace. This time I will also pay attention to it, come on! ! ! After reading this yandere novel, I can no longer stand the other yandere novels in Tomato. The author misunderstood me [Petrochemical]

The character creation in this book is very delicate, from the psychological description of the intrigues to the physical description, it can be said to be lifelike. The advancement of the plot is not so rigid, the transitions are handled well, and the logic is quite strict. It is a rare work in this type of article. However, because the description was too vivid and I was in the hospital, it seemed gloomy to me. However, this does not affect the quality of the book or my evaluation of it. [Praise]

God among gods, at a certain level, it can be ranked in the light novel list, complete immortal grass, hexagonal warrior. Each of the heroines is more likable than the last. At first I thought the younger sister was pretty good, then I discovered the invincible Platinum Star, and finally a Sugar Blossom came out and became my favorite character. Oh my god, there are more storylines about Tang Hua, and a little reminder that the plot about my sister is a bit too much, and it has gradually become too much. To put it bluntly, even if my sister is the first female lead, even if she is the author's designated heroine, she has just moved in and only known each other for two weeks, so why is she acting like a royal... Everyone is miserable. The author can't just feel sorry for his sister.

At first glance, it looks like an old two-dimensional game. It has a clear structure, stable characters, high-quality content advancement, smooth plot development, and no obvious surprises. It also has insights into some professional aspects and does not make random claims. It's just that the update is too slow, please wait for a while.

I discovered another masterpiece! ! ! It seems to be about the daily life of the male protagonist and the yandere girl, but it is actually a story about the male protagonist and the yandere girl redeeming each other and growing up. The author's writing style is very good, giving each girl a soul, paying attention to details, and the characters are really delicately drawn. This is the only novel that made me want the male protagonist to have a harem. I like every portrayal of the female protagonist. Come on, author! ! !

Well written, I lost my account once before and forgot the title of the book. Now I have been looking for it for a long time and came back to read it. It has updated more than 200 chapters. My feelings about this book are quite complicated. I empathize with them emotionally, and my heart rises and falls with the characters' situations. But intellectually, I really hate the characters in this book. It may be a bit too much to say that, but I also have that time when I regard a person as my whole life and burn my heart and soul for her. Time has passed and I am no longer the same person I was back then, and we are gradually drifting away from each other. When I look back on those times, I suddenly understand my naivety. Values ​​have changed with the passage of time. I want to love normal people, and I want to protect each other with my significant other in our daily life that seems to last forever. I don't want her to be very dependent on me, and I won't rely on her. It is the love for oneself that leads to the love for others. I hope to meet and fall in love with someone who loves himself more than me. His personality is bright and clear, like a gentle wind, like a bright wind and a clear moon. There is no doubt that the author's level is high, the characters are three-dimensional, the plot... Is reasonable, and the character design... Is hard to comment on. I, Ye Lu, don't like listening to it as much as I did before. I have made a lot of money selling hifi equipment, so I don't watch it that much anymore. I still play galgame occasionally, and I don't watch V anymore. Sometimes I read light novels. I am no longer the sentimental boy I used to be, and I no longer tie myself to their bodies like I used to. I hope that the author will write better and better, that everyone in the book will have a good ending, and that the world will return to ordinary warmth, or even end with "desperate happiness".

I can responsibly say that some of the masterpieces of yandere literature that I have read so far are masterpieces of yandere literature. In the process of searching for this type of literature, I have read a lot, but most of them only made me feel like I was searching hard in the boundless desert. But when I got here, it was like seeing an oasis, from being strong to being thirsty. I thought about it and found that both the characterization and the professional and real content are very real when the reader takes it on. I have never felt so much like living in reality in a movie when reading a novel. The author really writes about life with heart and tries his best to shape the characters. It is not the kind of torment and blood that shows off and distorts the yandere, but is full of warmth and care. It is the kind of soul experience that can bring light in the dark night and provide warmth in the ice and snow. Thank you for this work, and I also wish the author to become healthier, and all lonely souls who need warmth in their hearts to gain warmth [love] While others are reaping the benefits of the yandere entry, God is creating the attraction for the yandere entry.