Although He Is Immortal, He Is Powerless

Come on, this book is very interesting, the characters are quite distinctive, the plot is a bit slow, don't cut it in half, otherwise it will make me uncomfortable The plot is very dense. Now I think Dune City in the middle period is a bit unreliable, and the later Academy chapter is a bit crazy, but it brings out the unique personality charm of the protagonist, but the details are a bit hard to describe.

The new book I started is mainly to catch up with the new writing activities of Tomato. It's a bit too rushed. I hope everyone can point out the shortcomings in the writing. [Cover face]

This land never lacks stories [laughter]

How to put it, it's okay, a bit like "To the Immortal You", the protagonist is either dead or on the way to death, and in the same way, he is also on the way to resurrection. However, in "To the Immortal You", the "immortal" has the ability to change the situation, but the protagonist of this book is unable to change, which also corresponds to the title of the book.

The content is very substantial. It would be better if the imagination was bigger. There are too few routines and it is a bit unsatisfying.

After reading the story, I found that the author has been very careful in shaping the protagonist. The young temperament shown on the outside is combined with the old attitude of having spent a long time. The seemingly conflicting and contradictory handling is very reasonable. The plot is a bit on the side, but due to the intensive jokes and unexpected small details, it is still readable. However, there are too few updates, which makes readers like us who are following updates a little uncomfortable.

Very good book, Love from Terra

Nothing but awesomeness

True Fenhao Kande said

It's beautiful, it's a good book!

The subject matter is particularly novel

It's a good book, except for a short section in the middle where I might get a little restless, but I quickly get the hang of it. It doesn't have the flavor of the apocalypse, but rather the flavor of time travel.

Very interesting and will satisfy your book hunger Author, your work is very well written. I hope you can write it to the end [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Why is it so good-looking with so few people watching it?

Not bad, I think the subject matter is very novel [Blowing Kiss]

There are a lot of things I want to say but don't really want to say, but I remember them anyway. Author, you want to remake it, right?

It's very beautiful. It's not easy to find this book. The writing is good, unconventional, and the content is novel. The writing by Laoyouzi is very exciting, but the pace is slower later on, and there are so many women that there is no sense of tension.

Author, are you telling the truth?

Rivers, lakes and seas are dizzy

It's pretty and very novel.

The author must be playing Arknights [face covering] [face covering]

It's very good, but I don't know how to put it, I just feel like it's a little bit lacking.

I support it, but the subject matter is so unpopular.

Very good piece, makes my brain spin

It's well written, but there are indeed a lot of holes that haven't been fixed, and the power system is a bit incomplete, but overall it's still good.