Wielding the Talismans, I Conquer American Horror

1 To reassure book lovers, this book has multiple female protagonists. 2 It can be seen that many book friends are concerned about the strength of the protagonist, but because I was writing a million words at the beginning, my strength will be reduced. Now I will change the main plot to speed up the growth. 3 Sister Yu is not a supporting actress 4. There is no Marvel plot, because I really don't understand it. 5 The main selling point is that America is scary, America is scary, America is scary! I won't read the comments anymore. I have to concentrate on typing. Comments will only slow down my typing speed 😠

After looking at the first few pictures, I feel that the male protagonist is too kind, and rats are the strongest. He directly resurrected the little girl, then tortured her to death, and then kept reincarnation for unknown reasons, and then kept catching ghosts and making rat charms.

I feel that you have some misunderstandings about the two qi of black and white. The two qi of black and white represent the yin and yang of good and evil, which can be converted into each other. As the saying goes, a righteous person can use evil methods to eliminate evil and become righteous, and an evil person can use righteous methods to achieve righteousness and evil. In Jackie Chan's Adventures, power itself has no distinction between good and evil. For example, take the twelve talismans. The talisman is a prop used throughout the play and is the most used magic prop by the Dragon Team. However, the talisman is made of the magical power that Lope extracted from the Holy Lord. In addition to the eight demons, the Holy Lord is also a black energy mage of a certain generation. The talisman is essentially the black energy magic of the Holy Lord. The host of the Black Shadow Mask is affected not because of power but because the mask itself hides the soul of the devil. In short, what I want to say is that although the protagonist uses black energy magic to inherit the mantle of Daolong, he does not have to be locked in the black energy camp. After all, the camp classification in Jackie Chan Adventures is based on heart rather than strength. Even if you are in the black energy camp at the beginning, you can switch to the white energy camp like the trio of Troyes, Dragons and Afu. After all, the adult Xiaoyu is really sweet.

It's not bad. There are really too few American horror writers. I hope the author can work harder and of course not be too watery. 🍉

It's good to watch, it's picked up when it's time to pick it up, it's not too censorship, it's the kind you can understand even if you haven't seen the movie, and it's the kind that's okay, scary, and comprehensive, not the kind of reincarnation. Well, so far, it's not toxic at all. I hope the author can work hard! Hmm, comments from nearly 4,000 hours of reading

Come on, author, I don't mean any harm. Although I don't know if you can read this comment, I still want to say something. In recent chapters, I feel that the character of the protagonist is a bit weird and a bit poisonous. Next, I hope to set up the character a little better. It is true that the protagonist needs a change, but I feel that the previous experiences are enough. The black water ghost, the ogre, and the Satan brother are all quite decisive in killing. It does not mean that the protagonist will not feel sad if the people he comes in contact with in this town turn into demons. Sadness can be there But I also hope to present it in a better form, and you seem to have deleted some psychological descriptions before. In fact, you don't have to worry about the word count. Although some people read it, the author is a newcomer, and the subject matter is really good. Come on, I don't often post book reviews. It may be a bit wrong, but I still hope the author can read it, thank you.

The twelve talisman-enhancing magic to defeat the wronged souls is simply crushing. The characters are all different. Why is the start so miserable? Do you really think you are the power output source of the talisman? Even if you use it once, it will consume your energy. If you can really use it as a spell to output energy source, you will be an awesome character, but you still can't deal with the kid.

The author's writing is good, but through the Holy Lord, you can master the eight demonic energies of the demon dragon, and maybe you can further become a representative of the black energy, and the follow-up can be more exciting.

The pace of the first thirty chapters is a bit slow, and the plot is a bit scattered (mainly because several cases in this part of the plot are not handled very cleanly. The first Dangerous Water incident left a tail, the boarding school incident took several chapters to get to the beginning, and the first case of the opening of the firm was still an unfounded one. All these cases add up to a feeling of being hit here and there, and I don't know what the protagonist is doing). However, after chapter 30, all the previously mentioned cases are dealt with, and the perception becomes much better. I suggest that it is better to tell the following events in one go. Even if you dig holes and leave too many introductions, it is best not to leave too many introductions. And if a case is not solved completely and leaves a foreshadowing, then it is best for the subsequent case to be solved by the protagonist, otherwise the reading will feel fragmented. The above are just a few suggestions. Best wishes to the author ❤️

Come on, author. Great, a rare subject. Writing novels in this genre is so rare.