Anime Crossover: In Tokyo, Starting with Being Adopted

So far, there are no bad points, and the details have been optimized very well. However, the emotional scenes are still not completely clear yet. Friends who like more can feel free to enter, we will receive instructions. Overall, it's good to keep the word count up. I hope the foreshadowing can be dealt with clearly in the future.

I've seen Chapter 51. Bland, slow-heating, non-toxic. From my personal subjective experience, the only shortcoming may be that there are a lot of characters involved in different anime plots. According to the protagonist's happy-go-lucky mentality, it doesn't feel like he will take the initiative to advance the plot with other characters. You need to weigh it, try to make a line as long as possible, and have an obvious plot anchor point, which will be better for readers who are following up.

In this era of brainless writing that usually starts with Long Aotian and a bunch of women posting about it, this is a very good book. Nowadays, there are very few comprehensive comics that are so detailed. The overall style of Japanese light novels can be regarded as a new series if you have not watched the corresponding anime. The content inside is not the same, there are many self-designed plots, which portray each character in a more three-dimensional way. For now, apart from being a little shorter, I personally feel good about it. I hope the author can work hard. In addition to 4,000 updates per day, there can actually be more updates😏😏😏 After reading it, I found that chapters 35 to 36 are actually the plot of the hero saving the beauty in Jindian. Although it is late, it has arrived. Personally, I don't think there's anything poisonous about it according to the current description. Of course, it cannot be ruled out that the author has modified it.

The quality of this book is okay, but there are some problems. Things like prices, wages, and a series of problems caused by the appearance of the protagonist make it a bit uncomfortable to watch. For those who know Japan well, the values ​​are too outrageous. For those who don't know much about the situation in Japan, it will also become uncomfortable after reading the comments. Regarding some nonsense issues, in a good work, some nonsense can arouse readers' interest in reading, but if there is too much nonsense, people's aesthetic taste will be fatigued, resulting in a decrease in readers' interest in reading. There is also the issue of original characters. Since you have written a comprehensive comic, you should not write original characters. Because readers do not have enough understanding of them, it will also reduce people's interest in reading and make people feel that it is a waste of time. Some people will even start to complain. The main reason is that people generally read fan fiction without thinking. If you rush to write an unknown character, it will make people think twice and make people feel bored. After reading a few chapters, I feel that the writing is average to above average. Some novices who have not read many books may be able to read it, but for those who have read some good books, I can only say that it is readable, but far from good, so it is okay. Finally, I hope that the author will be less poisonous. I will look up things I don't understand and read more good works. Maybe one day I will write a good original book.

It feels very good. Seven points is too low. I think it should be at least eight points and five points. The writing style seems very comfortable. Come on, author. It's such a procrastination, such a coward, it's a tormenting book, with this pace, and layers of descriptions on some minor supporting characters who are about to disappear after just one glance, it's weird to get a high score.

Well, it is true that in daily life and love, I have a job and make money. I also talked about moving out of the park house, but I just moved. I just wrote about it. Author, did you forget how old the male protagonist was before he traveled through time? Isn't it a bit immature? It directly choked my 16-year-old body and thirty-year soul. Wow, the heroine is really capable. I won't say anything about writing small points before the male protagonist travels through time. There is also this system. You write it and you go and ask him to give a little bit of big effect. How do you write Miyazono Kaoru in the original novel that the operation failed? You just write that the operation is successful and that's it. Right? The male protagonist wrote a little bit. I haven't read the anime, so I've just skipped over all the anime heroines in this book. I don't know. (Okay, that's all. Maybe I'm too serious, and I'm really not suitable for reading this book. Others have commented on it, so I won't say anything. It's okay. Maybe I'm not suitable for reading. It's just because I have too many personal opinions, so I'll withdraw it~(^з^)-☆❤️)

The plot is pretty good, and there aren't many bad points at the moment, but when you write this, you have to think about which of the two heroines you will choose in the future. Nanami is very good, and Megumi is also very good. There is no clear heroine at the moment, but both of them have some ambiguous relationships. So far, the author's handling of the emotional line is good. You can look forward to the following chapters.

Wuwuwuwu😢, I would like to call it the best manga I have ever read😫, whether it is the detailed description of emotions, the writing style and the characterization of the characters are all top-notch, and the most important thing is the protagonist Taia Sashi, who slowly changes and psychologically changes from a passerby heroine who meets Kato Megumi, and also gets to know Nanami Aoyama's care, and My sister Kaoru Miyazono, my childhood sweetheart Nishimiya Shaozi, and my defeated dog Hide Lili, and it can be said that from the career and emotional lines of the protagonist, you are all my wings, and the perfect ending where I finally accept everything, woo woo 😢😢😢 is simply amazing, it's a pity why there are so few ah ah ah ah, why are there always so few such good novels! There is a saying that goes well, because we miss each other, we long to meet again.

Overall, it looks pretty good so far. But you need to think about it when reading, because some of the author's perspectives are based on the perspective of adults, and sometimes novices may not understand it. Secondly, I personally think that 35-36 is a classic plot. Although it is late, it arrives, and there is no such thing as deliberately giving away a girl. I hope the author will continue to keep up the good work🤔🤔🤔

The writing is okay, but there is one issue that I think is a problem. If the author has something to say, he can put a separate line at the end. There is no need to mention a sentence at the beginning or put brackets in the middle to explain something to the readers. I am here to read the book. You can just write according to your ideas.