I Haven't Finished Writing Yet, Why Am I Invincible?

I personally feel that your writing is quite good, but the relationship between family members and the relationship between women may not be the same. It feels like you have not had experience in this area before. However, if the author can control the emotional scenes later, it is best not to take too much emphasis on them.

This is the first Wenzhaogong-type novel written in my heart. There is no plot like pretending to be slapped in the face, nor is it overly depressing or overly exciting, nor is it full of all kinds of conspiracies. The protagonist is proud but humble. Unlike other novels, he takes other people's things as his own, looks down on this and looks down on that, and is extremely violent. The whole novel is like an endless stream, moist but not urgent, and like the soup of boiled cabbage, clear but not light. Although it is a Wenzhaogong type novel, it is not as long as other novels of this type, making you want to copy the full text of the original work. The plot of this novel is peaceful but exciting. It reminded me of the feeling of playing a stand-alone PC game for the first time after playing mobile games for a long time. I felt relaxed, as if time had slowed down, and I was completely immersed in the plot. Unlike mobile games, you either have to fight with others or insult each other, and all kinds of swear words are thrown around. The more you play, the more tired you become. This novel is unlike other Wenzhaogong novels I have read. The more I read this novel, the more relaxed and comfortable I become. This is the essence of the novel, isn't it? Of course, the most important thing is that there is no betting plot in this novel. Eleven out of ten novels of this type that I have read have betting plots, so I once thought that it would be impossible to write a novel without a betting plot. This is my first five-star review, and I give it with all my heart.

Not bad! There are not so many messy waistcoats to hide one's identity. The protagonist of those literary and entertainment novels with a bunch of waistcoats seems to have an enemy who wants to kill him. He is afraid that he will die if he is exposed.

The main plot is pretty good, and the writing style is also online. The author has greatly improved this emotional line. If it doesn't work, we won't write it.

Every time I read this kind of article, I feel that the preface to Prince Teng's Pavilion, the Luo Shen Fu and the water-melody song can't be written by humans?

Yes, three views are correct. I remember when I was young in the 1980s, I climbed Mount Taishan in one breath and ran down again after watching the sunrise. It was so good when I was young, but now I can only lie in bed and play with my mobile phone. I'm old and lazy.

Great, please fix the emotional line. Although the interaction between the male and female protagonists is okay, it feels a bit biased. The plot of the protagonist is very good, but the female protagonist's presence seems a bit low (fire tongs Liu Ming, please come on)

Finally, there are no brainless villains and pretentious plots. It is just a simple copycat, but the plot is a bit stiff and the emotional scenes are a bit poorly written. However, there are no cookie-cutter plots that are well received.

Great book, very interesting

The content is good, although I am not interested in the emotional line.

The content is not bad. The emotional line is not awkward, but it is a bit shallow. It may not be well portrayed. I personally feel that the heroine is still needed. In the novel, emotions are very important. Love, family, and friendship are all very important. I abandon the heroine because the emotional line is generally not well written. I feel that it is not advisable to lose it.

It's very good. It's a pure Wenzhaogong novel. There is no mess like writing a script. Come on, the author.

It's very interesting, although the ending is a bit sloppy, but overall it's well written. I love reading it. I liked this type of novel some time ago. This one is very well written. I think the author of similar articles can still write this kind of article. I hope the author can write more articles of this type in the future. I was fascinated by it. I was really fascinated at first, but then I thought it wasn't enough. I waited for a few days and finished it in one go. I also like the setting and the plot. It's overall satisfactory.

The book is very nice. The writing part is also very good. It's just this emotional drama. How should I put it, the protagonist has lived three lives. I feel a little strange that a girl would behave like this.

Not bad, not bad, not bad. At least it's not particularly embarrassing like showing off and slapping someone in the face.

He looks good ^ω^, he doesn't slap his face too much, his father is quite interesting, and he doesn't want to post nonsense on the Internet.

I thought it was good and wanted to comment on the result.

I like it, but I'm not very fond of romance. If I only love the main character, I might as well write about their marriage as soon as possible, so I won't write more about them. Overall quite satisfied

The writing is very good, but it's 100,000 words. What about the three-body problem? Or is this three-body the three-body I thought it was?

I have a question. The preface to Prince Teng's Pavilion means that Wang Bo asked for an official position. Does the protagonist want to be an official?

It's not poisonous for the time being, the author replied, that's it.

Not bad, good, worth a look

Just a little less

The love line is not suitable, come on

Only writing, but not pure literature

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Not bad, a very relaxing article.

It's really good. I can only criticize but not praise it very much, but this one is really good. It feels a bit like watching a full-time artist.