Ye Luoli: Wen Qian's Reversal Journey

It's okay, the setting is novel, the imagination is good, the writing is not a novice, and the writing skills are there. The reaction of Wen Qian when a teenage child turns into Jin Litong is also logical. I think the words that are most consistent with Wen Qian's setting are: the sun that cannot rise, the moon that cannot set, the good is not pure enough, the bad is not thorough enough, the heart actually longs to be favored but is not favored, resulting in Wen Qian's twisted temper. One of the few Ye Luoli fans in Tomato can watch it, overall it is recommended

I think this book can definitely be called a good book among Ye Luoli's fans. It does not deliberately discredit anyone, but each character has its own charm. And there is no problem with the logic, especially the settings of the composition of fairy power and human resentment. There is no problem with logic. The whole book is funny (some jokes in it are really interesting) and warm (especially the way Shi Wang and Wen Qian get along, like an old father and his quirky female goose). I hope the author's extra chapters can be more interesting. I really don't want to end such a good book so quickly.

I have read a great fanfic by Ye Luoli. The main text does not have too many poisonous points. The whole story is relatively compact and fast-paced. The logic is also great, after all, Ye Luoli's original film had poor logic. The original cp is completely dismantled (anyway, I don't think there is any cp hit, there is a little extra), the main cd direction is mainly written around Wen Qian, focusing on career and leisure, the plot does not have much of the original film plot (it seems that there are only some memories and the ending of the original film plot [thinking]), the characters are well portrayed and funny, but not funny for the sake of being funny, and do not deliberately make jokes. The movie viewing style written in the extra chapter does not copy the entire text, and there are some changes. The extra is funny and not embarrassing. Recommended to read 👀 (This is my first time writing a long review, and I usually only review books that I like or hate (! The above are personal feelings, don't criticize if you don't like them! (Exclamation mark ❗ specially added))) [Send heartfelt comments]

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It's very interesting. The author has completely completed some incomprehensible contents of Ye Luoli's fairy dream. The world view is not too big, but it is quite interesting. If you can't understand the world view, I really recommend it. The character of the heroine changes slowly, and there is a process of gradual change. It is not rigid, and the heroine is a heartthrob to a certain extent. Even though the heroine becomes a god later, the logic is also very reasonable [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] Hee hee, and then the author asked me what I wrote?

It's beautiful. Sissi's character is well described. World King, Mandola, Wushen Ling, Huo Liaoye, Xin Ling, and many characters in Ye Xin are all well described, especially their tea party and their outings. It feels very warm, especially the horror house, which is really funny (›´ ω`‹) I read the whole book as soon as I opened it. It's very beautiful and attractive, and I feel the ending is also very good. I hope there will be some games or other extras after the ending of that world. [Sending my heart] Sissi's character description is very quirky, without losing her own personality. It's beautiful.

I have always been curious about the author's other books, but I heard that the author has discontinued this book for a long time, so I didn't dare to read it. I still couldn't resist my curiosity today, so I finished reading it in one sitting and completely fell to the bottom of the trap🕳️ A very novel setting. Sissi, the golden princess, is powerful, funny and very innovative. No one would not love such a girl. The author's writing is also very interesting and humorous, making people want to stop reading. The logic is always online, and each character has his own characteristics. Now I hope the author will keep writing and not stop updating, woooooooooooooooooooo

This book is super good-looking, and it's not the kind of book that has God's perspective and the blessing of a golden finger from the system. It means that Wen Qian has grown up and become excellent and awesome. It's Sister Qian herself~ I especially like the story of Sissi in Wonderland.

Like many of the people above, I have read all the author's books, and among the many Demon Slayer and Ye Luoli fanfics I have read, the author's book is my favorite. Generally speaking, the author's article gave me a very warm feeling. Whether it is the text or the plot, the characters are well created. While retaining the original characters, I can see their growth. Although it's not particularly stunning, it's comfortable and engaging and made me want to read on. I hope you can write more works. Of course, it would be better if the writing could be more natural and the point of view and plot could be more perfectly integrated.

Very nice book, I almost missed it because of the cover

Very nice, just write it like you did. Everyday life in Wonderland would always be like this. Don't keep on scheming. Don't stick to the original plot. How well you write like this.

Wuwuwu TT This is a really good fan [crying]. The dispute between Mandola Xinling finally has a reasonable explanation on both sides, and most importantly, Sissi finally has the opportunity to be loved and tolerated. The withered rose regains its vitality, with its own points, and gradually grows into a still arrogant but overly excellent trainee god. Moreover, Jin Litong, who changed her fate, also made Sissi's life very good [crying]. They made each other's messy life live in their own way (only after seeing this did I have the real feeling that Jin Litong is really a great fairy with the name of the God of War in the fairy world [almost crying], and not a power bank that was deceived and deceived)

It's really super pretty (≧∇≦)/ The author is very powerful and diligent in repairing the original incomplete world framework to make it very reasonable, such as why the fairy called a human master without any grudges, and also added some other elements to make the plot more complete and reasonable. The description of Wen Qian is also very reasonable. It describes her character that dares to love and hate, is kind but not holy, always sober, but also a little selfish. It also describes her desire for love, and her transformation into becoming more and more lively after being cared for by others. Damn, keep up the good work, I'm really looking forward to your next work. (～￣▽￣)→))*￣▽￣*)O

It's really beautiful! This kind of king treats the heroine as his daughter. Really, few people write about it. I particularly like the emotional line between the king and the heroine. Really, this emotional line makes me feel like spring breeze and my mood is cheerful. A very natural feeling. It's really good! [Adoration][Blowing kiss]

Awesome! Finished spreading flowers🌸~00:17 It's another great book [Sending Hearts] I can't put it down at all. This week I have read two of the author's novels by Qian Qian, and I will finish the third one by Qian Qian during the winter vacation [Blowing Kisses] In fact, I have already read part of that book by Qian Qian a long time ago, and I am going to start reading it from the beginning [Sending Hearts] All these Qianqian novels written by the author are super beautiful [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] I fell in love with [love] [love] [love] [love] They both grew up, but they fit in well with Sissy as expected. The ideas are also super cool, especially this Qianqian novel. At first I dismissed it, but when I started reading it I cried (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ) How could such a great novel come about~ I grew my eyes just to read this [laughing] I have been cured. I really like Sissi's character. She dares to speak and do, has strong action, is humane, and is close to life. [Shocked] She is not the traditional perfect goddess, but a wonderful, cute, strong, brave, lively, and loving little girl. [Shy] She has an independent personality and relies on the emotional value brought by others, but she is not completely dependent on it. Her strong core is the beginning and necessity of all success. Always love yourself, be yourself, and believe in yourself. Dear Wenqian, I wish you happiness and health forever, all your wishes come true, and everything goes well [Love] Love you😘A loyal believer of God Sissi~

I like it very much and gave Wen Qian a different choice. Although I like the protagonist group, I am very happy that the author has created another Wen Qian, because I know the impact of living environment on people, so I don't hate Ye Luoli's villain. I always feel that if the environment is different, Wen Qian is very good. She knows what she wants and has a strong ability to act. The author writes that everyone is gentle and tolerant, which is really touching. Super beautiful, the regret is made up for [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

I really like Ye Luoli's novel written by the author. The logic is excellent, the writing is excellent, and the plot is also excellent. The characters have their own charms, and the strangeness of the original work can be rounded off. Thank you to the author for your hard work... It is a well-written book and it is super beautiful! I like it very much! ! ! It reminds me that I also liked this anime back then, but then the plot became so outrageous that I couldn't stand it at all... Now that I can read the author's article, I feel really honored! ! It feels like my childhood dream has been fulfilled (sobbing)

It's beautiful. The author's character Wen Qian has grown step by step from a little girl who lacked love to a powerful, willful and responsible person. She knows what kind of person she is and what she wants. She will act for her own ideas and has a strong core. Ah Jin is also very gentle and patient, and Shi Wang is like a male mother. The plot logic is okay, not everything is based on the original work, but all the holes that need to be filled have been filled. Whether it is the protagonist or the supporting character, they all have their own personality charm. It does not mean that just because they are supporting characters, they are the backdrop for the protagonist. Highly recommended! ! ! [Blowing kiss][learned]

The author's writing is very good. I only read the extra chapter. I have time to correct the text. The content is rich and colorful. Well~_~ It's very relaxed and happy, at least that's how it is in the extra chapter. There is no whitewashing. This is her true nature. The deformed flower grows and blooms with careful support. [She is a flower whose branches are bent due to the pursuit of sunlight, and is thin and deformed because of the poor soil. But after the second careful support, she has the ability to bloom beautiful flowers. She was a flower, and she was born to bloom. Jin Litong thought, how could he stop a flower from blooming after thousands of years of delay? He was sad but couldn't stop it.

What does this book say? The author really worked hard to perfect some settings. It seemed like a big mistake had been made, there seemed to be many new characters, and there seemed to be many events. But when I came back to my senses, I found that Wen Qian was still Wen Qian. Nothing had changed, but something seemed to have changed. My stereotyped first impression of Wen Qian didn't change after reading this book, so I felt like nothing had changed. But she did grow a lot. Especially when watching movies, the comparison made me feel like wow, has it changed so much? There is no standard for the best fan fiction, but it must have a unified judging standard. That is, I will never whitewash anything my fan characters have done.

Invincible is good-looking, has its own rhythm, and the plot is very complete. It fills in many loopholes in the original work. Everyone is very vivid, and the personality is also very reasonable. I like it very much [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Shy] [Shy] [Shy] [Shy] [Shy] [Shy]. I have finished two big novels about Wen Qian. They are really good. Although they are both written about Wen Qian, the plots are different, ahhh! ! ! ! I really like [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]. Looking forward to a big lower part! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Feed]

It's very interesting. Sister Qian is really a good child with a strong heart. This work made me understand Sissi better. She is a child who longs to be loved. Although she loves to act coquettishly, she can still grow up independently. I like Shiwang very much, woohoo, a father with strong power, unconditional love and encouragement makes me feel extremely safe, okay? Ah, it's very beautiful anyway, I don't want to write any other thoughts, but by the way, this is the one in the library! (It's considered a prequel)

I really rarely write book reviews, and many of Ye Luoli's fans also write embarrassing reviews, but this is the only one that makes me feel warm and at ease. I don't know how to describe this feeling. Ye Luoli was written when I was a child. It must have been nearly ten years, and I don't know any of the subsequent characters. I just came to Tomato to browse around when I was out of food for fan fiction. After reading so many fan fiction with novice writing and clueless plots, this was one of the rare books that I could read. The writing is really heart-warming, especially the king of the world. I especially like the king of the world and the golden prince in this book. There are many parts that hit my heart. I had just finished a stressful job and couldn't relax. After reading this, I felt really relaxed. I feel like crying. There is a feeling of having someone to rely on, and a sense of immersion. All in all five star recommendation.

Really, I picked up this one from another Wenqian fanfic. It's really great. The author is really good🌹🌹🌹

To be honest, the books written by Jin Yao are really beautiful. Two of the three Ye Luoli novels written by the author are the only two novels that I have read in one go and without any omissions since I read Tomato. This is because I already have a good impression of Wen Qian, and it is in line with the character of the original novel. The timeline is complete, there are no holes that are not filled in on the surface, the characters are not OOC, and the descriptions are not straight-forward. The golden fingers are appropriate, and they are mixed with some touching plots. They are not moved for the sake of being moved, but just touch people's hearts with simple words; Furthermore, the plot is full of ups and downs, and it doesn't feel boring as soon as the previous freshness passes. The various new things don't feel bloated, and there are some daily cookies mixed in from time to time, so you really won't get bored or bored; Wen Qian is really a very good little girl ୧⩾Ꙫ⩽୨ (Okay, I'm too lazy to write a long article. No one cares about the small essay I wrote carefully o(╥╥)o

It's beautiful. I like it very much. I like this phrase the most [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] "Who is the god who created this world? Do you want to erect a statue and give this world a name?" Wen Qian laughed: "It's not God who created this world, it's you, and everyone who joins later who has good intentions, firm character and bravery."

This book is really super good, and more to my liking, but I don't want to read the later episodes because I haven't read the others. I have read Three Worlds so far, and overall it is very good to read. Moreover, the heroine is Wen Qian without cp. The heroine needs to rely on the tenth level at the beginning. Later, she becomes a god and has a good relationship with the tenth level. She also has a good relationship with everyone in Wonderland. The black protagonist group , its system was stolen. Someone originally wanted to replace his identity, but later Wen Qian made her disappear. The beginning of the story is that Wen Qian wanted to replace Wang Mo's identity, but was accidentally mistaken by the system. He exchanged identities with Prince Jin and became Princess Jin in Wonderland.

Originally I couldn't find any interesting articles about Ming Ke, so I clicked in to take a look. When I saw the extra plot about Ming Ke, I added it to my bookshelf. Then I realized that I had read the author's "Ye Luoli, I Changed My Life by Studying" before. It was obvious that Da Da really liked Wen Qian. [Blow a kiss] I really like the growth of Wen Qian and the father-daughter relationship between Shi Wang and Wen Qian [Blow a kiss] [Send a heart] [Send a heart] I have read all three books written by the author. The characters are very good and the writing is also great. I like all three books [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]

It's really beautiful, especially watching the movie and the follow-up. Very beautiful! ! ! Highly recommended! I disdain the other books where Wen Qian is cleared, but in this book I am very happy that Wen Qian is cleared! Wen Qian is a good child. When no one was raising her, she tried to raise herself to the best of her ability. She stumbled and got up and continued to move forward [Love] [Love] [Love]

It's been five times. It's really good to read. Wen Qian, written in big letters by this author, is growing up step by step. It's like we are growing up with her in reality. I'm very happy and lucky to read such a big article. It's really beautiful.