Apocalypse Sign-In: Besieged by Zombies

I've seen the update part, and overall it's okay. It kills decisively and is slow to warm up, but there are a few shortcomings: 1. The protagonist has a system in the early stage and is quite good. He took a genetic potion and went to the hospital to kill zombies. He went there to fight alone. In the end, he was dumped by a group of ordinary zombies and almost killed him. Later, he opened some bigger tricks. It finally felt like a cool story! 2. It's not exciting enough. As one of the classic doomsday novels, one of the cool things is buying and hoarding supplies for 0 yuan. What did you end up hoarding? Just some cooked food and some stuff stolen from the supermarket, no medicines or anything like that! 3. The main plot is a bit unclear. The protagonist did not plan to build a power in the early stage, but ended up running around with a group of people. It looked a bit boring, but it became clearer later. After all, the main plot of the doomsday is to build a power or improve strength!

Advantages: The male protagonist has a strong mouth, is not picky about food, is "nutritional and balanced", eats fresh cabbage leaves and old sauerkraut, and is very hard-working; the character description and characterization are relatively sufficient, and some characters pay more attention to details and lines, such as the best supporting actress Li Xiu'e, which is very well written; the narrative is coherent and the ideas are clear; maybe because of the first work, the edges of the writing are not sharp, but it does not affect the readability of the work itself. Disadvantages: There are some loopholes in the knowledge and common sense of many subjects, such as the understanding of military and weapons is not in place; some geographical knowledge has some minor flaws... Of course, apocalyptic literature will have some deviations in common sense to a greater or lesser extent; the timeline of events and events has some deviations and inconsistencies. As a fellow from Feng Province, according to my taste, I can objectively evaluate works with four and a half stars, but I will not hesitate to give them five stars because I love watching them. Looking forward to new works.

It's good-looking. It's not a reborn apocalyptic novel. It doesn't have the classic plots of today's apocalyptic novels. The way of dealing with women from foreign forces is also very novel. The character of each character is also very good. There are not so many brainless villains. So far, I haven't seen any major poisonous points😺👍

The author is a novice, everyone is welcome to support. Thank you readers for your support. If you feel it is okay, I hope you can give the author a good review! This is my first time writing a book, and your feelings are my biggest motivation!

This is the first time I have seen a powerful zombie. I don't know what will happen next, but this is the first big hook at the beginning. The M82A1 large-caliber sniper rifle is a professional anti-materiel sniper rifle that uses NATO 12.7 Mm caliber bullets. NATO countries' tactical positioning of it is a heavy special sniper rifle. Used to attack special targets such as aircraft, tanks, armored vehicles, oil tankers, and radar stations. Usually equipped with high-explosive bombs or armor-piercing bombs. Then you can't kill an early-stage power zombie with ten rounds from a magazine...

It's a pretty good apocalyptic story, at least it's not a community war story [laughs awkwardly]

It's quite to my liking, so I'll give it five stars. The main reason is that other apocalyptic novels are a bit samey. Although this one is not a perfect masterpiece, it is still pretty good, especially since the author did not describe all the strangers as turning evil after the order collapsed, which is still somewhat unflattering. The one thing I'm not very satisfied with is that the most regrettable thing now is that I didn't take in the Qingqing nurse. Maybe it's because my ex-girlfriend was a nurse. It's a bit hard to accept the beautiful description.

Newbie, new book, support with five stars. Originally, I abandoned the book once when I saw the protagonist holding a golden finger and only collecting a bunch of lunch boxes and spending money to slap the female character. Later I couldn't find a good book and picked it up again, hoping that the more I write, the better.

It was quite easy to write. Just don't be bloody in the back.

Okay, okay 😏😏😏 I hope the author will continue to work hard!