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It's really fun to watch. I wonder if the protagonist's strength can be improved so that other guards can't beat it.

Wuhu, reserve a row in advance Many book reviews have been folded? ?

I, King Frieza, can't I pull him? Black Gold Frieza?

Can the author write about Bardock? When I was a kid, my best friend and I grew up watching Dragon Ball and wanted to have an official return of Bardock. However, Dragon Ball Super 2 has not brought him back until now. Can you make arrangements? Thank you thank you

The expressiveness that should be expected in Dragon Ball fan works is good, and it is better than the ones I have seen in the past.

This book is very good, very good. Keep up the good work.

Come on Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Good-looking, imaginative plot, a high-scoring fan work

Five-star praise, very in line with my appetite

This is a very good fan novel, waiting to be released

This is what I read. I think it should be the top ten Dragon Ball novels I have read. Come on, author, I hope your book can get a score of 9

Haokankanxifankan

I dare not say that Dragon Ball is the best, at least it is in the front row [Cool][Cool][Cool]

This is the most unique author I have ever seen. If you have any plans, tell the readers quickly, for fear that readers will misunderstand.

I think it's okay, but I don't need to write too much about the introduction, otherwise you'll already know the plot behind it.

It's pretty good. I hope some comic elements can be added in the future.

I feel it's okay, at least the author's control and description of the battle is pretty good.

Come on, author, write well!

Yes, this combat power is truly inferior to one person and superior to ten thousand people.

This is one of the few good Dragon Ball fan novels I have read.

It's okay so far

It feels okay, really invincible

Vegeta is going to become the White God, the All Sai God [laughing]

Come on! Go at your own pace

Yes, it's rare to find a Dragon Ball novel

Not bad. It's good to have no heroine. Come on